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Posted: 12 years ago
Manal VirMan SR kab update karengi😍Im dying to read ur version of VirMan SR🀣
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thnks guys <3 

@Lumz 🀣 Was sick ! so will update tmorz <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -AdiYalicious-

thnks guys <3 


@Lumz 🀣 Was sick ! so will update tmorz <3

 
Oops sorry i dint know that!!Nw take ur time nd write i will deffo read it evn if it take weeks... after all VirMan SR hai😳🀣
 
Nw hw are u??Take rest nd write afterwards hun😊
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im so much better now πŸ€— !! 
thnks 

tomorz pakka 🀣 

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Posted: 12 years ago
manal yaar!!!!!!

update karna, u are taking tooo long!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god I seriously lived the first update πŸ˜ƒ You write beautifully πŸ‘ Take care 😊 And please pm me when u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it dear... update the next part soon πŸ˜Š
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hey just loved it & plzzz pm me the nxt tym
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sorry guys no chappals 🀣 ! ALMOST finished wid next part !! was sick !! n today in school ! was quite busy !:( !! 
tomorz or by tonite pakka <3 


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Posted: 12 years ago
So Part 2 🀣 ! U can kill me 🀣 
it sucks 🀣 !! the onli part i enjoyed writting was VirMan Nok Jok even on their SR 🀣 ! n thn the morning afta πŸ˜‰ !! the SR part sucks 🀣 as honestly its hard to imagine this now 😲 🀣 !! 



anyways here 🀣 


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Part2 

Manvi who was sitting on the flower bed, hiding her face under the gungat. Waiting for virat to take the gungat, but she was waiting but like he was no more in the room, it was quite, she thought he was no more here, so slow pulled her gungat up, looked around the room but he wasnt there untill she saw on her right side and HE WAS SLEEPING this annoyed her, she looks away and says: acha ji! Yahan mein itne dair se intezaar kar rahi hoon aur... Aur yeh CHEP akar sau gaya... ( untill she picks the pillow and hits him hard, virat who was pretending to sleep wakes up and says : ouch bandariya! Sharam nahin hai kya? Aise koi treat karta hai apni PATI DEV ko! Seeko ! Seeko kuch babhi se!
Manvi: acha ji babhi ke chamche! ( and starts hitting him harder) virat was enjoying the annoyed manvi, who was looking innocently cute angry, and finally holds her hand to stop.
Manvi: actually u know what! GO back to sleep! Tum pati hote hi aise! Shadi se pehle I LOVE YOU ! I LOVE YOU! and now awready BORED ! ( and gets up aNnoyed and walk to the window! Virat who was sittin on the smiling as he loves it when his bandariya is annouyed @ him ! She just looks even cuter. He walks to her and says : aye bandariya naraz hai ( he says by placing hi hand on her shoulder, but annouyed manvi pushes him away )
Manvi: tum chep ho aur hamesha rahoge!
Virat: aur tum bandariya aur hamesha rahoge ! ( this annoyed her more)
Manvi: OMG tum... Tum ... Argh sorry kehne ke bajaye! Tum itne attitude dika rahe ho! Arghh go to hell! 
Virat: ufff sorry? U should say sorry mujhe neend se utane ke liye!
Manvi: acha.. Toh jao sau jao! Meine tumhe nahin kah yahan aane ko! 
Virat: FINE! ( and walks towards his bed)
Manvi standing there : yeh toh sach mein sau gaya argh( and turns around and is lost in the beautiful sky, filled with stars, the breeze was hitting her and its like all her anger is gone! She stood there enjoying the cold breeze untill felt a hand around her waist! She knew it was him! She turns around to shout @ him again, untill he places his fingers on her lips)
Virat: shhh ( with a romantic tone) aur kuch nahin... 
Manvi who was breathing hard and says : virat let go me...
Virat: chorne ke liye nahin pakra! Ab toh tum meri official bandariya ho!
Manvi: virat! Koi ajayega!
Virat: aane do ! Mujhe haq hai !

Manvi was blushing untill she pushes him away to run away untill he holds her hand tight and pulls her towards him, they so close! Manvi starts breathing harder! He comes closer to her, her lips were shiverin! She closes her eyes! Virat who was close to kiss her but stopped and was smiling lookin @ her innocent face, holds her face, slowly kisses both her eyes, which made her hold her lehenga tight! He saw it and he placed his hand on her held it tight. She couldnt control anymore and hugged him tight. He opens her hair and removes it from her naked back which is onli covered with 3 dori's, he kissed her bare neck, with opening 1 dori, which madr her hug him even tighter, he starting playing with her naked back with his finger, which made her push him away and run away laughing!
Virat : acha bandariya! Kidhar tak bago ge! ( and starts running after her and untill he stopped her by holding her dupata. He started going closer to her and placed his hand around her waist and untucked her dupata, she wanted to walk away buh he pulled her closer to her by waist, and started kissin her neck, she blushed n tried to move buh he held her hand and started kissing and thn he carried her in his arms, manvi who had her arms around him tight with closed eyes, virat was smiling lookin @ his bandariya, so close to him , yet blushing and he kissed her forhead, which bought a shy smile on her face, he took her to thr bed and placed her on the bed like a princess. He placed her dupata over her, putting the gungat on her, like his bride, he sat next to her, he took his finger playin around her leg, tickling her and removed her payal and thn he reached to her hand by removing all her chudi's and placing a kiss, he took her gungat up, lookin @ her still her eyes closed but yet blushing,he reaced to her neck, slowly removed all herr jewelery and this made him hug him tight, and he opened her last dori and layed her down, removing his shervani, 
Virat in a slow romantic tone: aye bandariya ko sharam bhi aata hai ( and went over her, looking @ her shivering lips, and placed a kiss, which made her put her hands around her and BANG light off 🀣
the sunshined in the morning, and the morning light woke manvi up, who was covered around a white clothe. She opened her eyes smiling, n looked @ her virat, sleeping so calmly, she sat straight n looked at him smiling, and placed a kiss on his cheek saying : Good Morning chep, ( by playin with his hair, she saw the time and it was late) 
Manvi: shit! Itna late, swamini bua toh mar dalegi mujhe aaj( and wanted to get up buh realized virats hands around her, and smiled and removed his hand slowly without disturbing him, and when she did that and wanted to get up, she felt a force pulling ber towards him and around his arms!
Manvi: virat! Jaane do! Baut late hogaya hai!
Virat: hone do! Meri neend puri nahin huwi ab tak!
Manvi: acha ji n starts tickling him and saying : tumhe kya bua mujhr par gussa hogi! Ab mujhe jaane do fresh hona hai! Aur phir tumhe bhi jaana hoga!
Virat: haan mujhe bhi jaana hai but with you and carried het n took her to the washroom and threw her in the tub!
Manvi wore her hot pink saree and quickly getting ready and noticed her dori was untied! And wanted to tie but virat stoped her and started tieing it! And then put his arms around her and both looking into the mirror saying : PICTURE PERFECT! and smiled! 
He helped her wearin her jewellery and put her mangalsutra around her and placed sindoor on her forhead! A bit dropped on her nose! And annouyed manvi, punched him on his chest saying : arghh sara sindoor bigar diya  virat laughed seein her kido mannu n cleaned her nose and both hugged! 
The whole vadhera family sittin in the family area where jeevika was surving thm tea and our newly wedded couple were coming downstairs where virat keep holdin her hand but shy mannu let go it n runs downstairs and starts taking dada ji, vanshika n bua's ashirvaad.
Jeevika sees a big smile on her little mannu is happy seeing her small baby sis finalky married and teases her saying : ayee kya chamak hai aaj iss chehre mein 
Shy mannu blushes and says : Di 
Virat : comes downstairs and every1 is laughing n teasing him : aaj toh sahan zade itne jaldi utgaye...