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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice starting...
Poor Rey...I think Kriya will feel bad after hearing the news of Rey's suspension.

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Posted: 12 years ago
everyone has to have their share of guilt and punishment. kria felt guilty when she hit rey and her punishment was she lost the post of GS and now its rey's time he did make a huge blunder and he's punished. and now kria has to feel bad coz rey felt bad when he saw kria's insult in front of him. I know m speaking utter non sense after my xam but tis is what came to my mind. 
I HOPE IT"S MAKING SENSE
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohhh CV pls give some akal to Kriya.Her akal is in your hands.So pls give her dimag,now why r u ppl making her dumb?
Posted: 12 years ago
Baaaddd Kriya!! 😑
This is a better version then the Cinevistaas one!
This is really good!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurartirocks

Ohhh CV pls give some akal to Kriya.Her akal is in your hands.So pls give her dimag,now why r u ppl making her dumb?

yes even my question is this?? aftr all y?? she was supposed to be the sttrong willed girl who understood every situation. lagta hian sangati ka asar hain
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaRon911

Arrrgh gandeee Kriya ! πŸ˜‘ Pooor Rey πŸ˜­


Frankly I like ur version better than the Cinevistaas LOL ..cuz  I am prettty sure they will screw things up even further .. ur fanfic is our saviour LOL .. Great job ! :)


i know rafi..!!! CVS ko toh jaise hame irritate karne me maza aata hai...!!!😑
u know when i was writing this i had a feeling that is is never gonna happen...!!!!

and thank you for ur complement...😊...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyxgirl20

Baaaddd Kriya!! 😑

This is a better version then the Cinevistaas one!
This is really good!

thank you...!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily

u knw what? i'm gonna go crazy saying this on IF but u r n 'mazing writer!!

why the hell didn't u write before?πŸ˜²πŸ‘


uhh...thank you soo much amie...😊
and i didnt write before coz...u know... i didnt have any ideas...!!
coz mera dimag bohot kam kaam karta hai...!!! heheheπŸ˜‰
but anyway thank you...!!!!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _sana.Magic_

everyone has to have their share of guilt and punishment. kria felt guilty when she hit rey and her punishment was she lost the post of GS and now its rey's time he did make a huge blunder and he's punished. and now kria has to feel bad coz rey felt bad when he saw kria's insult in front of him. I know m speaking utter non sense after my xam but tis is what came to my mind. 

I HOPE IT"S MAKING SENSE

it took me some time...but i finnaly understand what u mean...!!!! (dont mind...im just saying...!!!)
and i think you are right...!!! every one has to pay 4 their mistakes...!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyxgirl20

Baaaddd Kriya!! 😑

This is a better version then the Cinevistaas one!
This is really good!

thank you soo much...!!!!!😊