Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 60

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome update dear

so finally Prithvi' dad knows everything

Thank god! he's so encouraging n understanding as well

Awe luvd the romantic scene between Prithvi n Nandini

update soon

Thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

loved both the part... And this one especially bcoz finally they kissed huh I was on cloud nine... Mazaaa aa gaya bi-god :-)
Now I'm waiting for naya dhamaka u know prithvi's mom???????????? Lets see wat she'll do????
Continue SOON :-)

  a broad smile comes on my lips when i read lovely comments...i am happy you liked it...thanks sweetie😃

Originally posted by: Manipadma

hey sweety...loved both the parts...
all the prini moments were swt n cute...waiting for hot n passionate moments 😉 😆
...loveee uuu...😊

Thank you so much sweetie...i wait for your comments...😊 i am glad you enjoyed the part...😃

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

chooo sweet update ... 

prithvi is really good n nanadini is a naughty girl...

Thanks Dear...😊

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

😊 awesome update dear...

prithvi's father is so understanding...he totally trusts his son...i am happy that prithvi told him the truth & he is still supporting PriNi 😊...

& PriNi...their scenes r awesome 😳...

i also loved ur other ff 👏...my jigar ka tukda...looking forward to see story of veer & ananya...

plz update ur both ffs soon...eagerly waiting...

Thanks a lot dear...😊will try and update both FFs...😊

Part 38

Rajveer "i haven't met the girl, but Renu I can tell you one thing, Prithvi loves her a lot and if you disapprove her, he will not like it. And I am sure Nandini is a special girl"

Renuka "Nandini...oh so her name's Nandini"

Rajveer "Renu, please try and understand Prithvi's situation.. just think about him"

Renuka was thinking about her Son, she was not happy with his decision but she couldn't make up her mind until she meets the girl.

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Richa "come on Angad, its just an amusement park...i love swings..."

Angad "ok...lets go"

Richa "we can take Nandini and Prithvi along...please call Prithvi and ask him"

Angad "i am sure this will be the worst idea for him"

Richa "will you call him first"

Angad dialed Prithvi's no and asked him to come at the amusement park...

Prithvi "Angad...how come you like swings?? and these parks are for children"

Angad "i know but Richa wants to go so can you ask Nandini"

Prithvi "alright, I will talk to her"

Nandini was having her breakfast...

Prithvi "do you want to go to amusement park"

Nandini excitedly "yes, why not...when are we going?"

Prithvi "now... get ready"

After some time...

Nandini "thanks Richa for making this plan...i feel so bored all day"

Richa "i knew you will enjoy swings...you always loved..."

Nandini "really?...lets go there..."

After few hours...

Prithvi "i am bored now...i am waiting only for Nandini to finish her rides"

Angad smiled

Richa "hey Nandini lets try that roller coaster ride..."

Nandini "oh my God its so big..."

Prithvi "Nandini its too big...leave it"

Nandini "no I am not scared..." smiled and went towards the ride

Prithvi carefully looked her as she seated herself on the seat...

Richa "wait for me Nandini"

the ride started and Richa started waving at Nandini "Richa...its amazing" she shouted...

Prithvi looked at her and the ride which was going too high... "why doesn't she listen" he said annoyingly...

Nandini's head started spinning...she couldn't concentrate , as the ride went high, her entire head was spinning badly...she tried to open her eyes and hold on her seat...she remembered herself falling in the river...no it was a huge river...the waves were high...she remembered she couldn't walk...she fell off from the mountain cliff...yes it was so painful for her...she was looking for him...she met with an accident...she opened her eyes full of tears...

as the ride stopped Prithvi came running towards her... "are you alright??"

Nandini started crying and hugged him tightly "Prithvi"

Prithvi "i told you not to go on this ride...but you don't listen..."

Richa "give her some water"

Nandini looked at Richa carefully while still hugging Prithvi...

Prithvi "have some water"

Nandini was drinking water while gazing at Prithvi...

Nandini wanted to say something "Prithvi...i '.i"

Prithvi "now don't saw anything, when I told you before, you never listened...now lets go home"

Angad and Richa said bye...Nandini hugged Richa tightly... Richa was surprised by the way Nandini hugged her...but didn't say anything...she assumed Nandini must be scared...

After some time...

Nandini kept on gazing at Prithvi...

Prithvi gave her medicines and asked her to rest...he was about to leave

Nandini "please don't go now"

Prithvi "i am not going anywhere...i thought you should rest"

Nandini "were you scared of loosing me again?"

Prithvi gazed at her carefully "you haven't recovered completely, so I didn't wanted you to take that ride...and remember I will never let you go out of my sight again...now you better sleep"

Nandini lovingly looked at him and thought her Prithvi has changed a lot...he has become more responsible, caring, loving...she remembered all her days she had spent with him...he looked different from a college boy to a successful businessman...

He was reading and Nandini carefully observed him...

Next day...

She woke up early and glanced around to see Prithvi lying on the couch...

She went downstairs and saw Kamla working in the kitchen... she strolled and asked for water...

suddenly the door bell rang... Nandini opened the door...it was Esha

"hi Nandini" she said

Nandini "hi"

Esha "so your husband hasn't gotten up yet"

Nandini smiled at Esha "no...should I go and"

Esha "no leave...i just wanted to give him these papers, my dad asked me to give it to him"

Nandini "ok...but I can ask Prithvi to"

Esha "no Nandini its alright...please don't bother"

Esha left and Nandini remembered her...when she came once to her college to wish Prithvi on his birthday...it was way back...yes now she clearly remembers her.

After some time...

Prithvi woke up and glanced around for Nandini, he went downstairs, but she wasn't there...he asked Kamla...then went outside in the garden... she was looking at beautiful flowers... Prithvi noticed carefully... "Nandini"

Nandini looked behind "oh...you woke up...i saw these beautiful flowers"

Prithvi "you always liked flowers...i remember what you did once in college...it was..."

Nandini smiled "ok now lets go inside , you should have your breakfast now...its late already"

Prithvi was thinking why Nandini didn't ask him anything this time.

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Angad "what??? no Richa you and your ideas"

Richa "musical concert...its so good...i love listening to songs"

Angad "but Richa...i will get bored"

Richa thought Nandini will surely enjoy...

She called Prithvi,

Prithvi "no not again...please Richa"

Richa "fine ask Nandini ..."

Prithvi asked Nandini and she said she would love to go...

Prithvi finally agreed and asked Angad to come along else it would be too boring for him...

Next Day...

The concert started in the evening...

Nandini dressed up in pink suit... Prithvi remembered when he met her first time she wore the same color...

Richa "you know Nandini you sing very well"

Nandini "i know...i mean I can sing"

Prithvi looked at her '.while Nandini was looking at the stage and listening to the songs... Prithvi found something very unusual about her...

Nandini looked at him "Prithvi can I say something"

Prithvi "yes...what"

Richa immediately asked Nandini "see now the stage is free...come Nandini sing something please"

Nandini was still looking at Prithvi '.she walked towards the stage... she was standing in front of so many people but she could only see her Prithvi...

she got tears in her eyes... Prithvi gazed at her carefully...

she started singing while looking at him...

NA KUCH PUCHA

NA KUCH MAANGA

TUNE DIL SE DIYA... JO DIYA

NA KUCH BOLA

NA KUCH TOLA

MUSKURA KE DIYA '...JO DIYA

TU HEE DHOOP '..TU HEE CHAAYA

TU HEE APNAA PARAYA

AUR KUCH NA JAANU '...BAS ITNA HEE JAANU

TUJH ME RAB DIKHTA HAI YAARA MAIN KAROON

SAJDE SIR JHUKTA HAI YAARA MAIN KYA KAROON

Prithvi came closer and looked into her moist eyes...Nandini smiled at him and both hugged each other...

Prithvi "you took so long Nandini"

Nandini "i was waiting for you Prithvi...i missed you so much...i...i...missed you"

Prithvi looked at her with moist eyes "Nandini...i won't let you go anywhere now...i...i am sorry"

Nandini "no...please don't say sorry Prithvi...it was my fault...i love you Prithvi"

Richa and Angad smiled '

Richa "i was in a doubt yesterday when Nandini hugged me, because that was my Nandini's hug"

Angad "then why didn't you guessed that time"

Richa started crying and came closer to Nandini

Nandini hugged Richa "thanks Richa...thanks for everything"

Richa "Please Nandini, you are my friend... no thanks...i am happy you remember everything"

Late night

Nandini was lying with Prithvi on his side, her head on his arm...

Nandini "Prithvi I...i am happy that we are together"

Prithvi "i will never let you go away now..." and hold her tightly

Nandini smiled "you know Prithvi all my suffering has gone now"

Prithvi "i know I gave you lot of pain...and I am sorry for that night...about the pain" his eyes were moist... "Nandini I...should have been with you but you faced everything yourself..."

Nandini "please Prithvi, that was my most beautiful night, the pain was my fate...i know it was terrible for me...i lost our child...but I am happy atleast I am with you today...and I know if you are with me then nothing wrong can happen"

Prithvi hugged her tightly and kissed her on her lips...

Nandini "no don't..."

Prithvi "don't worry I won't leave any marks"

Both smiled...

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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 12 years ago

awesome parts dear...
loved it...

wow... she remember everything now yieppieee party party partyyy lol
I just can't wait for prithvi's mom now I swear I'm a little bit scared of her bi-god :-)

Loved the part
Update soon :-)

Hi Friends 😊

Its Friday...i will update on Monday now...don't want to see my mac on the weekend 😊 its beach time...have a lovely and wonderful weekend...🥳

Cheers
Dhanvi
Edited by Dhanvi83 - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

awesome parts dear...
loved it...

Thanks a lot for appreciating dear😊