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-Dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 2 - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago
u again updating... uff... am jumping in joy...
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dhundlae aks

part 28

 
 
 
he cupped her face & raised to meet his eyes.. I am not
she looked into his eyes.. their diluted eyes froze. It seemed like freezing gaze without smile & silence for a few seconds.. first time they stared into each others eyes.. lost, drunk..

 

 


he smirked mujhe aisen mat dehko.. tumhe pyar hojayega
she blushed & looked down. He rested his head on hers.. now u r blushing he pulled her red cheeks
she giggled & moved of his arms.. he fell on the car.. & slipped down
she guffawed. He immediately straightened himself & opened the car door.
Bye..
tum kanha ja rahi ho
armaan ke pass
he was cheesed off hearing that name nth time today.. tum kanhi nahi jaa rahi samjhi
main tho javoongi..
she turned & left..
he lifted her briskly trapping her waist from back.. she kicked her leg & hand in the air..
 
 
She kept kicking & hitting, trying anything to get him away, but he fought harder.
bachvo..bachvo.. mujhe iss dhust dhanva se bachavoo.. she screamed no one heard..
he carried her & dumped her in the car front seat. He put the seat belt around her.. she waked him randomly.. chodo mujhe.. chodo.. kidnapper ..
he covered her mouth with his palm.. chup.. ek dum chup..
she fluttered her thick lashes & looked at him querulously.
he pressed his palm harder.. chup..
she pouted & turned her face.
He came around & got behind the wheels. He was so drunk.. it took him a while to start the car.
She muffled her laughter.. he glared at her.. she looked outside the window muting her giggle.
 
He finally managed to roll the car on the road. He gave a proud glance to her..like she cared..
 
he didn't know where he was driving to.. surely not KM.. he will slotted if he did.
Mujhe ghar jana hain she cried cutely
nahi dad gussa karen ge
u said ur not scared of anyone
she taunted
I respect him
aur aapki GF
he break the car suddenly with a jerk.. the vehicle skidded & slipped into the rough road leading to a deserted place surrounded with thick trees.. the moment he could stop the car.. he came around & pulled her out..she is not my GF samjhi.. wat is with all of u.. ek ladka ladki baat karthen hain tho BF-GF banjathen hain kya
she kept looking at him innocently
 
his phone rang again.. shoo.. he silenced her..& looked at the number.. his eyes lit up..
veer.. maren yaar..he began to talk without even pressing the green answer button
she laughed.. hearing the phone ring again & he continuing to talk..
answer ur call she pressed the button couple of times before getting it right  for him
ooo
he looked at the phone
raj ' Maan?? Maan??
he shook his head.. veer maren yaar kaisen hain tu
raj ' tu kanha hain?
Maan looked around.. main.. main.. pata nahi ..
ek min..
he leaned over her.. main kanha hoon?
She looked around... meren saat
Maan copied her meren saat
raj repeated ' meren saat?
By now he knew Maan was totally drunk & was with some girl.. shit girl.. wat the hell is he doing.
Raj got worried ' Maan tu kisi ke saat hain
Maan giggled resting his head on hers.. she giggled
raj sighed ' Maan tu kisi ke saat hain
Maan ' main.. ms..mrs.. stra...rect..
ek min.. main wife ke saat hoon
she waked him main wife nahi hoon
ho
he pulled her in a hug with one hand
nahi hoon, she struggled weakly in his embrace.
 
Raj(POV)
holly shit!!!  yah kar kya raha hain?
Oh god !! why is he so drunk?  pata nahi iss ladki saat kya kya karenga?
he doesn't even realize wat he is doing when he is drunk.
Maan ' yeh mera yaar hain ..say hi to him
hi veer
she screamed
raj closed his eyes crap..she also drunk. .. simply perfect.. tali hubby tali wife.. perfect tali family
He tried to knock some sense into him.. Maan plz.. hosh main aa.. ur drunk.. ur plz kuch gadbad mat karna. Maan .. Maan,,... here maan was busy fighting with her
wo mera veer hain why r u calling him veer
mera bhi veer hain she said trying to stand straight
tum veer ko veer nahi bol sakti
bolongi.. aapka veer mera veer
nahi nahi..
he retorted
katti.. u said I am ur wife.. & u r not even sharing ur veer with me
I will not talk to u..
she walked away
Maan complained to raj.. veer dehkna.. wo wife mujh se fight kar rahi..
how can I share u. ur only mine
raj was having fun hearing their conversation now. Especially the part fighting over him..
Maan screamed.. veer tu kuch bolna
raj cleared his throat ' kanha gayen wo
Maan ' kaun
raj ' wo teri wife
Maan ' meri wife?? yeh kab huwa? main tho aab bhi virgin hoon
Raj closed his eyes..
Maan was looking around.. it was dark.. trees all around.. he could barely make out where she was.
Maan became slightly worried ' veer wife sach main chali gayen
raj ' kanha?
Maan ' jungle main

raj became little worried abt where they were... from the background silence he could make out they were in some lonely place.. now his mentioning jungle.. this was not safe
raj shouted.. Maan ussen akle mat chod .. kuch hogaya tho
Maan shook his head .. cleared his ears ' kissen
raj ' dam.. uss ladki ko
Maan ' kaun ladki?
Raj hits his head getting really worried now.
 
 
(Maan in drunk state saw Geet but did not recognize her, she also didn't recognize each other. The wife part stuck to his lips because.. he spoke abt that with Daadi.. so he was just drunk.. & the word was in his lips.. same thing with armaan word.. he remembered getting pissed off with that word earlier that day)
 

precap
Maan looking for his wife(lol)
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
perfect talli part
hats off to you yaar
too awesome or say talli convo
veer part is chkhana with drink πŸ˜‰

raat aur baaaki hai
opar se jungle
god save talli maaneet (Mr and Mrs Stranger) 😳
πŸ‘



Edited by pritm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome n funny part!!!!!!!!
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...loved it...both r drunken and doing mastiπŸ˜‰ 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. Too good! Craving for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 27
 
Awesome update...
but yaar what is this whenever the spend some nice time together, they dont see each other... or dont remember each other...
and i now officially hate prachi... ek to she is friend to Geet or us k baare main dil main ulti seedhi baatain rakhti hai...
and secondly i hate maan blushing on her name...
i know at the end its a maaneet lovestory but plz plz pretty plz dont make maan fall in love with prachi first... make Geet his first love... and that prachi... make her negative...or anything...but not the one whom Maan admires
continue soon.
expecting alot from talli maaneet
 
Edited by softly_spoken - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just out of the world.awesome.i really wanna eat both of them up right here now.awww they are so tempting..but yaar plz make maan & geet know that they are the person whom they meet in their most amazing condition.race,trial room,in drunk state.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story got momentum lol...
me like the TALI state of Maneet ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
so the tali hubby is looking for his tali wife ..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
hope to see both talies together ..
lovely update dear i loved the conversation b/w Raj and Maan .
too cute .
waiting for the next update...⭐️