Where's My Destiny - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
good one u r really writing it nice please continue writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz add me on ur pm list
it was very good
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooohhh...swayam is gonna be dead...cant wait for yhe next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...cute story...!!!!
update soon...and thnx 4 d PM...and please pm again...

-Saumya
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice updts dear
so swayam is taking revenge...by taking krya 4 dinner
n rey ... is confused by the phone convo..lol
cant wait 4 next
u r going too good!! =)
see yaaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW dat was soo AWSUM😃...hahaha Swaym wants to take revenge😆 lolz i cnt wait to read wat he is planning😃...nd Kriyansh ka nok-jhok how cute...especially dis🤣🤣
K: Oh God! mujhe uper bula lo...kahan chor diya he mujhe...
R: me bhi chalun kya?
K:(frustuated) no thnk u... me akeli hi thek hun..🤣
dis was an AMAZING update👏
update soon nd thnx for d pm😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
Guyz sorry i didnt update that cuz of my tests ...
plz pray for me ... N sorry again ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 5
Kriya wore a Black shiny short dress...she again and again stretching it as it was too short...but she was looking awesome in it..All college boys were drooling over her..Weaklings to thek hen but dazzling bhai bhi...oye hoyeee..kriya reached the basketball court n when she saw swayam in white shirt n black jeans...he was looking out of the world...tooo cute that she couldnt stop herself ..
K: you r looking tooo cute swayam...
Swayam sees kriya and got a shock then he suddenly winked her...
K: hawww
Sw: u r looking fabolus kriya...
K thank u...
Sw: ur always welcome...
so lets go...
K: ok but tum amar , bharat or sab ko bata to do ... ye na ho k wo humen dhondhte rhen...
Sw: oh... ok
Now to rey
Rey was standing outside the rehersal hall when he hear two dazzler boys talking abt kriya...
1st boy: yaar aj kya lag rhi thi kriya...
2nd boy:han... mujhe nhi pata wo itni hot bhi lag sakti he..
Rey gets angry on the word Hot..
Rey ( to himself) ye meri baat cutter ko aysa kese bol sakte hen...
use hot kehne ka haq sirf mera he...
Rey ( to boys ) tum log Dazzler ho k aik weakling ki baat kar rhe ho????
2nd : kyun tumhen koi problem???
1st : Dazzler ho ya weakling hot to wo lag rhi thi...
Rey: han bohat bari problem he...
kisi larki k bare me aysa nhi kehte...tuchtuchtuch...
1st:Kyun tu us ka bhai he kya???
Rey:abhe bhai to mat banao...
1st Boy:To kya bodyguard he???
2nd:chal yaar hum log bohat late ho gaye hen...
c'mon lets go..
1st: han chal ( n they left)
Rey: kash bodyguard hi hota par wo baatcutter to ye bhi nhi bane de gi...
Rey:(to himself) chal rey ab dhundh us miss dehradun ko...
zara me bhi to dekhun kya ho rha he...
 
Guyz i m so sorry i didnt updated but i will try my best to update more soon...
Hope u like it..
Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 12 years ago
Parvathi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice man...dun tell me kria likes swayam...tell me its something to get their respective loves jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update dude! Can't wait to read the next part :D