OS Virika- Wot if Jeevika got shot by Mr Jaiswel? | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

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maryumtalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

FF Virika OS - This one has two parts.. THIS IS PART ONE!

Jeevika accidently gets shot by Mr Jaiswel... everyone freezes- Jaiswel and his men have already fled the scene. You could hear the pin drop.. Manvi runs to Jeevika... Viren still frozen on the floor thinking how could the bullet miss him? He looks back and realises what just happened.. a tear rolls down his face. He pulls himself up and falls next to Jeevika and holds her.. The ambulance on the way. 'Tumko kuch nahin hoga Jeevika' - he cries... Jeevika eyes well up and the blood on her hands touch his face.. 'shukar hai ke mujko lagi aur tumko nahin' ... -Viren kisses her.. 'Yeh mat kaho mein tumhaari bina nahin ji sakta kabhi nahin!'

A week later:
Viren: Virattt mera file nahin doondraha.. kahaan hai? viren shouts from the bathroom...
He walks into the bedroom and sees Jeevika try to get his file but unable to get up.
Viren rushes to her hold her..
Viren: Jeevika mein tumko bataaya na ke mat utna!! mein karonga !Mujko heart attack mat dena.
Jeevika laughs and viren tucks her back in the bed.
Jeevika: Hello Mr Heartattack
Viren smiles at her teasing him and touches her nose playfully.
Virens mobile rings and he answers...his face changes from happy to intense..
Viren on fone: WHAT , WHAT DO U MEAN U HAVEN'T GOT THAT bas***d?!!
Mujko usko chaahiye OK!!!
Jeevika gets worried but Viren slams his fone and hits his risk on the wall shaking Jeevika..
Jeevika quickly sits up and grabs his hand looking at his risk.--
Jeevika: Viren tum yeh kya kar rahe ho?
Viren pulls his hand away..
Viren: Mujko kaam hai..
He tries to walk away and Jeevika again tries to get up to stop him she manages to grab his arm but falls slightly...
Viren holds her up and pulls her to him in frustration...
Viren: Jeevika tum sunte kyun nahin?!
He puts her back on the bed.. Jeevika gets upset..
Jeevika: Tum voh Mr Jaiswel ko doond rahe hena? she looks at him intently
Viren tries to avoid her gaze..
Viren : Haan...
Jeevika lashes out..
Jeevika: Maine kahan tum kuch na khar!! Agar voh tumhaare saath..

Viren cuts her off and this time pulls her up to hm.. he hold her face close to his.
Never has she seen so much anger in his eyes for Mr Jaiswel but yet his fear of losing her.
Viren: mujko much nahin hoga.. lekin mein us jaiswel ko chor nahin sakta! kabhi nahin jeevika! jo voh tumhaare saath ki.. mein kabhi chain se nahin rahonga! Maronga mein usse... ... his eyes well up and he storms out. Leaving Jeevika left with his words and his touch lingering on her .

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow absolutely amazing u write so Gus plzz uPdate soon and plz pm me

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juleika

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow amazing..do update soon..!! :)

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maryumtalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you Julz and Brykn gal - Will deffo PM u both when part 2 is up. :)

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MariQuestFilms

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW sarah.. Brilliantly written I could so see it! Amazing... Can't wait for part 2! PM me too. thanks.

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maryumtalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART TWO: Contination and last part to this OS. :P

Jeevika looks at the time-- Its 12am and Viren still isn't home. She gets out of the bed slowly feeling slightly better then before when she fell in Viren's arms. She looks around and sees the pouring rain gushing in the dark and remembers all he said to her. A worry frowns on her knowing Viren is putting himself in danger for her. Since that day she accidently got shot by Jaiswel - Viren is determined to find him and make him pay! Viren tum kahaan ho - She thinks, as she tries to ring him. She sighs and quickly covers up to go outside. She walks out of the room and bumps into Virat.Tum kahaan ja rahi ho Bhabhi? - Jeevika's eyes well up... Viren kahaan hai Virat? Tumko pata? Mujhe usko milna hai.. abhi se abhi.. voh abhi tak ghar nahin aaya..

Virat gets worried too.. OK bhabhi main tumko le chalta hoon.. bhai office mein shayad. Tum preshaan mat ho. Chalo.

They both go in the car reaching viren's office. Virat tells Jeevika to wait in the car. He runs inside the building... But Jeevika doesn't wait for long. She gets out of the car.. the rain roars.. she looks around trying to see if she can see Viren's car.. As she look's into the corner behind the building she sees a glimpse of Viren standing in the empty BB court. But she can't see clearly.. she run's towards him... 'Viren!' But he doesn't hear her. As she gets closer she freezes as she sees Jaiswel and his boys on the opposite direction of the court holding weapons. She panics... tears rolling down as she watches trying to get closer to him slowly.

Viren to Mr Jaiswel.. :Agar tumko himat hai.. toh mere saath haath ke saath maro!

Jaiswel laughs and looks at his boys.

Arre Viren sahab tum mujko kaise maroge.. hum toh bas tumko hi maroge. Bahot bahot galti hui ke hum tumhaare biwi ko goli maari..

Jaiswel laughs sarcastically and Viren's blood boils.. His fists start clenching and Jeevika can see the boys holding bats ready to get Viren. She quickly helpless looks back at Virats car to see if he may be there but he isn't. Kya karoon mein?!! She thinks.. She gets her mobile out and tries to dial for the police shaking drenched. The keys aren't dialing properly... She shakes it and drops it on the floor.. it starts ringing loudly... her eyes widen as Jaiswel and his boys notice the noise.

Jaiswels chamcha looks back: Sahab!? Lagta hai koi hai vahaan pe (Pointing in the corner nearby where Jeevika is hiding)

Jeevika moves back to the wall as her breathing fastens...

Viren tries to distract Jaiswel.. Arre tum mujhe marne wale the na? Lagta hai tum kuch akele nahin kar sakte hamesha tumhaare CHAMCHE ke saath rehte ho! MARO MUJHE??? Go on! he instigates Jaiswel.. Jaiswel tries to punch Viren but misses and Viren punches Jaiswel to the ground. The boys are just about to come after Viren but the police siren wails nearby - One man grabs Jaiswel.. Jaiswel gives Viren a stare of death.. NAHIN CHORUNGA MEIN TUJHE! He shouts before running...

The rain continues to pour Viren stands there in the BB court and looks up.. although he knows it isn't all over with Jaiswel just yet. He was happy just thinking about Jeevika and knowing he could do anything for her. Suddenly before he could look back he hears her voice..

'VIREN!!' - She runs into his arms and hugs him passionately.. He embraces her tightly as the rain continues to pour. Her tears roll down as a relief that nothing happened to Viren. She melts in his chest... and he kisses her forehead...

She then looks up at him and cups his head...

Viren! Maine bataaya na.. ke tum aisa mat karo!! Kya tum mujhe heart attack dena chahte ho?! Huh? - She kisses his forehead...

He smiles... and touches her wet cheek and rubs it - Meri Mrs Heart attack!... - She laughs slightly and hits him on the chest as they embrace again...

Jeevika: Main tumse bahot pyaar karti hoon Viren She says closing her eyes in the moment..

Viren: Main bhi.. Khud se zyaada.

They stand there with the rain and just them... although nothing was always easy. They had eachother thats all that mattered.

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maryumtalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks so much Mari!! PMED all who wanted to be.

enjoy everyone.. and do comment. :)

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SugarCubes

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww.. Dats so cute nd adorable!! Luvd it!! It's amazing!!

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maryumtalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Dancedevil
Aww.. Dats so cute nd adorable!! Luvd it!! It's amazing!!

Thank you!!

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juleika

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome girl..love it..:)

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