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Maaneet FF : My BrotherKeeDulhan precap 127 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
dev ne geet ko ring pehnayi hainooo

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Posted: 12 years ago
hayyy  i want to kill this dev😑😑😑😑. mujha maaneet hi chahiya πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why you all hate DEV yaar don't hate me i m a gud guy Buddies...Just wait i will prove it to you All
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome updates luvd dem
cnt w8 2 read more
fanx 4 da pm plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: magicia


mainey kuch nahee kiya ..i gave them full freedom to select what they want ..and sehar being like dev ..i mean same to same ..felt more comfortable in taking devs part ...meim   kya karey  ( sehar ..when throw chapals ..throw in pairs ..ok .)


i selected him only because u said he is shy and sweet type...i thought shy hai tu Os k bare mein Kum Likhna pare ga  and you turned him Raper and womanizer Annie Di es mein mera koi qasoor nahi hai πŸ˜³
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved all the updates
it was amazing
do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 20
 
-----------------Flash back continues----------------
 
Some ticklish sensation and a feeling of warm weight over her brought her back to senses and what she registered after gaining awareness of her surroundings, made her senseless again..

For first few moments, she was just unable to comprehend, what was going on , she felt a weight rubbing over her body, and hot breathes were giving her ticklish feeling at the nape of her neck, making her insane

She knew, whatever that was happening was not right at all, but the desires and need rising in her body are over powering everything.. stopping her from taking any step against.. she had no sense of right or wrong at that moment.. She was lying hardly clad beneath a man; she didn't even know the name of..!! But she was like immune to any reason, justification or excuses for whatever happening to her.. All she could feel was a weird sensation and immense pleasure..

Then suddenly the rubbing and tickling stopped and the weight on her, lifted up slightly.. every cell of her body was apprehensive of the next move of the person lying above her.. she looked at him.. those pair of brown eyes were intensely looking in hers, asking something, seeking permission, permission for something, she couldn't allow in the wildest of her dream.. But that was when she would be in her senses..  Here all her desires were making her insane.. completely senseless.. all she wanted was just to flow with the moment..the warmth she was receiving from him was making her cross all the limits of sanity.. how could she neglect the plead of those eyes, when she herself wanted to give in to the moment.. she blinked her eyes in acceptance and her hands unknowingly began removing all hindrance they faced to feel the skin, so warm and inviting.. she rubbed his back with gentle movements of her hands.. just then she saw him cupping her face and finding any hint of pain or regret in her eyes and making sure that he wasn't hurting her.. she hugged him tight in response to assure him that she wouldn't hurt.. and then the pain and pleasure she felt due to the subsequent event.. overtook every other feeling or sensation..

 
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Edited by softly_spoken - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous ... ...Sweeet ...Speechless..

u tickled my senses baby ...super update ...

please continue ...

Edited by magicia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: magicia

Marvelous ... ...Sweeet ...Speechless..


u tickled my senses baby ...super update ...

please continue ...

 
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Posted: 12 years ago
All the updates are amazing...πŸ‘
Nice one..
Continue soon😊