OS- Betrayal Felt By My Heart - Page 3

Khushi Left? Aww I Hope She Won't Marry Shyam.

Wow brilliant , loved the way u guys capture his feelings it is what he must be going thru in da serial . Beautifully written , well done . Thanks for the pm

OMG Mya Aahana big 🤗   you guys that was a phenomenal OS!! Superb...amazing...marvelous absolutely loved it! The confrontation was beautiful you've done it fantastically and explained Arnav's feelings amazingly loved it and the last few lines were heart breaking, absolutely beautiful! Loved the OS thanks for the PM keep rocking guys 🤗

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

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Wow stealer. 🥺

lovely written. 

you and Aahana wrote really nice. 😳

Title suits the OS

Also, I see y you kept it now. 

It does have full on justice. 

Feeling more bad for ASR

Wonder why such things have to take place. 

Anyways, it was brilliant. 

Esp the last paragraph. 

Loved it the best. 

Gals, this deserves to be turned into SS if not an FF !!!!

But, won't force since I know how much tight one can get with just 2 FF's and all. 

Loved reading my comment stealer? 🤣

Lol thanks for the comment Khushi! Im glad you liked it

hun this is an OS plz I cannot write more depressing stuff! I would need help if I did that 🤣

😆 Your comment left me with my mouth hanging 😃😳

that was brilliant!!

it was so emotional. who said u r not good at writing sad moments. u r superb. i hope in reality also arnav realises his mistake. it was so touching that it really made me cry. pls do write more stuff like this. thanx for pm.

wow, this was amazing...you both wrote brilliantly...the confrontation was written marvelously...the lines were absolutely perfect...loved it very much...thanks for the pm  

loved it!!!!

hey SOUL SISTER!!

this was so goood..a tearful update.