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Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
GUyzzz Niharika is neha...Nd dat adhi thing..sry jldi me maine naam galat post krdiya tha..Nd Kria's bike yaane..scooty guyzzz...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Edited by sweetsultana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
its fantabulous sultana. Just PM me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
aw nice yar i liked very much plz con soon !
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Posted: 12 years ago
WHEN WILL U UPDATE NEXT PART
AND THIS WAS AWESOME 
SUPER DUPER
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Posted: 12 years ago

awww hahahha cher khani bhi hogayi hai kya baat kya baat kya baat!!! love it can't wait for nxt chapter!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
great job 
cant wait 4 da next 1😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
VERY CUTE...VERY VERY CUTE...BUT U FORGOT TO PM ME... :( :( :( :( πŸ˜”
ANYWAYS UPDATE SOON AND PLZ DNT FORGET TO PM ME...
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fabulous and awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's awesum!!!! Rey, how sweet!!!!!!!!!! Luvd it!!! U dnt pm ne!! :( plz cntinu soon nd pm me.. It was amazing!!! :D


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Posted: 12 years ago

Rey while riding his bike...Vicky sitting behind

Rey: Humming song...Pehli pehli baar jab pyar kisi se hota hai...😳

Vicky: shockd...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

ReY: wats wrng wid u bro...😲Pagal kutte ne kaat liya kya?

Vicky: nopes..Tre song ne kaat liya.. gana wana shuru krdiya...uss parking area wali k liye...tne mjko puri story batayi nhi...bata na yaar plzzzπŸ˜‰

Rey: humming again😳

Vicky: dude batana...tu usse corridor me takraye fir kya hua??

Rey: fir tra ghar agaya...chal utar..πŸ˜ƒ

Vicky:bolna yaar

Rey: utar..πŸ˜ƒ

Vicky gets down frm bike

Vicky: itna bhav kyu kha rha hai..batana

Rey: m gttng late

Vicky holds rey's hand...

Vicky: mai tjko jane nhi dunga..pehle bata.

Rey: kch khas nhi bas wo mjse takrayi fir uska cell gir gaya..maine cell uthake usko diya..bas

Vicky: bas... Itna hi...naam kya hai uska??

Rey: i dnt knw

Vicky: rehti kaha hai??

Rey: silly mj uska naam nhi pata to adress kaise pata hga

Vicky: oh yea..atleast ye to dekha hoga k wo kis clas me padti hai..

Rey: haan bcom final yr..

Vicky: ohh tab to mamla fit hai.πŸ˜†

Rey: wat?

Vicky: kch nhi..arnt u gttng late..shaam ko party me ana hai

Rey: ohh yea bye😊

Vicky:bye..dhyan se jana..uske khayalo me kisi ko thok mat dena..alvidaaa

Rey: SmilesπŸ˜ƒ..pagal

Kria on hr scooty..thnkng abt rey hits a car Parked on road side...

Kria: Oops marr gayi..yeh kya kiya kria tune...ullu ki phati...kya karu kya karu...*Biting her nails*..bhag jati hu..warna pakad liya to kahi mjko andar na kardein..πŸ˜•

As she tries 2 run away

Car Owner cums nd its none oder dan rey's mom sunita...

She sees kria running away..

Sunita: Hey..wait a min

Kria: pakdi gayi...she turns slowly

Sunita: ye tmne kiya hai..?

Kria: aunty m sry..plz mj maaf kr dijiye...mai ye thik krdungi

Sunita: tum mechanic ho?

Kria Laughs and say haan ye mre bayein haath ka khel hai

Kria goes near d car...

Kria:arrey bol to diya thik krdungi..par kaise karun..mj iska A bhi nhi ata..πŸ˜•

Sunita: kya hua?? fix karo..πŸ˜ƒ

Kria: Haan haan she tries opening bonnet..gets hurt and shouts..ahhh mamma...

Sunita: arrey kya hua beta dikhao...

Kria: kch nhi aunty

Sunita: Its bleeding...chalo jaldi se band aid laga deti hu...

Sunita gets band aid from car...n applies on kria's hand

Kria: sorry aunty wo mri wajah se aapki car...😭

Sunita: dont worry beta yeh to hota rehta hai..Tmhe dkhke chalani chahiye...its dangerous

Kria: aunty mai kabhi bhi aise nhi krti..ye to pehli bar mre sath aisa hua hai...sab us ladke ki wajah se

Sunita: accha..konsa ladka..?

Kria: murmers yeh kya nikal gay amre mu se...den she says..kuch nhi aunty..mai pagal hu kuch b bolti rehti hu...

Sunita: haan wo to dikhta hai k tum pagal ho

Kria makes baby face

Sunita: mazakh kr rhi thi beta...Tmhara naam kya hai

Kria: kria ghai

Sunita: kria...Bht pyara naam hai..

Kria: shouts..ohh nooo...

Sunita: kya hua??

Kria: mai yahan baton me lag gayi..ghar pe mamma wait kr rhi hongi..accha aunty chalti hu

Sunita: ok beta..

Kria: arrey mai b kitni pagal hu...maine apki car kharab krdi aur chali ja rhi hu...mai aapko aapke ghar tak chod du?

Sunita: arrey nhi beta tum ghar jao..tmhari mamma pareshan ho rahi hongi..mj chodne me deri hojayegi tmhe..Mai apne bete ko bula lungi...

Kria: to fir thik hai aunty..mai chalti hu..byeee

sunita: byeee..

Kria while gng dashes a lady..Sry..

Lady: dekh k nahi chal sakti

Kria: sorry bola na...

Sunita: laughs...Pagal ladki hai...She calls up rey..

Rey: hello mom whr r u??

Sunita: beta hamari car kharab hogayi hai..

Rey: kya?? Kaise?? Aap kaha hai??

Sunita: mai aapke collge k nazdeek jo mall hai wahi par hu

Rey: accha il be der in 5mins

Rey arrives..

Sunita: arrey aap Ud k aaye kya jo itni jaldi agaye..

Rey: mom

Sunita: beta ho to aap jaisa...aap hame yaha khade nahi dekh sakte isliye itni jaldi agaye..bike dekhke chalani chahiye..

Rey: jab b mri mom kisi pareshani me hogi mai aise hi karunga...

Sunita: accha agr kuch hogaya aapko toh...hamare liye aap dhyan se drive kijiye

Rey ok mom...waise car ko kya hua?

sunita: ek ladki ne apni scooty Thok di...

Rey: wat?? R u okay..Koi chot to nhi aayi?

Sunita: dont worry mra baccha..kch nhi hua.hamari car yaha park hui thi aur unhone thok di..*laughs*

Rey: angrily..Kon thi wo andhi...Usko dikhayi nhi diya..Apne usko jane kyu diya..mai hota to acche se sabakh sikhata k drive kaise krte hai

Sunita: aap b na..bht jaldi gusse me ajate hai...pyari si ladki thi..bas galti hogayi unse..jane dijiye

Rey:pyari? Gadhi hai..bad dimag ladkiya hoti hai sab..aankhen ghar pe rakh k drive krti hai...usko rok k rakhte to accha hota..

Sunita:Itna gussa thik nhi hota...chliye ghar chalte hai..

She sits on bike

Rey: mom careful..Ready 2 fly

Sunita: ohhh...Araam se

Rey: haha...Mri mom itni darpok..

Sunita: kya karein hame adat jo nhi hai bike pe baitne ki..

Rey:Pata hai Mom...:):)