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Posted: 18 years ago
really grt one full marks to u 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
next ;baskeball mach ,bani and pushkar phir se milte hai or pia...


next day

bani sabh se phele uthi hai vo breakfirst bana thi hai
phir rano uthi hai vo tayar othi hai or niche athi hai

bani : rano pia kho utahana
rano : di apko pata hai na vo itni asani se nahin uthi or phir jab nahin uthi tho mujhe bohat ghusa atha hai or
bani : ok ok main hi jaati hoon
bani upar jati hai pia so rahi hoti hai

bani : pia utho
pia : sone do na di
bani : utho na college jaana hai
pia : please diii
bani : pia please ... ok tho ladkon se nahin milna

pia ek dum se uthi hai

pia : ok ok tayar hoti hon

college ,

koi ladke pia ko dekh rahai hote hai kyunki usne yeh pena hota hai


koi ladke siti marte hai

rano kho basketball kha hall dikhai deta hai
rano : di hum bad main milte hai
bani : kider ja rahi ho
rano : india main hi hoon fikar mat karo

rano us hall main jaati hai usko ek ball milta hai or vo kelna churu karti hai
ek 3 ladke andhar athe vo sahil otha hai or uske 23 friend rohit or tony

sahil rano kho dkh tha hai or kheta hai
sahil : acha miss narazu ider a gahi

rano piche dekhti hai

rano : tum
sahil : yes main or us ball khe saat khelna band karo tum ladkyon khi bas khi bath nahin hai nakhon tut jahai ga
rano : (angry) tho kya tum dafar khe liye hai kiya

rohit gigles
😆
sahil : tumse tho acha khel leta hoon i am sure
rano : acha tho match ho jahai
sahil : rene do tumain lag jahai ghi
rano : dar rahai ho khe ek ladki tumain arahai
sahil : pss yeh khabi o hi nahin sakta
rano : tho mach ho jahai
sahil : tum mujhe chalenge kar rahi ho
rano : yes
sahil : agar main jeeta tho?
rano : tho jo tum kaho main karon ghi
sahil : mmm are you sure
rano : yes lekin a gar main jeete to jo main kahon tumein karna hoga
sahil : ok

rohit : ok jab classe ke liye bell baje ghi mach khatam or jiske ziada marks hoge vo jeeta
s and r : done
sahil : so sweety ready
rano : don't call me sweety
sahil : ok miss narazu
ranu : rrrrrrrr (angry) 😡

tony : 3 , 2 1
rohit : go

sahil or rano game shuru karte hai baal sahil ke pass hota hai

sahil : c'mon sweety har ke liye tayar ho
uske haat se baal leti hai
rano : khabi nahin

tabhi kuch log andar athe hai un main bani or pia hote hai sahil or rano khel rahai hote hai

bani : uff ider bhi shuru ho gahi
pia sahil kho dekhti hai
pia : yeh ladka kitna sexy hai na
bani : pia shuru mat hona
pia : ok ok

pia :: (scream) c'mon rano c'mon
bani : aisa kar khe tum use rokh nahin rahi
pia : bani di abhi mach churu ho gaya hai isko rokh nahin sakte

rano abhi ek point jeet gahi hai

rano : so mister akru khon arne ki tayari kar raha hai
sahil : hey miss narazu abhi tak bell nahin baji
rano : phir bhi ar jaho ghe
sahil : dekhe ghe sweety

sahil baal leta hai phir rano phir se sahil or sahil bhi ek point mark karta hai

rohit : ok abhi egality hai

s and r : shut up amain pata hai (poor rohit)
😆

rohit : ok relax yaar

pushkar atha hai

pushkar : uff abh yeh kya kar raha hai
sahil : ho bahi abh bhi dekho

pushkar : kya yaar ek ladki khe saat shart
sahil : please bahi

pushkar kho bani nazar athi hai
pushkar : banii meri sapno ki rani

pushkar bani kho hi karta hai bani usko dekhti hai or vo bhi hi karti hai

pia: yeh khon hai
bani : tumain yaad hai maine tumse kaha tha ki kisine mera purse china tha tho isi ne wapas lekar aya tha
pia : ho (thinking) he is cute

pushkar bani ke pass atha hai lekin pia kho nahin dekhta

pia : hi
pushkar : (usko dekhta bhinahin hai) ya hi
pia kha mum drop ho jaata hai

pia : (thinking) isne tho mujhe dekha hi nahin

back to rano and sahil

abhi thak egality hai

phir bell bajta hai

rano : shit bell bajgai
sahil : (thinking) acha khel leti hai
tony : abh jab egality hai tho shart cancel

sahil : ya khoi baat nahin anyway
sahil : mujhse dosti karoghi
rano : hum...no main akru se dosti nahin karti
sahil : what 😆
rano : by
sahil : naam tho bata de
rano : no

rano wahan se jaati hai

bani pushkar khi class main hai

pushkar : bani mujhse dosti karo ghi
bani : hummmm
pushkar : please or mere dost khete hai main bohut acha dost hu
bani : (smile) ok
pushkar : cool tho mere pass bheto
bani : sorry lekin maine riya se promise kiya tha ki ajh main uske saat beton ghi

(riya or bani ki dosti subha hi huwi thi)
pushkar : (sad) ok

rano or pia ek hi class main hoti hai kyunki rano ne itni achi parahi khi khe vo ek class upar chali gahi

sabh bete hai pia or rano teacher ke pass othi hai (teacher mrs mittal)

mrs mittal : ok bachon apki class main do new student ahi hai

iss class main sahil hota hai vo rano kho dekhta hai or usko hand marta hai rano usko angry look deti hai
mrs mittal : inko hello karo
everyone : hello
sahil : madam inka naam kiya hai (rano kho dekh kar)

mrs mittal : kiya naam hai
pia : pia kapoor
koi student usko hank marte hai or usko dekhta hai

mrs mittal : or tumara (pointing rano)
rano sahil kho dekhti hai
rano : rano kapoor

sahil usko win look deta hai kyunki usko uska naam pata chal gaya
mrs : ok so pia tum udhar beto ghi (ek ladki khe pass)
pia : ok
mrs mittal : ok rano tum vahan sahil khe pass sirf yeh jaaga rahai gahi hai
rano : what uske pass
mrs : koi problem
rano : no madam

rano sahil khe pass bethi hai
sahil : cute name rano
rano : u shut up
sahil : relax miss narazu jaab tarik bhi karte hai khusa hoti hai
rano : tho kiya tumain thanx kahon
sahil : kyun kaine se maar jaho ghi kya
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Posted: 18 years ago
shyad ajj continu karon ya khal karon ghi please comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
raj office se nikhal tha hai when he bump into someone
raj and man : sorrt
raj : jai tum
jai : raj mere yaar kaise ho
ek dusre kho hug karte hai
raj : thik hon or tum
jai : main thik hon lekin tumse naraz hoon
raj : kyun maine kiya kia
jai : tum india main ho or mujhse milne bhi nahin aya
raj : sorry yaar vaise bhi main abhi sirf 2 3 din o gaya hai india ahai uwe
jai : tho bata kaisi tumari tin betiyen
raj : thik hai , or vo tumari tin chote bete
jai : chote khab abh ro bare ho gahain hai
raj : haan so tho honge
jai : aise kar shaam kho ghar aja
raj :ok
jai : or tinon kho apne saat lana
raj : yes sir
jai laugh
raj : ok shaam kho milte hai


kapoor house

raj : ok suno shaam ko hum mere purne dost khe ghar jaa rahai hai
rano : mujhe jaana zaruri hai kya
raj :yes sab jha rahai ok

walia house

pushkar 's room

pushkar bani khe bare main soch raha hota hai sahil akhe pushkar khe bed main jump marta hai
sahil : so bahi us ladki khe bare main soch rahe ho na
pushkar : haan...
sahil : tho college main mili
push : kabse mil...

jai : PUSHKAR SAHIL niche aho
sahil : yes dad
sahil : chalo bahi
pushkar tu chal main abhi a raha hon
sahil : ok

sahil niche jaata hai
pushkar bhi atha hai upar se niche dekhta hai usko bani nazar athi hai
pushkar : (thinking) ar tara mujhe bani dikhahi de rahi hai abh ye h kaise ho sakta hai ki vo mere ghar main ho
apne sar par ath per tha hai

jai : PUSHKAR aho kisi se milvana hai
pushkar niche atha hai
jai : ise milo mera dost raj or yeh uski beti bani
pushkar : what main sapna nahin dekh raha tha
jai : kiya
pushkar : (chera pura red ho jata hai) kuch nahin
bani : ho main pushkar kho janti hoon hum ek hi class main parte hai
raj : ho acha

jigs or sonali athe hai bani uske pahon chuti hai jig s or sonali kho bani achi lagi

jig s : jeete raho
sonali : ho raj bahi saab
raj : ho kaise ho bhabi
sonali : thik hoon itne salon baat
jai : raj tumari do or beti thi na
raj : thi kya hai
jai : hai tho kider hai
raj : vo abhi a rahi hai

pia athi hai

pia : hi everyone
bani : usk chota sa daka deti hai
pia : i mean namaste
pia : (bani ke khan main) thik hai na jee
raj :pia beti tumari behan kider hai
pia : hu...abhi tho mere saat thi

jai : sahil jakar dekh khar aho
sahil : yes dad
sahil jaata hai

raj : vaise tumara ek tisra beta nahin tha krish
jai : haan hai vo kuch meating khe liye calcutte gaya hai
raj : va kiya baat hai abhi se bissness samal raha hai
jai : akhir beta kiska hai
sonali : mera
everyone laugh


sahil nikhal ne hi lagta hai ki vo kisi khi andhar bump karta hai of course amari rano
rano : dekh kar nahin chal sakta kiya
rano or sahil ek dusre ko dekhte hai
r and s : (shocked) TUM
sahil : va main tumain itna acha lagta hoon khi meri ghar ponch gahi
rano : hoooo u shut up
sahil : chalo sweety saab tumara intezaar khar rahai hai
rano : atho oulu

sahil : oulu or main
rano vahan se chali gahi hoti hai
rano sabh khe per chuti hai


pia pushy ko dekhti hai
pia : (thinking) kitna sexy hai lekin yeh phela ladka hai jo meri taraf nahin dekhta koi baat nahin i will get him

saab bhat karte hai anu rano pia or bani khi chi dost ban jaati hai
sonali or jigs tabla laga rahi hoti hai or bani unki madat karne a jati hai

jigs : are beti choro main kar leti hoon tum meman ho beto
bani : aunty abh mujhe beti kheti ho na
jigs : (confused look to sonali) haan beta
bani : tho karne do mujhe madat
rano bhi unki madat karti hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
table par
pia bani or rano saat bete hai bani ke samne pushkarhota hai or rano khe samne sahil pia khe samne anu
rano : (bani khe khan main) mujhe is mandar khe samne hi bethna tha kya
bani : rano tumain use problem kiya hai
rano kuch nahin choro
rano to pia : pia main tumari jaga a sakti hoon kiya
pia : kyun
rano :uff ...ha sakti hoon ya nahin
pia :ok
rano uthne ldthi hai khe
sahil : kider ja rahi ho rano
rano : vo main ...kahin nahin
rano phir se bhet jaati jai

3 din baad pushkar or bani ache dost ban gahai hote hai pushkar pia se itna karibh nahin hai ,rano abhi takh
sahil se jagra karti hai

college ,
pushkar beta hai or phir bani athi hai vo riya khe pass behtne lagti hai phir sochti hai khe pushkar ne bhi usse pusha tha ek din
so vo pushkar khe paas bethi hai pushkar bohat otha hai

pushkar : ajh mere paas kaise beth gahi
bani : agar chaho tho riya khe paas beth jaati hoon
pushkar :noooooooooooo
bani smile


bani pia pushy ki class
sport teacher khe saat sport teacher bilkul apne student khi tara hai unke saat asti hai uska naam miss jessica suri or uske student usko jessi bhula sakte hai

jessi : ok so jaise aph saab kho pata hai ar saal khi tara dance compitation hogi
everyone : yeahhh (sirf rano khuch nahin kaiti hai)

jessi : ok tho ye basket dekh rahai ho
ranno to sahil : tumain dikhahi de raha hai na kyunki tumari nazar itni kharabh ai na
sahil : main tumse ek chiz puchon
rano : nn...
sahil : pata hai tum nahin hi kaho ghi
raho : (usko khane ke liya ki vo ghalath hai) maine nahin nahin kaha pucho
sahil : waou any way tum mujhse jagra kyun karti ho
rano : because...
sahil : because what
rano : tumari chakal nahin pasand kush abhi suno teacher khi baat

jessi : tho ek basket main ladkyon kha naam hai or ar ladka akhe ek chit le gha or jiss ladki kha naam hoga vo uski partner hogi
rano : yuck
sahil : kya uwa tumain ladke nahin pasand tum ko ladki pasand hai kiya
rano : ha ha very funny

phela : ladka : (thinking) uss sexy pia khe saat ho
ek chit leta hai
ladka : (sad) bavna
ar koi guzarta hai
pia ek rohit khe saat hoti hai

sahil khi bari
rano : (thinking) please khe main nahin hoon pleaseee
sahil leta hai
sahil : (smile) miss narazu
jessi : yeh khon hai
sahil :i mean rano hi sweety
rano : ew iss dafar khe saat

jessi : sorry its rule tum change nahin ar sakti
sahil : kush nasibh samjo apne app kho sari ladkiyen mere saat hone khe liya taras thi hai
rano : sorry sari nahin main nahin

jessi laugh

so app saab kho 9 din hai
everyone : what sirf 9 day

jessi : i now khi kham hai lekin phir mujhe select karna hai pr phir bahat main dusre collge khe saat compitition hai

sahil : tumain nachna nahin atha hoga haina
rano : o please i am sure main tumse acha dance kar ti hoon
sahil : ho ya
rano : yeah
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8..awesome!!!!!!!!!! plz continue!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part...plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
afternoon

bani : tho pushkar shaam a rahai ho na
pushkar : kider
bani : papa ne tum or tumari familly kho bulaya hai diner pe
pushkar : ho sakta hai papa bhul gahai ho mujhse bata ne khe liya
sahil : oops
pushkar : kya
sahil : vo papa ne mujhse kaha tha tumse bata ne khe liye lekin bhul gaya
pushar : koi baat nahin tumara brain hi jho kam hai
sahil :bahiiii
bani smile :vaise rano or pia kider hai
sahil: pia apne patner ke saat reasels kar rahi hai
bani : hu kiss chiz khi
sahil : vo kiya hai na humare class main ek dance competition a raha hai tho jo sabse acha dance kare gha vo hi selected ho gha
pushkar : or tum kiske saat ho
sahil : miss narazu rano
bani : what(shock) usne tumain haan kaha
sahil : khana para teacher ne ek basket main naam lagahai the or main uske naam kha chit liya or rules kheti hai no change
bani : haila bachke rena rano bohut khusa karti hai
sahil : i now mujhe samaj nahin atha vo aise kyun hai main huse dosti khe liye pushta hoon tho ghusa karti hai
bani : use ghalat maat samaj na lekin jabse mama dead ho gahi tho vo (tear roll from her eyes)

sahil : sorry
bani : nahin tumari ghalati nahin hai pata nahin jhab vo apni feelings dikhahi ghi
sahil : vaise pia se bilkul opposite hai
bani :(smile) i now
sahil : (thinking) main tumari feelings vapas lahon gaha miss narazu (lol)

pushkar : ok shaam kho milte hai
bani : ya bahi
tabhi rano athi hai pia khe saat
sahil : by miss narazu
rano give him a killing look

sahil smile

shaam kho

pia pushkar khe pass beti hai
pia : hi pushkar
pushkar : hi
pia : kaise ho (whit romantic voice)
pushkar : thik hoon hor tum
pia : cool
pushkar : bani kider hai
pia : kichen main khaana paka rahi hai (thinking) rrrr meri taraf dekh hi nahin raha

raj : pia rano kho bulao
pia : yeah dad

pia uthi hai jab sahil usse kheta hai
sahil : pia main jaon
pia : ok honey uska room vo hai
sahil : thanks sweety hey or toilet khider hai
pia : vahan
sahil : ok

kitchen main
pushkar atha hai bani cooking kar rahi hoti hai she look so naturel pushkar usko dekhta hi rahai jaata hai phir bani usko dekhti hai
bani : ho pushkar tum
pushkar : hu...haan main kuch madat karon
bani : nahin tum betho hall main
pushkar : please please kush madat karne do na (puppy face)
bani : hum ok tum hum yeh sauce hilaho
pushkar : ok

pushkar sauce hilatha hai khi uski ongli tori se jaalti hai
pushkar : haaaa jal gayaa

bani jaldi se haati hai or uski ongli kho dekhti hai
bani : (pareshan) thikk tho hona tumbi na dekh kar nahin kar sakte maine kaha tha na hall main betho yeh sab nahin hota
pushkar usko dekh kar khush hota hai vo uske bohut karbh atha hai bani phir jaab usko dekhthi vo dono bohat kharibh hote hai
ek dusre khe ankhon main ghum ho jate hai phir jigs bulati hai
jigs : pushkar bete

bani jaldi se use alag hoti hai or dusri taraf dekhti hai

pushkar jaata hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
continue soon its great 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok so rano and sahil

sahil rano kh room main atha hai rano khitabh parr rahi hoti hai tho vo dayan nahin deti khi vo sahil hota hai sochti hai pia hai
rano : kiya chaye pia
sahil uske pass atha hai
sahil : kool room miss narazu
uski kitabh leta hai
rano : tum ...tum mere room main kiya kar rahai ho
sahil : ho yeh khitabh tho maine ekh baar pari thi ko killer uska bahi hota hai
rano :rrrrr get outttt
sahil : hoye miss calm down khabi pyar se bhi baat kar sakti ho
rano : tumse let me think ...nahin
sahil : tumain uncle niche bula rahai hai
rano : shit mujhe di khi madat karni thi
sahil : anyway wo dance khe liye hum khal shuru kare ghe
rano : khal college nahin hai saturday hai
sahil : so kya uwa sweety reasel kahin bhi kar sakte hai ya phir darti ho mere saat rene kha
rano : main or tumse daron kabhi nahin
sahil : dekhen dekhen ... vaise bhi hum ek sport haal main jahain ghe vahan or kuch log hoge
rano : get out abh

dono niche jaate hai

pia or rano table laga thi hai saab bethe hai
sahil rano kho apne per se table khe niche tang kar raha hota hai rano usko zor kha kick karti hai
sahil : haaa
sonali : kya uwa beta
sahil : kuch nahin (give to rano a killing loog)
rano smile (i am the best smile)
sahil : chalo smile tho kiya
rano phir angry hoti

jigs : yeh khana bohut acha baka hai
sonali : yeah i love it
raj : akhir banaya kisne hai meri beti ne na
jai : waou delicious bani
bani : thanks

bani ne pushkar se ziada baat nahinkhi

raat kho jaab sabh chale gahai hote hai
bani 's room
bani pushkar khe bare main sochti hai
bani : yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai main pushkar khe bare main kyun soch rahin hoon
phir ek or bani appear hoti hai

bani 1 : bani
bani : tum
bani 1: haan main tum hoon tum yeh soch rahi ho na khe tum pushkar khe bare main kyun soch rahi ho
bani : haan kyun
bani 1 : apne ankhe band karo or dekho tumain kiya nazar atha hai
bani apne hankhe band karti hai or usko pushkar nazar atha hai
bani 1 : pushkar na
bani : haan kahin mujhe...
bani 1 : haan tumain pushkar se pyar ho gaya hai
bani : lekin mujhe nahin pata agar vo mujhse pyaar karta hai
bani 1 : ar you sure
bani : i...

dusri bani chali jaati hai

pushkar 's room

pushkar : main bani se pyaar karta hoon lekin vo karti hai ya nahin
pushkar 1 : hi pushky
pushkar : tum
pushkar 1 :haan main ...tum bani se pyar karte ho na
pushky : haan lekin vo pyar karti hai y nahin pata nahin
pushky 1 : tho usse pucho isse phele khe derr ho jahai apne pyar kha izrar karo
pushky 1 chala jaata hai

pushkar : (thinking) kaal mela hai main usko udhar lekar jahon gha or usko khe doon gha