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Love Me Sab Chalta Hai - Part IV

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Posted: 06 February 2006 at 10:27pm | IP Logged

Hello everyone!

Aap sab se itne amazing comments sun ne ke baad to mujhe likhne ke liye aur encouragement mil gaya hai. I hope Dola87, ki tumhe tumhaara jawab is part me mil jayega. Here goes the part IV…………………

 

Recap (Kahaani ab tak): Karan Sujal ke saath college aane se mana kar deta hai. Kashish ka college me pehla din hai aur uski Sujal se mulaaqat ho jaati hai. Nandini-Kashish aur Sujal-Karan canteen me baithe baatein kar rahe hain. Nandini ki mummy ki tabiyat kharaab hone ki wajah se use jaana padta hai. Kashish ko class me seat na hone ki wajah se Sujal ke saath baithna padta hai aur vo hairaan hokar khadi ho jaati hai jab Sujal use apni friendship offer karta hai (which was a mere imagination of hers). Kashish-Sujal-Karan-Nandini ke beech ek chota sa jhagda ho jaata hai. Karan ko Sujal uski mummy ke phone ke bare me batata hai. Kashish apne Samay bhaiya ko miss kar rahi hai.

 

Place: Karan's house

Karan apni mom se Sujal ki taraf unke rude behaviour ka jawab lene aata hai. Uski mom Mrs. Raichand use dekh kar khush ho jaati hain.

Mrs. Raichand: Karan beta!!!!!!!! Mujhe pata tha ki tum…………..

Karan: Oh pleaseee……..cut the crap. Mai yahan aapki faalto bakwaas sunne nahin aaya hoon. Aap apni ye High-Society dramebaazi jaakar Aryan aur Swapnil ko dikhaiye (Karan's two step brothers, they both are twins and study in 12th standard. Vaise to Meethi bhi Karan ki step sister hi hai, in class 10th, but she is in favour of Karan and loves him more than her own brothers). Mujhe aapke is jhoothe nakab ke neeche chupa aapka asli chehra nazar aata hai.

Swapnil: Bhaiya please. Aapko agar mom se tameez se baat nahin karni hoti to yahan mat aaya keejiye.

Karan: You don't interfere! Understand! Haan, aur aap, aapko ye haq kisne diya ki aap Sujal ko mere is ghar se jaane ka zimmedar thehrayein? Ye ghar maine apni marzi se choda hai aur Sujal ki isme koi galati nahin hai ye aap bhi jaanti hain.

Mrs. Raichand: Tum kab samjhoge beta ki us jaisa middle-class insaan tumhaara dosti ke………………

Karan: Middle-class hi sahi, vo mujhe samajhta to hai, meri har problem me mera saath to deta hai, varna is ghar ke log to apni-apni zindagiyon me aise uljhe hue hain ki……..

Mrs. Raichand: Tum samajh nahin rahe ho, vo achi tarah jaanta hai ki tumhaara naam par kitna paisa hai, aur paise ke liye hi to vo tumhaara istemaal kar raha hai.

Karan: Mera istemaal kab kaun kar raha hai, mujhe pata chal jaata hai. Aur mai is ghar me dobara aane ki galati karoonga, aisa kabhi sochna bhi mat. Aur haan! Sujal ke bare me kuch bura bolna to dur agar aapne socha bhi na, to mai is ghar ka jo haal karoonga, uske liye aap zimmedar hongi. Samjhi! (And he turns to return)

Just then, Meethi was entering the house as she had returned from her Maths Tution.

Meethi: Hi bhaiya! Aap kab aaye? Itne din ho gaye, aapne mujhe koi mail bhi nahin bheja?

Karan: Sorry sweetheart! Mai ab definitely tumhe regular mails bhejoonga. Abhi mujhe late ho raha hai, mai…………………….

Just then Mrs. Raichand shouted from inside……………

Mrs. Raichand: Meethi! Come on in……..fast.

Meethi: Aayi mumma! Bye bhaiya! (& Meethi kisses him)

 

Place: Kashish's house.

Kashish is standing on the window quietly with his brother's photo in hand. Actually, his brother loved a middle-class girl, who he married secretly. But, as soon as his parents got to know about his affair, they fixed his marriage in some rich family but, they didn't know that he had married her. Samay could not bear it and he committed a planned suicide which appeared to everyone as a mere accident. He did so to prevent his family from earning a bad name in the society. But, before death, he had written a confession letter to Kashish in which he wrote all the truth. Kashish told her family about it but they are not ready to believe her as well as accept that girl as their daughter-in-law. Now only Kashish knows that where her bhabi is and she often goes to meet her secretly.

Now, Nandini enters her room with some food.

Nandini: Kya hua Kashish! Andhere me kyon khadi ho? (Switches on the lights)

Kashish hides her brother's photo in the drawer.

Kashish: Kuch nahin, bas aise hi.

Nandini: Acha chalo, ab khana kha lo.

Kashish: Mera mann nahin hai. Tum le jaao ise yahan se.

Nandini: Baat chahe jo bhi ho, khane pe gussa utaarna achi baat nahin hai. Chalo! Thoda sa hi kha lo naa.

Kisi tarah na na karte hue bhi Kashish Nandini ke haath se khana kha leti hai aur Nandini use sula kar bahar aa jaati hai.

Nandini (To herself): Pata nahin Kashish ko kya hua hai? I hope subah tak uska mood theek ho jaaye.

 

Place: Sujal's house

Sujal ready ho raha hai aur tabhi Karan vahan aa jata hai.

Sujal: Tu aunty ke paas ladne gaya tha na?

Karan: Mujhe kuch nahin sun na. Agar vo tere saath bura salook karengi to mai unhe…..

Sujal: Jaise bhi hain, ma hain vo teri.

Karan: Mom nahin step-mom, poore ek step ka difference hai……….vaise tu kahan jaa raha hai?

Sujal: Aaj meri night shift hai. (Actually Sujal does a part-time job in a Call-Centre to pay off his share of the house rent.)

Karan: Din me college, raat me Calls-Ahead (Name of the Call Centre), tu thakta nahin hai kya?

Sujal: Par kaam karna bhi to zaroori hai.

Karan: Koi zaroori nahin hai, meri salary se (Karan also does a part-time job, but in a Software Company.) kaam chal jaata hai aur phir bhi tu………….

Sujal: Dekh Karan! Ye paisa na, bahut buri cheez hai. Ye kisi bhi rishtey me daraar daal deta hai. Mai jaanta hoon ki humaare rishtey me kabhi daraar aa hi nahin sakti par mai koi aisa mauka chodna hi nahin chahta. Jabse maine hosh sambhala hai, teri-meri dosti hi mere liye sabse precious rahi hai. Mai ise kabhi tootne……………

Karan: Ab aage tu kuch bola na to mai tujhe…..Agar aapke pravachan samapt ho gaye ho to aapko yaad dila doon ki aapko Call-Centre bhi jaana hai.

Sujal: Haan baba jaa raha hoon.

Sujal leaves for his job & Karan went inside to change.

 

Place: Kashish's house.

Its next morning and Kashish is getting ready for college. Her mood is fine now. Just then her mom enters.

Mrs. Singhania: Good Morning Kashish beta!

Kashish: Morning mumma.

Mrs. Singhania: Mujhe tumhe kuch batana tha.

Kashish: Kya mumma?

Mrs. Singhania: Beta, aaj shaam ko humaare ghar pe ek business party hai, mai chahti hoon ki aaj tum college se jaldi aa jaao.

Kashish: Mumma mai jaldi nahin aa sakti, maine abhi abhi join kiya hai aur mujhe course cover-up karna hai. Vaise bhi, aaj mera ek bahut important lecture hai.

Mrs. Singhania: Kashish please samajhne ki koshish karo. Tumhaare papa chahte hain ki tum is party me maujood raho. Please beta, for one day………pleeeeeeeeease.

Kashish: Ok I'll try. Acha, mai chalti hoon.

And Kashish leaves.

 

Place: Sujal's house.

The alarm is continuously ringing but both Sujal and Karan are in a deep sleep. Sujal was tired due to night shift and Karan ki to aadat hi nahin thi jaldi uthne ki. Well, after sometime, somehow, Karan woke-up.

Karan: Ye subah subah kya shor macha ke rakha hai…….. (Hits Sujal with a pillow)….Uth aur band kar ise.

Sujal: (Looking at the watch) Damn it! Karan 8:00 baj gaye uth.

Karan: Oh god! 8:30 baje to maine Akansha ko mera booth pe intezaar karne ko kaha tha. Mar gaye.

Both of them get ready and go to the college on their bike. As they reach the college, Sujal run towards his class as he was already late.

Karan (To himself): Ye kabhi nahin sudhrega.

 

 

Waiting for your comments…………..

Garima

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