FF:Maurya- The Samrat [Part23 updated on pg 56] - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
one more awesome part
continue soon
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nice n waiting for update
characters me phir jodi bana di cgm n hdhrudhra ki as 
avdhesh n arpita ki in gkd before nice 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too Good !! Humari To Haste Haste Dimag Kharab Ho Gaya !! 😆😆😆😆😆
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Part-6

The 25th Tactic

Somewhere in jungle

[Cornelia and CGM walking and searching for the way out]

Cornelia: Bandhu!!! Tum se ek baat puchu???

CGM: Keh to aise rahi ho ki agar nahin bolunga to nahi poochogi…

Cornelia[giving him a tough look]: Ye tum ne itna achcha yudhdha karna kahaan se sikha???

CGM: Ye sab mere acharya ki kripa hai jiski wajah se aaj main magadh ka……[stops]

Cornelia: Magadh ka????

CGM: sainak hoon!!! Kyon tumhe kya laga???

Cornelia: Nahin.. nahin… kuch nahin… Kitni vichitra baat hai na sirf ek "sainik" banne ke liye apne acharya ko itna dhanyawaad!!!

CGM: Main laalchi nahin hoon….. Aur tumhe bata doon…. Ki… sirf apne aap ko hi zyaada budhdhimaan mat samajhna… Mere paas bhi budhdhi hai…

Cornelia: Achcha!!!!??? Mujhe toh pataa hi nahin tha!!![giggles]

[CGM then suddenly stops]

CGM: Ruko!!!

Cornelia: Kyon kya hua???…. Budhdhi ghar par bhul aaye ho… Ye yaad aagaya..???

CGM: Nahin…. Koi hai yahaan…..

Cornelia: Apne saamne ye badi si prani nahin dikh rahi kya????

CGM: Mera matlab hai hum dono ke alava… Laao mujhe meri talwaar wapas do….

Cornelia: Ye toh tumhe tab hi milegi jab main sahi salamat apne shivir mein pahunch jaaun… tumhara kya bharosa… Raaste main kahin meri hatya kar di toh??? Ye kya koi meri aayu hai marne ki???

CGM: Agar marna nahin chahti toh meri talwar mujhe wapas do….

[suddenly a man comes from behind holding a sword in his hand]

[in fear, Cornelia hold CGM's arms tightly]

CGM: Ab ye kaun hai???

Cornelia: Ye un adivaasiyon mein se ek hai… balki unka sardar hai…. Shayad…

CGM: Par tumne toh un sab ko murchit kar diya na???

Cornelia: Haan … par ab ye jaldi hosh mein aa gaya toh main kya karun??? … Aur waise bhi… ek toh maine itne saare aadmiyon ko akele sambhala…. Un sab ki talwaron ko thikane lagaya…. Itna kya kam tha???

CGM: agar talwaron ko thikane lagaaya toh iske paas ye talwaar kahaan se aayi???

Cornelia: Mujhe kya pata?????

Aadivaasi: Ae!!!!! Bade vishitra ho tum dono!!!! Main yahaan tumhari mrityu ban kar khada hun aur tum dono aapas mein kya khusur phusur kar rahe ho????

[Hearing this both look at each other and when realize at they are standing very close, Cornelia suddenly leaves CGM's hand and gets apart]

Aadivaasi:[to cornelia] Wo tum hi thi na??? Jisne abhi abhi hum sab ko chal se murchit kiya???

Cornelia: Chal se nahin toh kya bal se karti???? Mujhe dekh kar lagta hai mujh mein aap jaise 'mahaan' yodhdha se ladne ka bal hai??? Par koi baat nahin… [then pointing towards CGM] Ye jo insaan yahaan khada hai na??? Isme aapse ladne ka bal hai… Ye aapse aavashya ladega who bhi bina talwaar ke???

CGM: Kya????? [bringing his face near cornelia's] Tum sach mein paagal ho gayi ho??? Use uksa kyon rahi ho…. Main isse se lad sakta hoon par meri talwaar toh do!!!

Cornelia: Bandhu!!! Mujh par vishwaas rakho… Abhi kuch shan mein hum is musibat se baahar nikalne waale hain… Bas meri haan mein haan milaao!!! [then to Aadivaasi] Toh shrimaan!! Bataiye kitni yudhdha kala sikhi hai aapne???

Aadivaasi: Puri Choubis [24]…..

Cornelia: Bas!!!! Choubis???? Ye jo aadmi mere saath khada hai na??? Isne pachchis [25] sikhi hai… Hai na???

CGM: [to cornelia in low voice] Ye kya bol rahi ho??? Mujhe toh iski bataayi hui ek bhi nahi aati… 25 kahaan se aayegi????

Cornelia: Bich bich mein murge ki tarah baandh mat maro!!! Bas 'haan' keh do!!!

[CGM nods]

Aadivaasi: Mujhe moorkh samajh rakha hai??? Pachchisvi kala hoti hi nahin!!! Bhoolo mat main udti huyi chidiya ke bhi par gin leta hoon……

Cornelia: [in low voice] Bekaar aadmiyon ko aur kaam ho kya hota hai????

Adivaas: Kya kaha tumne???

Cornelia: Kuch nahin… main toh bas ye bol rahi thi ki lagta hai aap dar rahe hai???

Adivaasi: Main kisi se nahin darta!!! Bataao kya hai pachchisvi kala??

Cornelia: Aap dono ko ….. aa… aankhon par patti bandh kar yudhdha karna hoga!!!

CGM [in mind]: Ise kaise pata ki mujhe dhwani bhedan aata hai???

Adivaasi: Thik hai ye lo….

[takes out a piece of cloth from his apparel and blindfolds himself… Meanwhile CGM also does the same]

Cornelia: Toh aap ne kar liya???

Aadivaasi: Haan

Cornelia: Aapko kuch nahin dikh raha???

Aadivaasi: Bilkul nahin….

Cornelia: Toh phir pacchis tak giniye…

Aadivaasi: Pachchis tak kyon???

Cornelia: aaa…aa. Pachchisvi kala hai na ….. isliye…

[saying this, takes out the piece of cloth from CGM's eyes, hold his hands and prompts her to go with her]

Aadivaasi: Thik hai….. Ek……Do….. Teen…… Chaar…..

[while he was counting, Cornelia and CGM had already went somewhere and by the time when his counting ended, they have fled far away from that place… which led them go further deep in the jungle instead of coming out of it]

Meanwhile in Indian camp

[a young and tall man dressed in Greek uniform enters]

Mehir: Acharya Chanakya!!! Aapne mujhe bulaaya tha???

Chanakya: Aaaooo Mehir!!!! Haan …. Maine tumhe bulvaaya tha…. Yaad hai tumhe maine ek mahatvapurna karya saupa tha???

Mehir: Ji Acharya var!!!! MUjhe smaran hai…. Aur aapko jaan ke prasannta hogi ki… Amatya Rakshas ka kuch pata chala hai…..

Chanakya: Kya???

Mehir: Mujhe apne vishwast sootron se pata chala hai ki Magadh se jaane ke baad unhone Parvatiya raja Malayaketu ke paas sharan li thi…. Parantu ab wo wahaan nahi hain…. Kuch ek varsh pehle wo wahaan se bhi chale gaye….

Chanakya: Vichitra baat hai… ek saal pehle hi ye yavan bhi bhartiya seemaon par bhatakne lage the….

Mehir: Toh kya aapko lagta hai ki Amatya un yavano ke saath mil gaye hain???

Chanakya: Sambhav hai!!! Kyonki parvatiya rajya se baahar jaane ke do keval do marg hain… Ek… jo bharat ki taraf khulta hai ….. aur doosra jo un yavan pradeshon ki taraf… bharat wo aaye nahin… kyonki agar bharat mein hote toh hume aavashya pata hota…. Bacha sirf ek marg…

Mehir: Amatya Rakshas un yavano ke saath hain???

Chanakya: Tum abhi waapas jaao Mehir!! Kisi ko kahin tum par sandeh naa ho jaaye!!!

Mehir: Pranam Acharya!!!

[Mehir then leaves the camp]

Chanakya: [ to himself] Amatya Rakshas Kya karne ki soch rahen hai??? Aur wo wahan yavan chawni mein is samay kya kar rahen honge??? Bahut saare prashno ke uttar dene hai unhe!!! Par pehle is baat ka pata lagana hoga ki wo sach mein Parwatiya Pradesh, Nagaraa gaye the ya nahin…….

 

Part -6 done!!!! PLZ comment kaisa laga?????

Precap for the next part: Chanakya's efforts to find Amatya... is on... and the jungle mein mangal continues...

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
hahha too good part! 👏 really funny!




Swetha
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊very nice... !!!!!! :-) i just loved this part :-)))))) PL😉  UPDATE THE STORY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE !!!!!  I AM REALLY WAITING TO READ THE NEXT PART... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you: Swetha, chand 1234, Radhikarani123 and Praman1234[for liking it]

@ chand 1234... yeah dear i'll update it as soon as possible may be within 2 or 3 days...

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