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Posted: 18 years ago
such a really nice part
keep up da gud work
   write soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice keep up the gr8888888 work.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 9

(Tulsi is clearing up the table and damini is helping her)

Damini: Ma.....when will these goenkas leave us alone?
Tulsi: sshhh....damini.....dont even talk about them
(manasvi is passing by and hears their conversation, then comes in)
Manasvi: what happened?
(tulsi and damini r shocked)
Manasvi: kya hua?
Tulsi: erm...nothing beta....u go and do yur homework
Manasvi: damini...who were u talking about?
Damini: no-one....u go...
(manasvi turns away)

Next scene....at the Heritage House.....

(arjun and shakti r talking about the same contract that karan and ansh want 2 get)

Shakti: guess what, arjun....i have some bad news
Arjun: kya.....what happened?
Shakti: the viranis r back......
(all the goenkas r shocked.....and suraj is confused)
suraj: who? who r u lot talking about?
Shaku: no-one...beta..u go back upstairs
Bhoomi: OMG....what do we do?
Kashish: we do what we done last time....
Siddarth: beta....dont talk about that....that incident....
Arjun: why r they back?
Shakti: bcoz they r after this contract that we want...
Bade Dadaji: ok...bacho..dont worry...they cant harm us
Yuvraj: bade dadaji...remember what happened last time.....those bloody...
Mansen: Stop it Yuv!!!!!
Suraj: can someone tell me what is going on?
Arjun: nothing...little brother...come on....we'll talk upstairs....
(suraj and arjun go upstairs, Bhoomi turns to Lord Krishna)
Bhoomi: Oh god, suraj doesnt no....about our relationship wid the virani family.......kaise...kaise batao ki hum dono parivar ki beech sirf dushmaani hai.......sirf dushmaani.....aur the history of what happened a few years ago....should not be repeated this time...plz...plz bhagwan....

(guess ppl, what bhoomi is talking about)

Precap: Bhoomi is asking arjun if they should tell suraj about what happened years ago. Arjun forbids Bhoomi to do so, saying that it will affect suraj's life. Suraj overhears this and is even more confused.

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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful, gr88888888888888 plz write soon.
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
hey quick.....plz continue
u cant leave at this twisting end............
jaldi story aage badhao
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 10

(Arjun is getting ready for work, Bhoomi comes in)

Arjun: Bhavri...mere tie kaha hai?
Bhoomi: yeh lo.....
Arjun: pehnao mujhe...
Bhoomi: theek hai....(does his tie)
Arjun: kya hua bhavri...tum parishan kyun lag rahe hoon?
Bhoomi: voh...kaal jo shakti bhaiyya ni kaha....viranis ki bari mein
Arjun: koi baat nahin bhavri...phool jao un logo ki bari mein...
Bhoomi: kaise phool jao....aur...suraj ka kiya hoga?
Arjun: kuch nahin hoga...usse yeh baat na pata hui...yeh uski liye better hai
Bhoomi: lekin hume usko patana hi parega....tumhara bhai hai..arjun...uska haaq banta hai...
Arjun: lekin uski zindagi phar assar hoga...uska ka kiya..bhavri?
Bhoomi: lekin...
Arjun: bechara 16 saal ka hai...abhi voh par raha hai....kaise batao usse?
(suraj is going by...and hears arjun speaking)
Arjun: main suraj ko nahin batao ga
Bhoomi: agar usse yeh sach pata chal gaya tho?
Arjun: nahin pata chale ga...mere jeethi ji usse nahin pata hoga...jab thak...voh yeh sach ko accept kar nahin sakta (Arjun leaves from there, and Suraj enters)
Suraj: kiya hua bhabhi....arjun bhaiyya kya keh rahe thi?
Bhoomi: kuch nahin...(trying 2 luk happy)
Suraj: kuch tho hai....mujhe pataya na...kya hua?
Bhoomi (thinking): kaash mein tumhe pata sakhte suraj...tho yeh nobaat nahin aate...
Suraj: kiya hua?
Bhoomi: waqt aane..phar tumhe sub kuch pata dongi...acha...aab chalo...nashta ka waqt hai... (Bhoomi leaves)
Suraj: Mujhe pata lagana hoga...ki aise kaunse baat hai..(he goes downstairs)
Bausa: arre suraj beta..agaye ho...ok..nashta karo...
Suraj: shukriya baisa...(luking worried)
Shaku: kiya hua, beta...itne parishaan kyun lag rahe hoon?
Suraj: ma..arjun bhaiyya upar bhabhi ki saath gusse mein baatein kar rahe thi...pata nahin...mujhe kuch pata nahin chahti
Arjun: kiya suraj...tum bhi na...
Bhoomi: suraj...tumhare bhaiyya....
Arjun: pata ho.....daralsal...shakti, yuv aur mein jo contract chahti hai...uske baari mein...
Bhoomi: erm...suraj...kuch aur kaogi?
Suraj: tho?
Arjun: tumhe mein surprise dina chahta tha...haina bhavri?
Bhoomi (luking confused): ha...ha...yeh baat hai..
Suraj: oh...surprise about the contract?
Shakti: ha...aur sara surprise tumne kharab kar diya hai...
(Kashish feels glad)
Kashish: abh khush hona tum? (suraj nods)
Arjun: acha bhavri...mein ja raha hoon...bye...and i luv u....
Bhoomi: luv u too (gives her a kiss on the forehead)
Suraj: ok..bhabhi...mein ja raha hoon..basketball play karni...
Bhoomi: ok....
Kashish: erm...suraj...humare paas Veer-Zaara ki DVD hai?
Suraj: ha kyun?
Kashish: mein usse dekhna chahti hoon...
Bhoomi: mein bhi...
Suraj: theek hai...laga detha hoon....

(Next scene:Shanti-Niketan)

Ansh: papa....chale office?
Mihir: ha beta..ek minute..pehle nashta tho karlo...
Ansh: nahin papa....main un goenkas ko barbaad karna chahtha hoon
Manasvi: kaun goenkas....?
Ansh: ARRE TUM BEECH MEIN MAATH BOLA KARO!!!!
Karan: Ansh!!!! Aapne zaban ho samalo....tumhare behen hai voh...tameez sey baat karo....varna next time main tumhe tarpar bhi maro ga....
Ansh: karan...tum bhi....(goes out of the house)
Tulsi: kya karan..tameez si baat karo aapne bhai sey...
Karan: lekin manasvi ki saath aise baat kar raha tha..
Mihir: lekin..main usse samjha sakhta tha...next time...aise nahin hona chahe....ok?
Karan: ok papa....
Nandini: bhoomi...chalo...tumhe school bhi jana hai...tumhare papa tumhe chor dengi...umm....karan..
Karan: ha?
Nandini: Bhoomi ko school drop off karna..plz
Karan: ok...
Mihir: ok..chalo karan...office ka time hogaya hai...
Karan: ok....bye ma...bye dadi...bye nandini
Nandini: bye...(gives her a kiss on the cheek and hugs her)
Mihir: abhe...romeo ka bacha...romance khatam...chalo office phar concentrate karo...
Tulsi: hehehe.....dono paap beta ek jaise hai...
Manasvi: aur vaise bhabhi ka tarha ek cute wife mile hai...tho romance karegi haina?
Nandini: manasvi...tum bhi na....
Manasvi: acha..ma..main thora sa tv dekhna chahti hoon...kaal rata ko kasautii zindagii kay maine miss kiya tha..uska repeat dekhna chahti hoon?
(Indu comes)
Indu: ba...yeh fair nahin hai...nandini bhabhi ko kitna romantic husband mila, mujhe bhi aisa he husband chahe
Ba: uff....phir se yeh larki mujhe parishan karne lage hai...
Manasvi: koi baat nahin Indu..mere school mein buhut cute se boys hai...aur tum wahan choose kar lena...
Indu: thankoo so much, manasvi...
Savita: yeh larki bhi na...

Precap: Bhoomika works as a teacher at Nandini's daughter Bhoomi's school, and meets Bhoomi.

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Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 11

(Bhoomi is getting ready 4 work, as she works at young Bhoomi's school)

Bhoomi; arjun…batao na….mujhe kaunsa suit acha lagega….dark red ya phir black…
Arjun: hmm…..dark red tho Valentines Day ke liye rakna…..aur vaise dark red main tum buhut hot lag rahe hoon
Bhoomi (blushes): arjun…tum bhi na….
Arjun: lekin…black ki dress mein tum buhut sexy lagte hoo….
Bhoomi: arjun….tum bhi….stop it…..

(Next scene: Bhoomika is at little Bhoomi's school….Bhoomika notices that Bhoomi is all alone…and joins her)

Bhoomika: arre beta…aap aise akele kyun?
Bhoomi: lekin aap kaun?
Bhoomika: mein…yahan ek naye teacher hoo…..mer anaam Bhoomika Goenka hai..lekin aap short ke liye aap mujhe Bhoomi keh sakte hai…
Bhoomi: arre yeh tho mera naam bhi hai….hi….i'm Bhoomi
Bhoomika: hi…beta….aap ka pura naam kya hai…
Bhoomi: Bhoomi Vir…..(Bhoomika gets interrupted by someone else….and missed out when Bhoomi said virani0
Bhoomika: ok beta…mein aapse baad mein milte hoon….ok?
Bhoomi: ok…

(Next scene: Suraj-Manasvi at school)

suraj: manasvi….tumhara kaam hogaya?
Maansvi: hmm…..aur tumhara?
Suraj: ha…meraabhi hogaya hai…
Manasvi: um…suraj…jo…doosri raat ko hua tha…I mean…library mein….
Suraj: ha…tho….
Manasvi: umm…..mein tumse gale mein lag gaye thi…so sorry 4 that….
Suraj: hey…aise sorry nahin kehna chahe……yeh shoulder hamesha tumhare liye rahe ga….
Manasvi: so sweet of u……aur tum iss valentines day ko kya karoge?
Suraj: hmm….socha nahin tha….
Manasvi: mera matlaab hai…tum larkia ki saath hamesha flirt karthi thi….aur hamesha valentines ke liye poch thi thi…aaj….kya hua tumhe?
Suraj (thinking): manasvi theek keh rahe hai….mujhe kya hogaya hai…….pehle main aisa nahin tha….
Manasvi: kya hua?
Suraj: kuch nahin……valentines ke liye……hmm…..tum kisi ki saath jaa rahe ho……
Manasvi: hmm…..nahin….
Suraj: tho hum dono chale…?
Manasvi; dimag kharab tho nahin hogaya hai…?
Suraj: manasvi…..
Manasvi: acha…lekin friends ki tarha…..
Suraj: obviously…….
Precap: Suraj gets a gift 4 manasvi…….meanwhile Karan and Ansh see Arjun-Shakti and walk up 2 each other wid angry luks.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 12

(Suraj reaches home, arjun-shakti r sitting in the living room)

Suraj: hey bhaiyya....kya ho raha hai?
Arjun: kuch nahin...voh contract hai na...
Suraj: oh...bhabhi kaha hai?
Arjun: umm....kitchen mein hoge
Baisa: arre suraj beta...aayega hai tho.....aao....bade dadaji tumhe bula rahe thai...
Suraj: mujhe?
Bade Dadaji: arre suraj...beta aao...(suraj touches his feet)....jeethi raho...
Suraj: hi dad...
Siddarth: hi beta...kaise ho?
Bade Dadaji: beta...agli hafti mein holi hoge....aur....holi ki koi arrangements tumhe bhi karne hai
Suraj: ok...
Shaku: aur...aapni kaam mein buhut menath karna....tumhare exams bhi hoge...
Suraj: karoga mom....
Bhoomi: arre suraj...kaab aaye thi tum?
Suraj: abhi aayea tha bhabhi....
Mamaji: arre bhanji...humare saath chess kerogi...
Suraj: hmm..ok...
Mansen: dekhti hai..kaun jeetha hai...
Arjun: chalo..brother win...come on..
(the chess game is over...and suraj wins)
Suraj: Checkmate......
Mamaji: huh? yeh kaise ho sakta hai...?
Arjun: hahahahahaha........well done brother.....(hugs him)
Suraj: after all i am the best......
Bhoomi: gud job devarji....
Suraj: thank u bhabhi-ji.....
(Next day.....Karan-Ansh r walking back from collecting bhoomi from school...arjun-shakti 4 coming back from collecting their own bhoomi)

Ansh (notices arjun-shakti): dekho karan....voh rahe goenkas.....main unhi....nahin choroga...
Karan: ansh....yeh kya karne jaa rahe hoo...plz...dont...
Ansh: nahin karan...yeh goenkas ne humare jaan ko kharab karki raka hai.....yaad hai...pehle kya hua tha?
Karan: yaad hai..lekin aabh koi bloodhsed nahin ee ho....tho phir better hai...
Arjun (notices karan-ansh): shakti....voh viranis....yeh phar
Shakti: choro bhaiyya.....leave them....
(Ansh walks up2 arjun-shakti)
Ansh: acha....goenkas....tum log hamara jeena haram karki raka hai....what the bloody hell do u think u r?
Arjun: dekho ansh....laro maath....mere baat suno....
Shakti: arre....tumhare problem kya hai?
Ansh: mere problem tum goenaks hoo....
Karan (running up2 ansh): ansh...ansh..nahin...yeh kya kar rahe hoon.....
Arjun: aapne bhai ko samjho...varna...
Karan: varna...varna kya..huh? tum goenaks bhi humare kismat ko kharab kiya hai...
Shakti: just shut the hell up....
Ansh: tum mujhe keh rahe ho shut up karne ke liye...
(manasvi was buying sweets 4 little bhoomi and notices the fight)
Manasvi: ansh...karan....stop it....STOP IT!!!!!
(suraj was waiting 4 his brothers and notices the fight)
Suraj: arre bhaiyya...yeh kya kar rahe hoon....
Arjun: tum viranis ko main dekh loga....tumhe nahin choroga main....u bloody viranis...
Suraj (thinking): viranis.....name seems familiar a little....
Manasvi (face turned around, so suraj cant c her): come on bhaiyya....chalo...(pulls karan and ansh back...)
Karan: tum goenkas ko main dekh loga....
Ansh: U GOENKAS R GONE....U R SO DEAD!!!!!
Arjun: U R THE ONE WHO IS DEAD...VIRANI!!!!!
Suraj: yeh kya hai bhaiyya.....kaun hai yeh viranis?
Arjun (thinking): kya batao tumhe mere bhai....aur kaise batao? (leaves from there)
Suraj: shakti bhaiyya aap kuch batao....
Shakti: on the rite time...only....sahe waqt phar...
Bhoomi; yeh sab kya tha, arjun?
Arjun: viranis....phir se...
Suraj: lekin bhabhi...yeh viranis kaun hai...bhaiyya ko itna gussa kyun aaya....
Bhoomi: kyunki yeh viranis.....(arjun interrupts)
Arjun: um...bhavri....chalo ghar chalti hai...
(everyone gets in the car)
Suraj (thinking): what is going on....why does my family hate those viranis.....viranis....
(Remembers Manasvi telling her full name: Manasvi Virani...)
Suraj (thinking): kahiin voh dono manasvi ki parivaar si tho nahin thi...if they r from manasvi's family...then......why do they hate them....raaz kya hai?

Precap: Suraj mentions about arjun-shakti arguing wid Karan-Ansh. Bade Dadaji is furious, Shaku gets worried about Suraj finding about the truth. Meanwhile, Manasvi is confused about why does her family hate Arjun-Suraj.

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tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 gr8 gr8 👏 👏
by the way make quick updates...my exams next month..n i'll b missing all the action.. 😭 😭
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 13

(Arjun, Shakti and Suraj and Bhoomi reach home, Arjun has a slight bruise on his face)

Arjun: main un viranis ko nahin chorogiga....
Bhoomi: arre arjun...sshh.....ma-ji yahn phar hai...ok now..sshh
Shaku (sees them coming): arre aayege ho tum log...ok...fresh ho kar aao...phir khana kate hai hum...
Siddarth: arre arjun beta yeh zaham kya hai...?
Suraj; umm....arjun bhaiyya ni kisi ki saath fight kar rahe thi....
Baisa: kya.....yeh kya keh rahe ho...suraj?
Suraj: lekin....pata nahin.....bhaiyya kisi viranis ka naam le rahe thi...kaun hai yeh viranis?
Bhoomi: yeh viranis.....suraj....kaise batao....
Arjun (interrupts): Bhavri!!!! Dont....
Suraj: Dont what? Arre koi mujhe batayi ga ki what is happening.....
Shaku: beta...tum upar jao....baad mein baat karte hai...ok...jao
Kashish: chalo suraj....hum dono upar baatein karte hai....aur vaise.....tumhara homework bhi hoga...
Suraj: theek hai...(luking a bit confused...and goes upstairs)
(After Suraj goes upstairs, the Goenka family members r discussing the matter wid Bade Dadaji)
Bade Dadaji: tumhare himmath kaise hui....Arjun Goenka!!!!!
Shaku: tumne socha nahin tha...ki suraj kya kehe ga...uska kya hoga?
Shakti: lekin ma...
Shaku: lekin vekin kuch nahin...ek baat kan kul kar sunlo....agar suraj ko pata chal gaya....tho tumhare khair nahin...
Bhoomi: lekin ma-ji......suraj ko gussa hoga agar usse pata chale......tho hum kya jawab deinge usse...?
Siddarth: waqt ani phar hum usse sub kuch patati hai...

(Next scene: Shanti-Niketan, Ansh, Karan, Bhoomi and Manasvi enter the house)
Manasvi: ma....papa......
Tulsi: kya hua?
Bhoomi: dadi...dadi...papa aur chacha ni kisi larko ko mare thi...
Mihir: kya?
Manasvi: tho mard thi...aur bhaiyya unko mar rahe thi....
Ansh: dad...voh goenkas thi...
Manasvi: phir se goenkas...kaun hai yeh goenkas.....
Damini: erm...manasvi tum upar jao....come on...jao....
Manasvi: theek hai...

Precap: Suraj takes Manasvi out 4 dinner on Valentines' Day. Suraj and Manasvi fel different towards each other. Menawhile Mihir and Tulsi scold Ansh and Karan for fighting with Arjun and Shakti.

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