Posted: 28 January 2006 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Hey ppl, i'm starting a new fan-fic 4 Suraj-Manasvi, their story is similar to "Romeo & Juliet".
Suraj (16) is the youngest son of the Goenka family. He has a ender brother named Arjun, and a bhabhi named Bhoomika. Suraj is the most adorable member of the family. Suraj also has a older sister named Kashish. And how could I forget they have a weird friend called Bobby Darling (from kyunki). Btw he's gay
Manasvi (16) is the youngest daughter of the viranis. Parents' names are Mihir and Tulsi. She has a older brother named Ansh. She also has a sister named Damini.
The problem is that the goenkas and the viranis neva liked each other, they are more than enemies, with so much hate, so much.....that they can kill each other, but........suraj & manasvi do not know this........
(the day starts in heritage house)
Baisa: Shakuntala, bache kaha hai?
Shaku: Bache athe hi honge..Arjun, Bhoomi, Shakthi, Kashish, Suraj neche ao (children are called in the order of their age from the eldest)
Baisa: Chalo sab logh pooja kare
Shaku: (shakunthala sees all children coming down except for suraj) are suraj kahan hai?
Arjun: Maa voh so raha hai
Shaku: Haye bhagwan, yeh larka kabh badhlega?
Arjun: Kabhi nahin...kabhi nahin
Siddharth: Acha yaar amitabh bachchan ko is ghar mein mat lao.
(Bobby darling goes to wake suraj up)
Bobby: (throws a bucket of water on suraj)
Suraj: BOBBY!! Yeh kya kar rehe ho tum, main rani mukherjee ke sapne dekh raha tha yaar.
Bobby: Mere sapne kabhi nahin dekhe aur jab dekhthe ho tho us mein rani ajati hai...haye sathyaanaas.
Suraj: uuuurrrr, chup...chup!! vaise date kya hai?
Bobby: 7th of september...ao main tumhe morning hug dhetha hoon.
Suraj: 7TH SEPTEMBER...MY FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL DAM IT. NAHIN CHAHIYE TUMHARA HUG, HATO BHEECH MEIN SE!!!!!
(pushes bobby out of the way, takes a shower and goes down for the pooja)
Khushaal: Oi bhanje, ki khaal hai?
Suraj: Oi mama ji theek thaak
Shaku: AHEM AHEM (looking angry)
Suraj: sorry mama, eik kaam karte...school jaa kar jab main vapis aonga thab mama ki help karronga, mama sey bohat pyaar karoonga, bhabhi ki help karoonga, bros ki help karoonga aur sis ki bhi, papa, bade dada ji ki bhi. okay abh main pooja kar ke jaon?
Shaku: haan chalo pooja karte hai
(after the pooja is done suraj stays there and does his own personal prayer)
Suraj: (first he deliberately says aloud) God keep our family together and safe, help big b's in their business and protect this family from evil.
(all the family starts praising suraj) dekho kithna naik bacha hai
Suraj: (then whispers to himself) God today is my first day at school, please make sure girlz go after me...meri izzat ka savaal hai ok pleeeeeeeeeeez.
(then he runs and grabs his bag and runs out for school)
Suraj: By mom!! By evrybody!!
(gets onto the bus....goes upto some galz)
Suraj: Hiiiiiiii (in a cool way)....I'm suraj.....(keeps the flirty chat going wid them)
Precap: (suraj and manasvi bump into each other in school as they are both late...and he turns around to see the who the person is, but manasvi turns away to look at her watch then a maple leaf flies and lands onto suraj's face)
To be continued....how did you find that? if u don't like it I can come up with another.