Mg ff ZIDD PART 4 PAGE 14 - Page 8

awesome upadte
loved it

awsome update

very interesting update...

but it was very short yaar...padna shuru kiya and it finished...

Maan kissed her and Geet is so innocent that she is not angry on being kissed forcibly but getting scared that he must be a vampire...

thanx for pm...

and for the note below the update...

the style of ur writing is very good and there is no mistake...
little mistakes everybody does...so don't worry and continue...
Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago

awesome update .. Geet is sooo cute ... but why did Maan kissed her forcefully ... idiot na ho to ...

Lovely update dear 👏
He kissed her 😍
love this innocent geet n naughty maan 😉
Plz dear .. Try to give little long updates plzzz

omg omg...maan pehle mulakat mein hi kiss kar diya geet ko...hi bhagwan...abb kya hoga geet ka...

aur geet...humari innocent geet...usse laga ki maan vampire hai aur uske khoon peene aya hai...aur kya boli geet ne...uski khoon karwa hai...🤣🤣🤣🤣...hans hans k pet mein dard hone lage...bechara maan ...geet ne kya se kya bana di usse...oh god...

awesome n beautiful update...

its amazing...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Aww geet is too cute
Awesome update

Awesome update...

Superb one..

nice update