Arnav's gift to Khushi: Suhaag Raat OS-Part 2 p 8 - Page 4

wow, that was soo good, i can't wait for the next part, i was laughing reading this.😆

wow fatima dear awesome OS and v.funny 😆& i must say v.realistic it could happen u know really enjoyed it with a smile in my face as 4 the payal perfect way 2 return it awesome imagination & good work dear tanx😊 jorda!

haha, nice ya...he carries the payal everywhere! for a moment i thought how could he carry payal jiji in a pocket phir strike hua...🤣

OH i love it ,

nice one.. suits and goes with current track very well.. kash CV tumhara OS padhe aur apani story aise aage badhaye...

Originally posted by: Bloem123

very nice os

i so lovd ur story!!!!

Originally posted by: naddiya26

too cute loved it... might be possible it is in his pants or wallet  

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Fatima!!!

This was a wonderful OS!!

You've got the perfect punjabi dialogues for the Dhabba owners!

Arnav and Khushi's reactions to what they were asked and told were priceless!

The payal was a very nice touch!!!

Thanks for the PM sugar...😊

Originally posted by: Haniibee

Wow! It was great! The way you made the punjabi people so nosy was awesome and the payal idea was awesome!

You have a great imagination!

Keep writing!