Originally posted by: nyxxTotally lovedd this part! Especially Khushis reaction to all of this. Im sure theres one more part coming rii? Where Arnav goes after her and beats the crap out of her "fiance"...and then, shyams truth will be revealed! Or am i going too far? But you knoww what, the cv's of the show should totallly take this as their storyline haha! Youre a stunning writer! Keep it up =)
Cant wait for the next part :)
Originally posted by: soho19Beautifulll! I wish she would show this kind of backbone on the show. Loved her strength, and her finally making him realize how it feels to be put on the spot all the time. Lovely! I hope you continue, if you can ππΌππ€
Originally posted by: areeba123hinathat was an awesome OS naiyka di, really splendid! i totally loved Khushi's reaction! thats what happened with me when my boyfriend broke up and then kept following me for days! Thanks for the PM!
Originally posted by: SiRulI didnt like i loved it π Good workk keep writing dear love all ur update
Originally posted by: Sophie83569This was awesome ! ~Sophie
Originally posted by: simbelWhooo, Khushi stoop up for herself against Mami!
Wonderful update, looking forward to what happens next π
Originally posted by: tina_1234oh man i loveddd it..luv dis khushi
Originally posted by: sushipie01You write so beautifully! π Can you please PM me when you update?? Thanks!
Originally posted by: mahiem94Great update love how kushi spoke out. π
Originally posted by: hiddenpearlloved it :-)
thanks for the pm :-))
wanna read like this more .
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Originally posted by: -Garima-OMGOMG! Yayyy, you continued! :D Totally was not expecting that but I'm so glad you did! (:
This update was beautiful! Absolutely loved the way Khushi behaved in front of Arnav and the whole family. I completely agree with you, women in serials tend to forgive the males soo easily, its not fair. But what you've done in your SS is phenomenal! (: Awesome work Nayika! So I'm assuming there's more to this story right? Can't wait to read it! (:--Garima
Originally posted by: unna_178'I was upset! I thought my father was dying! I would have hugged a lion if it had been in front of me!' Khushi stiffened as Mami spoke and turned around slowly, 'for your information Mamiji, I have no need to put my claws as you put them into anyone, be it your precious Arnav or Akash bitwa. I already have a fianc who thankfully doesn't seem to think that self-worth is tied to the amount of money a person earns and I'm more than happy with him.
u deserved applause mainly for this... great job
Originally posted by: TrueMuskaanI LOVED IT!
Khushi is awesome! Serves Arnav right! Hpmh!PM me next time you update, which hopefully should be soon :P
Originally posted by: Zeeesoo agree with you. khushi shouldnt forgiove arnav easily. hmph!
wicked update!xxx
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