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Love Me Sab Chalta Hai - Part V

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Recap: Karan warns his step-mom, not to blame Sujal for anything. Kashish is sad and is missing her Samay bhaiya. Sujal reaches the college late due to his night-shift at the Call-Centre.

 

 LOVE ME SAB CHALTA HAI – PART V

Sujal was running towards his class room when he overhears that a few idiotic boys of the college were planning for the ragging of new students and for Kashish, they planned to throw a bucket of muddy water on her. As he reaches the class, he went inside and sat besides Kashish as Nandini wasn't present today. Everyone in the class was surprised that inspite of a lot more seats, Sujal chose to sit with a girl.

Kashish: Tum yahan mere paas aakar kyon baithe ho.

Sujal: Mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai……..

Just then the lecturer enters.

Everyone: Good Morning Sir!

The lecturer starts teaching so Sujal could not tell Kashish what he wanted to. As the lecture got over, Kashish stood-up and went away.

Sujal: Kashish sun to……..

Kashish: Mai tum jaise sirchadhe ladkon se baat nahin karti.

Sujal: Mujhe bhi tumhaare jaise stupid ladkiyon me koi interest nahin hai (He holds her back) just listen to me for a second. College ke kuch ladke tumhaari ragging plan kar rahe hain. Unka plan tumpar sabke saamne Keechad daalne ka hai. Mai nahin jaanta ki vo ye sab kab aur kahan karenge, lekin vo aisa zaroor karenge. Sirf itna kehna tha ki tum sambal kar rehna.

Kashish: Mai bachchi nahin hoon (apna haath chudaate hue) aur mujhe apna khayaal rakhna aata hai. Tum hote kaun ho meri fikar karne wale? Kisne diya tumhe ye haq. Don't worry about me. I can take care of myself. (And she walks away & Sujal is now feeling embarrassed).

Just then Karan comes there.

Karan: Is Kashish ki to mai! Tujhe kya zaroorat thi use saavdhan karne ki, hone deta jo ho raha hai uske saath, tu bhi na, kuch extra-acha hai. Chal ab canteen chalte hain.

Sujal: Tu ja, mujhe abhi nahin jaana.

Karan: Theek hai phir mai bhi nahin jaata.

Sujal: Oh ho Karan, irritate mat kar. Tu ja mai aa jaoonga.

Karan: Pakka????????

Sujal: Haan baba. Ab ja tu.

Karan ko bhejkar Sujal Library ki taraf chal padta ha. Ground se guzarte waqt use dikhta hai ki Shahid (one of those idiotic boys) was talking to Kashish. It seemed to him as if Shahid is trying to befriend Kashish aur phir vo Kashish ko lekar kahin jaane lagta hai. Sujal chupte-chupaate unka peecha karta hai aur tabhi use sunaai deta hai ki Shahid

Kashish ko Mr. Mishra (their accounts teacher) ke room me jaane ko keh raha hai. Kashish jaise hi Mr. Mishra ke room ka darwaaza kholti hai to ek baalti se keechad girta hai. Par, Kashish bach jaati hai kyonki Sujal bhaag kar use peeche kheench leta hai aur ab Kashish, Sujal ki baahon me hai.  

Sujal: Are you Ok????????

Kashish just cannot take her eyes off Sujal.

Sujal: Kashish???????????

Kashish comes back to her senses and stands up.

Kashish: Thanks!!!!!!!

Sujal: Mention not. (And he goes to the canteen)  

 

Place: College Canteen

Karan: Tu itni der baad aaya hai. Kahan reh gaya tha?

Sujal: Vo mai zara…..

Karan: Acha ab ye sun, India ka score 289 pe all out.

Sujal: Kya????????

Karan: Haan! Dravid ke baad line se sab out ho gaye…

Just then Kashish enters the canteen and looks at Sujal lovingly. Sujal hadn't seen her but Karan noticed her, passing a sweet smile towards Sujal.

Karan: Sujal! Teri to nikal padi!

Sujal: Kya??????

Karan: Haan! Tujhpar fida ladkiyon ki lammmmmmbi list me ek aur naam shamil ho gaya.

Sujal: Dekh Karan………

Karan: Arrre Sujal! Dekha to tune nahin! Kis tarah pyaar se vo teri taraf dekh rahi thi.

Sujal: Dekhti hai to dekhne de. Mujhe koi fark nahin padta.

Karan: Kaisa ladka hai tu? Bar-Tender hokar bhi sharab nahin peeta.

Sujal: Tu examples dene band kar.

Karan: (Looking at his watch) O god! Mai late ho gaya, mai chalta hoon, mujhe bank jaana hai.

Sujal: Kya karne?

Karan: Hai kuch kaam. See u later.

Sujal: Arre Karan sunn to………

Just then Kashish came to him.

Kashish: Sujal….

Sujal: (In utter surprise) Kashish?

Kashish: Can I sit with you. Actually aaj Nandini bhi college nahin aayi hai aur mera yahan koi dost bhi nahin hai.

Sujal (To himself): Shahid se dosti ki to thi, usi ko bulao company dene ke liye.

Kashish: Kuch kaha tumne??

Sujal: Nah…nahin to!!!!

Kashish: I'm sorry.

Sujal: Sorry kyon?

Kashish: Vo maine tumhe class ke bahar sabke saamne bura-bhala kaha.

Sujal: It's ok. Vaise, mujhe aaj jaldi ghar jaana hai so don't mind, but, bye.

Kashish: Shayad meri kismet me hi nahin hai ki us se dosti karoon. Oh god help me! Jab vo Nandu se dosti kar sakta hai to mujhse kyon nahin? Have patience Kashish! Dosti hogi, aur zaroooooooooooooor hogi.

 

Sujal is walking toward his house while thinking about Kashish.

Sujal (Talking to himself, thinking about Kashish): Ye kya ho raha hai aaj mujhe! Kyon bachaya maine Kashish ko? Mai to kabhi kisi ladki ka haath bhi nahin pakadta, phir kyon maine poore haq ke saath use Mr. Mishra ke room me jaane se roka? Mai kyon abhi bhi uske bare me soch raha hoon?

Since Kashish had to go home early that day, her car was passing from there and she stopped when she saw Sujal.

Kashish: Sujal tum paidal jaa rahe ho?

Sujal: Mere liye ye koi nayi baat nahin hai.

Kashish: Haan par……..If you don't mind, mai chod doon tumhe ghar tak?

Sujal: No thanks, I'll manage.

Kashish: To phir theek hai, mai tumhaare saath paidal chalti hoon. Bhai mujhe bhi to pata chale ki tumhe paidal chalne me aisa kya maza aata hai jo tumhe car me jaana pasand nahin. (She indicates her driver to drive home as she will come by herself)

Sujal: Tumne apne driver ko kyon bhej diya?

Kashish: Kyon tumhe car me jaana tha?

Sujal: Nahin! I mean, tumhe aadat nahin hai naa, tum do min me thak jaaogi.

Kashish: Tum meri chinta mat karo, mai nahin thakoongi.

Both laugh and just then, it started raining. Kashish ran under the Bus-Stop shed nearby but Sujal was enjoying the rain.

Kashish: Tum bheeg kyon rahe ho, beemar ho jaaoge.

Sujal: I love rains.

Just then Kashish took out her mobile and clicked Sujal's photograph. As usual, he didn't notice.

Kashish: Sujal! Ab bahut ho gaya. Aur mat bheego.

Sujal: Oh come on Kashish! Don't be a spoilt sport! Ek baar bheeg ke to dekho.

Kashish: Na baba na! Mai nahin aaongi.

Sujal: Theek hai! Jab tak baarish rukti hai, tum yahin khadi raho, mai apne ghar jaa raha hoon.

Kashish (Calling her driver): Driver! Tum car lekar college ke paas wale Bus-Stop pe aa jao, mai yahin hoon.

Driver: Ok Madam!

Kashish ki ankhon ke saamne Sujal ka muskuraata hua chehra ghoom raha tha aur Sujal ki baatein uske dimaag me. Use lagta hai ki use bhi baarish me bheegna try karna chahiye. But jaise hi vo bahar step karne lagti hai to uska driver pahunch jaata hai aur vo bheegna ka idea drop kar deti hai.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What work does Karan have at the bank? Have Sujal-Kashish fallen in love? Is there a villain in my story or not? Stay tuned to Love Me Sab Chalta Hai?

 

With love

Garima

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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Excellent work yaar..... Clap Clap Clap must say u r very good writer. Smile Tongue
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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 2:28am | IP Logged
garima   can u do me a small favour i want to read ur stories first three parts can u give the link ........
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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 2:58am | IP Logged
To read the first three parts, here is the link dear...

Part I
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=197356&KW=Lo ve+Me+Sab+Chalta+Hai

Part II
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=197463&KW=Lo ve+Me+Sab+Chalta+Hai

Part III
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=197937&KW=Lo ve+Me+Sab+Chalta+Hai


Do read and comment
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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 3:14am | IP Logged
hi garima ur story is mindblowing gr8 yaar Clap
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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 4:05am | IP Logged
wooww gr88 Clap ....just loved ur style ov writing Wink Embarrassed
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Posted: 07 February 2006 at 4:23am | IP Logged
garima u r story is mindblowing
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Thanks for such amazing comments guys
I'll post the next part by tomorrow

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