OS - Meri Kamzori - Page 2

Originally posted by: devisridhar

wonderful simply superb 😊

it was so simple and lovely OS👍🏼

i admired it❤️

i think day by day u r becoming a poet😉

keep up the work and thanks for the pm dear⭐️

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Not liked it my dear... I LOVED it 😉

Originally posted by: sonu10

wonderful words bus pyar ki gajha mohabat likha kota "main tumsa kitna pyar karta hu" in this line toh aur powerfil hota
just my sense not any intention to hurt ur poem its truly beautiful.

Originally posted by: tinsel

Simply A Wonderful OS,Much Appreciated👍🏼😃

wowww.tooo goood...amazing..u really written v well..their current situation...and when she leaves his conditon was like..his breathe stops

Originally posted by: sarach

wowww.tooo goood...amazing..u really written v well..their current situation...and when she leaves his conditon was like..his breathe stops

Where are my rest of the readers...come fast!😆

It was amazing Shy..! You are becoming a poet.. That is too good!!
This poem fits perfectly to Arnav's expressions in the last part of today's show..
Love you Shy!! Continue like this more!!

that was great!!

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

It was amazing Shy..! You are becoming a poet.. That is too good!!
This poem fits perfectly to Arnav's expressions in the last part of today's show..
Love you Shy!! Continue like this more!!