'Mohabbat' AR OPEN FF

Hey guz i was just watching DMG and got an idea which i wanted to pin down and make an ff but didn't know how to cont. so thaught to make it an open fanfic plz read and cont.😳 here it goes: It starts from where Ar broke up and than ridz brings armaan back from kausali ( i think thats where he left off to) and he doesn't want to handle nana's case with her.

 PART 1

       Armaan and ridz go 2wards the general ward. Armaan starts checking Nana

Ar: sister woh chart thena plz. he starts reading the chart,when

Ri: umh Armaan woh inhe lung infection bhi hai hume inhe uski bhi medication deni chahiye.

armaan ignores her and keeps checking the chart. ridz gets pissed

Ri: armaan tum sun bhi rahe ho mai kya keh rahi hoon, ARMAAN!

Ar: WHAT!!!!! dheko tum..

he gets cut by the announcement sab lok plz dhiyan se rahei general ward ke bahar kuch electrical problem chal rahi he.

armaan again starts to do his work.

Ar: Sister inhe koi Aur bhi Dawai dhi hai ya yahi di hai.

Ri: woh inki dwai change nahi ki but mujhe lagta hai change karni chahiye aur kuch test...

Ar: u no wat, here aap ko jo karna hai app karo, akele ye case handle kariye kyunki mujhe aap ke saath kamm karne me koi intrest nai hai.

Nana: e apple bulbul se aisai baat kyu karaha hai.

ladayi toh saab me hoti hai is ka matlab ye toh nahi ke tum isse is thara baat daro. aur waise bhi sab jante hai tu iski kitni jintha kar tha hai, isko zara si bhi kroch aye to tu kaise kamp ut tha...

Ar: mujhe koi farq nahi pardtha ki iske saath kya hota hai ye chahe mar hi kyun na jaye bas mujse dur rahe, me is ki shakal bhi nahi dekh na chahta.

by now armaan was so angry hi didn't no wat he was sayin, ridzzy on the other hand was hurt listening to him when somthin else caught her eye and she got scared as hell. she saw anjali standin by some wires which were about tu explode.

Ri: DDDIII!!!!!!!!!!! she runs 2 her before armaan coukld finish wat he waz sayin.

armaan gets shocked seein her yelling and looks back seeing her run in that direction. and be4 anyone could do anythin ridz pushes anji an dats when d wires explode. no one can see any thin because of smoke every where. they see anji coming out callin ridz

but can't see ridz, armaan starts to panic. then wen d smoke is clearin they see ridz coming out expressionless but no one notices because they are happy to see her safe. andji goes and hug her,

An: thank god tum tik ho, tume chot tho nahin lagi, ridz tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi

just dan she feels somethin wet on ridz back, she lifts her hand and sees blood, right than riddhima falls down.

An: RRIIDDZZZY!!!!!!...

 

SOME ONE PLZ CONT. CUZ I RAN OUT OF IDEAS😳

BUT SOME ONE DO CONT. PLZ U DON'T WANT ME HEART BROKEN RIGHT TINKIN NO ONE LIKED IT💔😭

 

 

 

 

   Index:

  Part 1= p.1

          2= p.3

 

 

Edited by kashluv4ever - 12 years ago

nice one yaar 

Heyya
i've would hv continued bt as its AR i cnt cos its nw very much difficult fr me to imagine Kash as AR
so srry if my cmnt hrted
bt nice concept plot is also nice n i would lk to suggest u dat ridz memory loss wouldb better fr d story den js shw armaan's luv fr ridz his tries to mke her remember everythin d moments n tym dey hv spended wd eachother
fr dis u js go to youtube n search the vow trailer ull get idea frm it
here is d link
youtube.com/watch?gl=US&hl=en&client=mv-google&v=7JoXHO3ceUY
u c it doesn matter frm wat we get inspired or wat we write d thing which matter is hw we write ok
hope dis wil help u if anythin other dan dis u would lk to ask pm me wil b helpin u any tym
ok
luv
BipinEdited by arsh4life - 12 years ago

nice one dear

I am not much of a writer but I agree, this is really nice...you should continue! Edited by Shona_Mayur - 12 years ago

Nice start yaar

i would cont. but don't have any ideas and don't want riddz to forget her memory even though the idea was good😳 Edited by kashluv4ever - 12 years ago

Hiii
Awesome
loved it
Can't wait 4 more
Thanks 4 da pm

Wow nice part i hope ridz is allright 😕

awsome luv it