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Ehsaas Part 2,page 3

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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 12:29am | IP Logged

guys i know you are angry with me cuz i ended my other fanfic soon,soon i thought of cooling you down with this fanfic it's called Ehsaas

Promo 1

Sheetal-....ligiye meri kas friend a gaye.

shabbir,prithvi,josh,angad,misty and aaliyah turn around and are shocked to see a girl and the girl is also shocked to see them.

Who is this girl?(who do you thinkWink)

so tell me should i continueCry



Edited by khushi19 - 02 March 2006 at 8:47pm

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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 12:39am | IP Logged
kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Wink but why they are shocked ....she is cute ..not an alien ! LOL ...any ways continue sounds interesting !
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 12:59am | IP Logged

Originally posted by cute_face86

kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Wink but why they are shocked ....she is cute ..not an alien ! LOL ...any ways continue sounds interesting !

thanks alot i will write the first part tomm.and you will knoe why eveyone is shocked tommTongue

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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 2:40am | IP Logged
I AM RLY LOOKING FORWARD TO UR PART TOMORROW!!! AFTER ALL, Y WERE THEY SHOCKED? NEED TO FIND OUT!
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 4:32am | IP Logged
gr88888888888 start plz con soon im sure its kripav
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
i will write the first part in 30 min
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
YAY!!!...UR CONTINUING THE NEXT PART IN FEW MINUTES!!..I CANT WAIT!!...UR FANFICS SOUNDS GR8 AND INTERESTING..PLZZ CONTINUE!!!

Originally posted by khushi19

i will write the first part in 30 min
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Posted: 24 February 2006 at 7:18pm | IP Logged

Part-1

They start of with beautiful sences of U.S. Then slowly we go towards a beautiful hall decorated with lights.We slowly go toward the main hall you see eveyone enjoing themselves.There is a big stage at front.There are two people on the stage,and it's none othere then sheetal(in the show she was kripa's friend and doctor who treated angad when he met with an acciedent while saving kripa's dad) and shabbir.Someone comes from behind and sings.

Someone-Congratulations and celebration.......badme tho mujhe pata nahin.

The person is none other then prithvi.

Shabbir-prithvi.omg.....tum,anyways sheetal yeh hain Mr.Prithvi Bose,my collage friend and my sala.(brother-in-law)

Sheetal-oh,tho tum ho prithvi,hi

Prithvi-hi and congratulation for your engagment.

Sheetal-thanx

Shabbir-well hamari ladli behen our apki wife,Aaliyah kaha hain?

Prithvi-well vo bahar josh aur misty k beach kabab main hadi banrahi hain. LOL

Someone-kya kaha tumne? Angry

There is an angry aaliyah standing there.

Prithvi-kuch nahin,main tho apni wife ki tarif kar raha tha. Ouch(muttering)-tumhare age bolne ki himat mujme tho nahin. Dead

All have a little laugh at this.

Shabbir-well i think ise tho tum janti hi ho,yeh hain meri behen aaliyah.

Sheetal-hi

Aaliyah-hellow.

Prithvi-Vasie josh aue misty kaha her gaye Wink ?

Someone-tumne pukara aur hum chalein ayee

well it's josh and misty..

Shabbir-ayein aphi ka intzaar ho raha tha,sheetal yeh hain.......(interupted by josh)

Josh-apne interdution main kud dunga hi main hun josh kapoor,hum collage friends hain.aur yeh hain misty my sweet wife and prithvi ki behen.

Aaliyah(sadly Unhappy )tum logo ko kisi ki kami mehsus nahin hoti?

Josh(also sad Unhappy )main janta hum tum kiski baat kar rahi ho.

Prithvi-well vo kami bhi puri hogyee.

Eveyone confused-kya matlab Confused

Prithvi-piche dakho

Eveyone looks behind.finally it's out hero angad. 


Angad comes to the stage

Prithvi-angad tumhe itne der kyu hue?

Angad-vo mujhe kuch kaam tha.anyways conratulation to both of you.

Shabbir and Sheetal-thankx

Shabbir-sheetal,yeh hain angad mera cusine yeh bhi hamare saath padta tha aur ab london move hogaya hain.

Sheetal-kahin ap Khanna fashion se Angad Khanna tho nahin?

Angad-ha main vahi hun.

Sheetal-maine apke bare main bohot kuch suna hain. Tongue

Angad-really? Embarrassed well thankx

The conversation keeps on going.The engament is at full swing.Eveything was going great.But sheetal was looknig for someone.Everone notices this.

Misty-kya hua sheetal kise dund rahi ho? Confused

Sheetal-vo actually aj meri ak kaas friend canada se ane wali thi,lakin abhi tak ayee nahin. Disapprove

Just then sheetal see someone.

Sheetal-ligiyein meri kaah friend agye.

Everyone turn around and are shoucked to see kripa!!!!!
Just then kripa also notices them she was just as shocked to see them. 

hope you liked the frist part Confused pls write comments Cry



Edited by khushi19 - 24 February 2006 at 7:20pm

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