IPKKND: World of Our Own - Page 4

dudeee!!! u hav no idea wat i ws feeling while reading dis OS of urs 😛

attack pe attack aa rahe the mujhe 😆

it ws really lovely yaar 👏

u shld write more OS es, thnx for d PM 😃

Goshh the lavanya's part scared me but everything went well after the kiss :D

So cute. I was scared when i read arnav and lavanya.

Originally posted by: MissButterfly

That was just so adorable <3 In fact it was beyond adorable :P I had a big grin plastered on my face all throughout the reading process :P 

Originally posted by: nishk

Ohh...soo cute..
They named their daughter as Lavanya..

Originally posted by: srahs

loved it

thankx for pm 

Originally posted by: Yazzy91

😆 Beginning is very misleading! But hey awesome update AS USUAL! 😊 xxx

Originally posted by: sweet1210

Fist i tought arnav and lavanya ar together but then...cut story 😳

Originally posted by: luv angel

At first I was like 'What the...' lol then it was awww! Very cute loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Shina_srkfan

wowiee! 

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

u made me confused in the beginning...😊
n then *tara* it was awesome!!

Originally posted by: Zeee

wow!!! cleverly written. love this family.

xxx

Originally posted by: moon_mine

it ws so cute!!!!

loved the twist!!!!!

pls cn u cntinue this one!!!!

Originally posted by: diptea

very very clever !  Loved it. 

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Awesome os

Originally posted by: anjs

loved it...it was just wow :)

Originally posted by: sarach

OMG..this was the best..im just wowww,short ov words..loved its every bit

Originally posted by: anjaani07

Aww this was just too sweet!!

Originally posted by: Bajaj.rb

That's awesome!

Thank you all! So glad you liked it :DD

Hope I didn't scare you too much :P

Originally posted by: Sanlicious

OMG...I was a bit scared as Arnav and Lavanya..! 😲 But then all is well 😆

Awesome super cute 

Originally posted by: gmjudv

i was wondering were the story was going.  scared me for a while.

Originally posted by: smitar

U scared me stiff! CONGRATS!😆

Originally posted by: nishi

in the first few paragraphs , you really scared me ... I was like Arnav n Lavanya ?? ... n then it was like I came bak to life 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Shivani.

Omg while reading the beginning i was shittin myselff.. Thank god the story changed after 😆

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

I think I had a "MILD" Heart attack! 🤣 Wonderful OS dear! 🤗

Originally posted by: Lovearhi

OMG! You freaked me out at the beginning. I was like What the...!

But a wonderfully written OS. Very cute!

Originally posted by: aparna5293

Omg u scared me for while yaar
our blah and arnies wife i just dont want to imagine
then i have sign of relief and laughter lol luv it:)

Originally posted by: Bhavapriya

God you gave me quite a heart attack with Arnav being with Lavanya. God very cute OS. Please do continue and PM me when you do

Originally posted by: JennyAvni

ohhh dear...i was afraid for a while...damn when did La n Arnav marry?
u gave  ashok of life in arhi world ...💔

but la is khushi's daughter🤣

i must say u r quite naughty ahhh😉
this one for u🤗

Originally posted by: savi-tan

For a moment there, I was like...what the????😆Good one!!

Originally posted by: lyraa

dat was some scare u gave.. for a moment i thot ur imagination took a flight from a wrong side... but then i was lyk aww thats sooo cuteee 👏 awesome

Originally posted by: arhi-fan

So cute. I was scared when i read arnav and lavanya.

Originally posted by: SiRul

Goshh the lavanya's part scared me but everything went well after the kiss :D

awesomeee

Originally posted by: veena_rocks

dudeee!!! u hav no idea wat i ws feeling while reading dis OS of urs 😛

attack pe attack aa rahe the mujhe 😆

it ws really lovely yaar 👏

u shld write more OS es, thnx for d PM 😃

Originally posted by: ajoop

i was so shocked in the beginning ,i thought i wont read it entirely,but when kushi came into picture i continued and then wow,mindblowing story👏

Thank you all so much! Glad you liked it. I did mean to mislead and scare you a bit in the beginning but I didn't expect so many of you to have 'attacks' :P So I'm sorry! ;D

Originally posted by: napstermonster

OH MY GOD, my heart is still beating so fast it is literally banging against my ribs right now! What an amazingly wicked wicked thing to do, Naiyika, and so well written! I swear, the first few paragraphs made me stop breathing as I went back TWICE to check to see if my eyes were playing tricks on me, and then you made the weird upside down world right side up again! ! This was such a shock, but then turned into a story that was  so damn awesome! Please write reams and reams more, since I am one of your devoted fans...though I promise, I'm totally going to CAREFULLY ease into all  your next stories in case I do have that promised heart attack!

Haha, I'm sorry for being so evil! The way I wrote it, I definitely wanted people to think Lavanya and Arnav were married. Glad you liked it though!

Haha, hopefully none of my other works give you a heart attack! Unless I mean them to of course :P

Originally posted by: Ruby-Ruby

Wow that is really good! The first part had me confused and I thought: "What?!". And then I thought Khushi and Arnav were having an affair and I was like: "Oh no they didn't!".  And then finally I understood that Lavanya is the child!! Cute story. Keep continuing 😊

Haha, thank you! I'm so glad that everyone thought what I wanted them to think ;)

Originally posted by: ccuteaangel

I was like NOOO, for half of it, and then Khushi came, and then I became all feminist like HOW DARE HE JUGGLE TWO GIRLS.

 

And then you threw that in my face and I was like ☺️

 

Great story

Aww bless, yes I would definitely be angry at Arnav if he was trying to juggle two girls!! But I'm glad  I managed to trick you all ;)

Thank you for reading and I'm so happy you all liked it :)

lavanya is the daughter ...
uff...
thank god

OMG. i thought khushi was like an angel or something, who made Arnav and La come together! and i was, "nahhh i dont feel like reading this."

Not gonna lie, I got a bit freaked out seeing how nice Arnav was being to Lavanya, and how much he was loving her. But it's okay, all izz well. :D LOL.

gosh...when i started reading i was like "what the...arnav and lavanya?"