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Chapter 2

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            (Kushi in her house trying to sleep but failed. Aadhi raat ko uski neend khulti hai or wo apne saamne ASR ko khre dekhti hai. Khushi chuk ker uth jaati hai.)

KKG ' aap''' yaha?

ASR ' haan main yaha.

KKG ' per aap is waqt yaha kya kar rahe hai?

ASR ' tum hi ne to mujhe bulaya tha.

KKG ' humne.. per humne kab bulaya?

ASR ' abhi abhi''.

KKG ' nahi to humne aapko bilkul nahi bulaya.

ASR ' to kya main apne aap chala aaya. Nahi. Tumne bulaya tabhi main aaya hoo.

KKG ' ajeeb zabrdasti hai. Hum keh rahe hai na ki humne nahi bulaya aapko aap zabrdasti humse ye manwane ko kyo taiyar hai.

ASR ' dekho main jhooth nahi bol raha hoo mujhe tumne hi bulaya tha.

KKG ' aap jhooth bol rahe hai humne nahi bulaya aapko.

ASR ' what the''' main jhooth nahi bolta. Tum ASR ko jhootha bol rahi ho.

KKG ' are ek to aap jhooth bol rahe hai upper se what the '' what the kar ke humpe gussa kar rahe hai.

ASR '  main to aisa hi hoo or ye tum janti ho phir bhi mujhe bulaya hai.

KKG ' humne khan a ki humne aapko nahi bulaya hai.

ASR ' jhoothi. Kab se lagatar mujhe yaad kiye jaa rahi ho or khti ho ki tumne mujhe nahi bulaya. Ab itna yaad karogi to mujhe to ana parega na.

KKG ' kya aapko kaise pta ki hum aapko yaad kar arhe the?

ASR ' main to tumhare dil me rehta hoo phir tumhare dil ki baat mujhe kaise nahi pta chalegi.

KKG ' haai'. Hum neend me to nahi hai na. ASR or itni meethi boli. Aise to karwe karele si zaban hai per aaj itni mithas kaise?

ASR ' ye sab tumhari jalebiyo ka asar5 hai. Us din tumne khilai thin a jaban me meethas ab tak hai.

KKG ' (with shyness) ab aap jaiye warna koi uth jayga.

ASR ' nahi. Main nahi jaunga. Tumne hi bulaya hai.

KKG ' humne bulaya than a ba hum hi keh rahe hai jaiye warna koi aa jayega. Or agar kisi ne hume saath me dekh liya to gajab ho jayega. Aap jaiye na''please aap jaiye.

            (usi waqt payal ki neend khulti hai.)

Payal ' khushi.kisse baat kar rahi hai or kise jane ko keh rahi hai.

KKG ' kisi se nahi jiji. Aap jaiye na'.

            (khushi palat kar ASR ki taraf dekhti hai to use koi nahi dikhta.

KKg ' haan''.. kha gaye. Abhi to yahi the.

Payal ' kaun yahi the or kaun kha gaye.

KKG ' jiji wo' lard''

Payal ' fir se lard governor. Khushi din bhar me tu sabse jyada us ASR ke bare me sochti hai or ab wo tujhe sapne me bhi dikhne lage. Waise is baar tere sapne me wo tujhe kaun si saza suna rahe the.

KKG ' koi saza nahi jiji. Wo to bhut'.. kuch nahi di. Aap so jao. Hum bhi sone jate hai.

            (Payal o jati hai or KKG sone ki kosis karti hai.)

KKG ' jiji sahi kehti hai hum din bhar me sabse jyada ASR ke bare me sochte hai or ab to hume unke sapne bhi aane lage. Ye hume ho kya raha hai? Devi maiya. Kya sachmuch hume unse pyaar'''.. nahi nahi. Ye nahi ho sakta. Hume us lard governor se pyar kaise ho sakta hai. Per ye bhi to such hai na ki wo utne bure bhi nahi hai jitna hum unhe samjhte the. Her waqt wo lard governor to nahi bane rehte. Kabhi kabhi kitni acchi tarah se baat karte hai. Or humara kitna khyal rkhte hai. To kya hua? Unhone LA ji se shadi karne ke liye haa kar di hai. Ab hume unke bare me nahi sochna chahiye. He devi maiya aap kya chati hai humse. Hume to kuch bhi samjh me nahi aa rha hai. Her waqt hume wahi yaad aate hai. Humne aapse ishara manga tha or ap hume ye kaise kaise ishare de rahi hai. To kya aap chahti hai ki hum or wo LG (Lard Governor) '''. Nahi devi maiya aap aisa kaise kar sakti hai. Ab to kuch ho bhi nahi sakta humrai sagai shyam ji ke saath ho gayi hai or kuch dino me us LG ki bhi sagai LA ji se ho jayegi. Ye nahi ho sakta devi maiya nahi ho sakta. Kam se kam is janam to nahi. Aapko apna faisla badla hoga devi maiya. Badlna hoga. Ab hume neend aa rahi hai hum sone ja rahe hai devi maiya hume us LG ke sapne nahi aane chahiye. Humchaimn ki neend sona chahte hai. Daar daar kar nahi.

            (KKG so jaati hai)

 

Next day in KKG house'..

            (KKG dineer table per baithi so rahi hai. Tabhi bus ji aati hai.)

Bua ji ' hay re Nad kishor e lo''  e sanka devi pehle sankiyati hi thi ab to pura pagal ho gayoi hai. Are e snka devi uth jao I sowe ki jagah nahi hai khawe ki jagah hai or abhi din hai raat nahi jot um iha jhpkiya maar rahi ho.

KKG ' haa''' bua ji hum so thore rahe the hum to bus'.. bus'..

Bua ji ' hum to bus jhpkiya maar rahe the. Are jakar naha dho lo kaam paer nahi jaan kya?

Payal ' Kushi tum raat ko thik se soi nahi kya tumhari aankhe abhi bhi laal ho rahi hai.

KKG ' kaha jiji humne to lakh sone ki kosis ki per humare sapne'' unhone hume nahi sone diya.

Buaj ji ' ka'' kahi shyam babua ka sapna dekht rahi ka jo neend nahi aai.

KKG ' nahi bua ji'.

Payal ' ti fir kiske sapne dekhe tumne khushi.

KKG ' kuch mat pucho jiji hume rat bhar itne darawne sapne aaye hi na ki''.

Payal ' darwane''' koi bat nahi khushi sapne to bus sapne hote hai. Tum jakar naha kar taiyar ho jaao kaam per jana hai na.

KKG ' nhi jiji hum nahi jayenge. Kahi humare sapne such ho gaye to''

Payal ' such ho gaye to'. Kya matlab. Tumne raat ko rayjada house me koi bhoot dekh liya kya jo tumhe kha jayega.

KKG ' us ghar me bhoot ki kya zaroorat hai jiji wo hai  na humare LG wo kisi bhoot se kum hai kya?

Payal ' humare LG!

KKG ' haa''.

Payal ' ye arnav ji tumhare kab se ho gaye?

KG ' haa. Humne to bus aise hi keh diya wo kya hai na ki LG unhe bus hum hi bulate hai na isliye.

Payal ' khushi pehle to tum din bhar unke aas paas rehti ho phir ghar aati ho to unki baate karti ho or ab wo tumhare sapno me bhi aane lage, khushi hume to kuch garbar lagti hai.

KKG ' jiji aap humari khichai kar rahi hai.

Payal ' nahi khushi hum tumhari khichai nahi kar rahe balki hum to ye chahte hai kit um apni zindgi ka itna bara faisla bina soche samjhe mat lo. Acchi tarah se apne maan me jhak kar ye jaan lo kit um sach me wahi chahti ho jot um kar rahi ho ya jo ho raha hai.

KKG ' matlab jiji?

Payal ' khushi matlab samjhne me kahi tumhe itni der na ho jaaye kit um jab tak apne dil ki baat samjho sab kuch badal jaye. Ek baar waqt bit gaya na to koi bhi kuch bhi nahi kar payega. Na tum or na tumhare LG. ab hum chalet hai rasoi me maa ka haath batana hai. Tum jakar taiyar ho jaao or RM jaao warn atumhari LA ji ka phone aa jayega.

KKG ' ye jiji bhi na pta nahi kya samjha kar chali gayi ek to hum pehle hi itne pareshan hai upper se jiji ki ye jalebi jaisi baate''.. jalebi humne kal se jalebi nahi khai hai aaj zaroor khayenge. Abhi jakar taiyar ho jaate hai wrna wo LG der se aane ke naam per humari salary kaat lega. Pr hum pareshan kyun ho rahe hai humne to kal hi sabko keh dia tha ki hum ye naukari chor rahe hai or aaj to anjli ji ne hume sirf puja ke liye bulaya hai. Hum dar kyun krahe hai. Dekha us LG ke chakkar me hum kitni saari baate bhul jate hai kitni sari garbar karte hai. Hume jaldi karne ki kya zarorat hai Hum aaram se jayenge. Aaj waise bhi humra us ghar me aakhiri din hai fir hume na us LG ka chehra dekhn aprega or na hi koi garbar hogi. Kushi chal chlkar jalebi banate hai. Pehle hum jalebai khyenge phir jayenge. Jalebiyo me se kuch anjli ji ke liye bhi le jayenge aakhir aaj humara us ghar me aakhiri din hai. Kuch to tohfa le jaana chaiyae na.

 

2:30 PM at RM mension

            (khushi darwaze per darti huyi aati hai. Wo haaf rahi hai. )

KKG ' ho'' aakhir pahuch hi gaye. Hume to laga ki aaj hum delhi ki jam me raat tak fuse rahenge. Pehle to ghar se late nikle phir koi auto nahi mila or uske bad ye jam'''. Humari halat khrab ho gayi. Lekin hume der to ho gayi ab tak to puja khtam ho gayi hogi. Anjli ji se mafi maag lenge or fir ye jalebiya kis kaam ayengi. Inki meethas se to koi bhi apni karwahat bhool jaye siway us LG ke. LG''' sabse acchi baat hai ki wo LG aaj ghar per nahi honge. Puja me us rakchash ka kya kaam. Waise bhi Rakchas puja waigrah se dor hi rehte hai. To hum aaram se reh sakte hai.

            (Kushi bell bajati hai. Drwaza khulta hai or samne ASr khra hai.)

KKG ' he devi maiya humne apse kha tha ki hume aaj inki sakhl nahi dekhni per aapne fir se humari baat nahi suni. Waise puja ke din ye rakchash ghar me kya kar rah hai?

ASR ' kya kha tumne abhi?

KKG ' kuch bhi nahi''.. kuch bhi to nahi.

ASR ' jhooth mat bolo khushi maine apne kano se suna hai.

KKG ' sab apne kano se sunte hai aapne koi nayi baat nahi ki.

ASR ' baat ko ghumao mat Khushi maine suna ki tumne mujhe rakchs bulaya.

KKG ' rakchas'''.. humrai itni himaat ki hum aapko rakchs bulaye  the great ASR ko nahi''.. bilkul nahi waise aapne darwaza kyun khola aapne JP ji ko naukari se nikal dia kya jo unki duty kar rahe hai.

ASR ' very funny per mujhe is trah ke majak pasand nahi.

KKG ' hum to bhool hi gaye the ki aap ASR hai aapko majak to kaya aapko to husna bhi pasand nahi hai.

ASR ' tum baat ko kha se kaha pahuch deti ho ab andar aana hai ya bahar hi khre rehna hai.

KKG ' aana hai na. aap hutenge tab to hum andar aayenge na. aap hutiye saamne se hume anjli ji se kaam hai.

            (Khushi andar aati hai or hall me akar anjli ko aawaz deti hai.)

KKG ' anjli ji, LA ji Nani ji'''. Aap sab kha hai hum aa gaye,

ASR ' bol to aise rahi ho jaise koi film star ho jo aapne aane ki announcement kar rahi ho.

KKG ' dekhiye hume aapse baat karne me koi interest nahi hai hume anjli ji se kaam hai.

ASR ' tum late ho gayi puja khtam ho gayi hai.

KKG ' pta hai per isme humari galti nahi hai wo to hum ghar se late nikle phir koi auto nahi mila or uske bad ye jam'''. Humari halat khrab ho gayi. Hum anjli ji se maafi mag leneg. Kah hai wo.

ASR ' ghar me koi nahi hai hawan ke baad sab mannt ki chunri chdhane mandir gaye hai.

KKG ' iska matlab ghar me sirf  aap or hum''''.

ASR ' haan''..

KKG ' to fir hum jaate hai.

ASR ' ruko khushi'' a baa hi gayi ho to di se mil kar jaao. Kuch der me sab aa jayenge.

KKG ' nahi hum jaa rahe hai.

ASR ' khushi mai koi suchmuch ka rakchs nhi hoo jo tumhe kha jaunga. Tum yaha hall me unka intzar karo main apne kamre me kuch kaam kar leta hoo.

KKG ' thik hai hum yahi baith jate hai.

            (ASR apne kmre me chla jaat ahi or khushi wahi sofe pe baith jati hai kuch der baad ASR kamre se aata hai)

ASR ' khushi wo'''

KKG ' kuch kaam tha aapko. Aap apne kmre se bahar kyun chale aaye.

ASR ' main koi beemar nahi hu jise apne kmre se bahar niklna mana hai. Main to ye kehne aaya tha ki agar tumhe koi pareshani na ho to mere liye ek cup chai bana dogi.

KKg ' chai'' haa hum bana denge.

ASR ' thik hai main apne kamre me hoo tum chai lekar wahi aa jao.

            (ASR apne kmre me chla jata hai. KKG kuch der baad chai lekar aati hai or ASr ko chai dekar jaane lagti hai.)

ASR ' Khushi apni chai lekar bhi yah aa jaao mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.

KKG ' nahi hum thik hai hum niche hi chai pi lenge,

ASR ' khushi kabhi meri koi baat sun bhi lo apni chai lekar yahi aa jao main tumse kuch baat karna chahta hoo.

            (KKG kuch der baad apni chai ke saath ASR ke kamre me aa jaati hai.)

ASR ' to ''. Khushi tumhari shadi kab hai?

KKG ' abhi date nahi fix hui hai.

ASR ' khushi tum apni shadi se khush to ho na.

KKG ' ji'''. Ji haa per aap ye kyun puch rahe hai.

ASR ' wo isliye ki tumhare chehre per wo khushi nahi dikh rahi jo us ladki ke chehre per honi chahiye jiski shadi hone wali hai.

KKG ' nahi to aise koi baat nahi hai/

ASR ' accha to fir tumhare Babuji ki aisi halata me bhi tum shadi kyun kar rahi ho kahi tumhari koi mazboori'..

KKG ' Arnav ji aap jis socity me rehte hai na waha sab kuch apni marzi se hota hai per hum middle class walo ke ghar ladki ki shadi sabse bari preshani hoti hai, aise me hume apne bare me sochne ka waqt hi kha milta hai. Jo ghar wale chahte hai uske aage chup chap apna sir jhookana parta hai.

ASR ' to iska matlab tum is shadi se khush nahi ho!

KKG ' kya fark prta hai Arnav ji her sapne sach to nahi hote. Ab dekhiye na humne sapna dekha tha ki humrai shadi humare sapne ke rajkumar se hogi aise rajkumar se jo humare saare spne pure karega. Humari galtiyo humari shrarato ko bardast karega. Hum jaise hai hume waisa hi apnayega. Per humrai shadi jisase ho rahi hai wo thode serious hai to hume bhi apne aap ko badlna parega.

ASR - Or agar tumhe aisa koi mil jaaye jo tumse pyaar karta ho tumhare sapne pure kare. Tumhe waisa hi apnaye jaisi tum ho. Tumhari shrarate bardast kare unper naraz na ho to'.

KKG ' arnav ji sapno ke rajkumar sapno me hi hote hai asal zindgi me aisa kuch nahi hota.

ASR ' khushi'.. dekho mujhe baato ko sundar se saza kar unhe ghuma fira kar khehna nahi aata isliye sidhe sidhe kehta hoo I LUV U.

            (KKG ke hath se chai chut jaati hai.)

KKG ' arnav ji hum aapke yaha kaam karte hai iska matlab ye nahi ki aap humse itna bara mazak karenge. Hume aisa mazak pasand nahi.

ASR ' main mazak nahi kar rah main such keh raha hoo.

KKG ' such!

ASR ' haa such. Dekho khushi main nahi jaanta ye kab hua kaise hua per bus ho gaya. Mere dil me job hi tha tumhare liye use maine apne gusse apnu nafrat ke beech bahut chupan ki kosis ki yaha tak ki Lavnya se sagai ke liye haa bhi kar di per ab mujhe lagta hai ki agar maine or der ki to bhut der ho jayegi. Mujhe koi haq nahi hai ki main Lavnya ki zindgi barbad karoo. Jab main usase pyaar hi nahi karta to fir usase shadi karke use taklif dene ka kya fayda. Main tumse pyaar karta hoo khushi. Tumse shadi krna chahta hoo. Agar maine ye baa tab nahi batai to shayad bahut der ho jayegi. Isliye aaj maine tumse keh dia I LUV U khushi.

KKG ' per ais kaise ho sakta hai? Ais nahi ho sakta.

ASR ' kyun nahi ho sakta?

KKG ' Hum ''' hum KKG hai or aap''' aap ASR hai.

ASR ' to kya ASR ko kisi se pyaar nahi ho sakta.

KKG ' wo baat nahi hai aapko pyaar ho sakta hai per humse'''..

ASR ' kyun tumhe lgta hi kit um me koi kami hai ya tum mere layak nahi ho.

KKG ' dekh isliye hum saath nahi ho sakte kyunki aap kisi baat me haar nahi mante or hum haar manana chahte nahi. Kal ko agar humari shadi ho gayi to bhi humari shadi shuda life kaisi hogi sochiye.

ASR ' aam pati patni jaisi hi hogi or kaisi hogi haa agar tum chahti ho ki tumhari shadi ke baad ki life rajakumar or rajkumariyo jaisi hogi to is bare me main kuch keh nahi sakta haa per mujhse jitna ho sakega main tumhare sapne pure karne ki kosis karoonga.

KKG ' aap humari puri baat sunte kyun nahi hai. Hum to ye keh rahe the ki hum dono kitne alag hai. Aapko meetha mana hai or hum thahre jalebiyo ke deewane.

ASR ' to tum ho na'.. tum jo jalebiya khaogi unse humari zindgi me meethas bhar jayegi.

KKG ' aap'' aap to kabhi huste hi nahi or hum.. hume husna bahut pasand hai humesha hauste rehte hai hum.

ASR ' tumhari husi ki goonj se humari zindgi me khnakti rehgi. Or tumhare saath rehte rehte main bhi husna sikh hi jaunga.

KKG ' hum to humesha ulti sidhi harkate karte rehte hai or aapko to her cheej perfact chahiye. Hum to bilkul bhi perfact hai.

ASR ' to main bana doonga. Or waise bhi life me her cheej perfact ho to life me maza nahi aata.

KKG ' aapki naak per to her waqt gussa baitha rehta hai aap jab office se aayenge to apna saara gussa humper nikalenge.

ASR  - tum ho na''.. tumhari ek muskan se mera sara gussa gayab ho jayega. Or fir main tumhe pyaar bhi to karoonga na.

KKG ' per aap''.

ASR ' dekho khushi please bahane mat banao. Mujhe tumhara jawab chahiye.

KKG ' jawab''' kaisa jawab?

ASR ' dekho khushi mujhme koi buri aadat nahi hai. Main sigrate nahi pita shrab ko haath bhi nahi lgata. Ladkiyo ke piche nahi bhagta. Meri life me bus LA hai. Kehne ko to wo meri girlfriend hai per humare bech GF-BF jaisi koi baat nahi hai. Gussa bahut aata hai per tum saath rahogi to gussa kam ho jayega. Baki tum to janti ho ab batao shadi karogi mujhse?

KKG ' Arnav ji hum'''..

ASR ' dekho khushi main jais ahoo tumhare saamne ho shadi ke baad tum apne hisab se mujhe badal sakti ho. Main nahi jaanta ki tumne apne pati se jitna pyaar expect kia hai main tumhe utna de paunga ya nahi per haa mere paas jitna pyaar hai wo sab tumhara hoga. Or ye main pure dil se keh raha hoo. Ab mujhe tumhare jawab ka intzar rahega.

KKG ' hum kaise itni zaldi '''..

ASR ' zaldi nahi  hai. Tum apna waqt le lo. Main kal sham usi mandir me tumhara intzar karonga jaha maine tumhara teej ka vart toda tha. Tumhara jwaba job hi mujhe manzoor hoga.

(tabhi hall se baki gharwalo ki awaz aati hai. Khushi chauk jaati hai.)

KKG ' ab hum chalte hai. Lagta hai sab aa gaye hai. Hum anjli ji se mil le.

ASR ' thik hai per kal sham main tumhara intzar karoonga. Or haa Khushi mujhe maloom hai ki nakamyabi mere naseeb me nahi hai.

            (KKG ASR ke kamre se neche hall me chali jati hai.)

I HOPE U ALL LIKED IT. PLEASE DO COMMENTS. AND SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE
 

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Edited by vs-kmh - 12 years ago
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love it 

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wow vika nice one didnt know ur were doing an ff on arhi its great :)
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Super Cutee =) 😍 Hope Khushi Says YESSS 😳