Khushi is Kidnapped Updated Part 19 Page 82 - Page 7

Part 4 has been added it is on page one. Enjoy and please leave your comments on this page :-) Edited by KaushalyaFan - 12 years ago

Very goood...plz cont soon...

WOW!!!

Loved part 4! Amazing!

I can't wait to see how Arnav handles this situation! At night, all alone, jumping out of jeeps, no cell phone, no contact, the cops on his tail, out in the middle of nowhere...what's he gonna do?

Such a BURNING question!

Poor Khushi! What a clever way to ship her out of the hospital! Disguise her as his wife! Shyam, you think of everything, don'tcha?

Brilliant!

And Arnav jumping out a jeep at break neck speed, making a run for his life...

Abso-freakin'-lutely fantastic!!!!

I'll be waiting to see how Arnav fends for himself out in the wilds, eh?

And somebody please help our darling Khushi! I can't see her in trouble!

Waitin' with bated breath, dear KFan...loved every word...please keep writing for us!!! We love it!

The pace, the twists and turns, the excitement, the fact that Shyam signed Khushi out of the hospital as Arnav Raizada!

Oh man, no wonder you're a novelist...you know your stuff!

Three Cheers for the brilliant KaushalyaFan! We love you!!!!!

Please write Part 5 soon! PM me too. Thanks a bunch...

Tht shyam never gives up eh?

niceee...w8in for next one...plzz pm me whn u updte next

Wow!👏very interesting,do continue,Thanks⭐️

Originally posted by: aquablue17

Tht shyam never gives up eh?

Yeah, I tried to make his character more interesting but am also trying to show the 3 protagonists ie Khushi, Arnav and Angali as relentless as well. Especially Arnav's character has been tweaked quite a bit. I hope you like it.

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate your feedback.

KF

Originally posted by: Archanafan

WOW!!!

Loved part 4! Amazing!

I can't wait to see how Arnav handles this situation! At night, all alone, jumping out of jeeps, no cell phone, no contact, the cops on his tail, out in the middle of nowhere...what's he gonna do?

Such a BURNING question!

Poor Khushi! What a clever way to ship her out of the hospital! Disguise her as his wife! Shyam, you think of everything, don'tcha?

Brilliant!

And Arnav jumping out a jeep at break neck speed, making a run for his life...

Abso-freakin'-lutely fantastic!!!!

I'll be waiting to see how Arnav fends for himself out in the wilds, eh?

And somebody please help our darling Khushi! I can't see her in trouble!

Waitin' with bated breath, dear KFan...loved every word...please keep writing for us!!! We love it!

The pace, the twists and turns, the excitement, the fact that Shyam signed Khushi out of the hospital as Arnav Raizada!

Oh man, no wonder you're a novelist...you know your stuff!

Three Cheers for the brilliant KaushalyaFan! We love you!!!!!

Please write Part 5 soon! PM me too. Thanks a bunch...

Thank you ArchanaFan for your positive feedback. I thought it would be great if Arnav had to face and managed to beat the odds. He's on a quest and it's up to him as to how he gets out of it. Also I'm trying to grow the character of Shyam. Hopefully readers will see his evil side but also that he is smart and will stop at nothing. But at the same time I'm also trying to show that Arnav is just as relentless. Also I've tried to make Angali's character more vocal and stronger not the weakling we see on TV. Thanks again for you feedback. I truly appreciate it. I'm working on Part 5 right now. Hopefully everyone will finding it worth their while to read it.

Thanks again ArchanaFan. I love your comments.

Originally posted by: sugar_babe

PM Please!!! Love it!!!

Thanks for your positive feedback. I appreciate it :-)

KF

Originally posted by: hemvb

love it...

Thanks for your positive comments :-)

KF