Maaneet - WE WANT DIVORCE #1 | Part 1 - 25 - Page 62

Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
I liked it.
I dnt want maaneet's divorce.
Continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice partπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
all the misunderstanding are clear
both r really gng 2 get divorse...


Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...loved it
continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
superbbb!!!!
 
loved maneet's convo!...
 
continue soon!
Posted: 12 years ago
beauty  of "we want this divorce" , amidst  humour der lies so many emotions which makes more special . loved it .
Posted: 12 years ago
superb update.  loved geet asking"why should we get a divorce??"
Posted: 12 years ago

Hi buddies,

Thank you so much for the lovely and encouraging comments. loved them.

 

Part 18

Geet: why should we get a divorce?

Maan's heart skips a beat and he looks into her eyes. he couldn't understand what Geet means by this question

Maan: matlab?

Geet: woh..

When Geet is about to say something, someone knocks at the door. Maan looks at the door in horror.

Maan: (st) who could it be? What if some one sees Geet here?

Voice from the outside,"Maan"

Maan: (shocked) DJ?

(Maan calls Dev 'DJ' meaning Dev Jijaji)

Geet: yeh DJ kaun hai?

Maan gestures Geet to be quiet by placing his index finger on his lips. Geet nodes.

Dev: Maan...are you there?

After gesturing Geet to hide herself, he walks toward the door. Geet couldn't get what Maan tried to convey. She also gets up from the bed and walks after Maan.

Maan turns back to Geet and whispers

Maan: what are you doing?

Geet: woh...

Maan: go and hide yourself

Geet: teek hai

Dev: Maan...Maan...

Maan: (screams) haan aar raha hu

Maan is about to open the door. he senses that Geet is still standing behind him. he turns around and almost shouts at her

Maan: yeh tum kar kya rahi ho?

Geet: i am hiding myself behind you

Maan hits his head with his hand

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: won't you ever use your brain?

Geet: kya?

Dev is still knocking at the door

Dev: Maan...Maan...

Maan: Now go and hide yourself somewhere else

Geet: where?

Maan: should i tell that too?

Geet: this is your room.

Maan: under the bed

Geet: are you sure?

Maan has lost his patience. He grabs Geet's wrist and drags her to the bed. in his attempt to push Geet under the bed, he himself also goes under the bed along with her. there is merely few inches gap between them. their closeness increases geet's heart beat rate. Maan could almost hear her heart beats. he looks into her eyes. Geet looks at him in horror. When Maan is about to be lost in her eyes, geet almost screams

Geet: what are you doing?

maan composes himself and moves lit bit away from her

Maan: woh...hiding

Geet misunderstands that, along with herself Maan is also hiding himself under the bed.

Geet: then who will open the door? now go

Maan rolls his eyes

Maan: don't dare to come out. Samji tum?

Geet: teek hai

Maan rolls out, gets up and walks to the door. before opening the door, he again turns back to the bed to make sure that Geet didn't come out.finally Maan opens the door. dev steps inside the room and looks around

Maan: kya hua DJ?

Dev: did you see Adi?

Geet screams from her hideout

Geet:  i saw him

Geet realises what she just did.

Geet: (st) hey babaji! yeh maine kya kardiya

Maan closes his eyes in frustration and he feels like killing Geet with his bare hands

Maan: (st) yeh Geet ko tho main... can't she keep quiet even for a second?

Dev: who was that?

Maan tries to cover up

Maan: kaun?

Dev: who said "i saw him"?

Maan: when?

Geet: (st) wow...Maan is really great. How well he acts as if he didn't hear me at all!!!

Dev: didn't you hear that?

Maan: hear what?

Dev: "i saw him"

Maan: are you alright?

Dev: the voice came from the bed only

Dev walks toward the bed. Maan is terrified

Maan: stop! what are you doing?

When Dev is about to bend down to check under the bed, NT comes there running

NT: dev...dev...

Dev turns to NT..

Dev: kya hua?

NT: Adi mil gaya

Dev: thank god. I thought that he went missing and will not turn up for his wedding also as he did in the case of his engagements...waise...where did you find him?

NT: in the kitchen

Geet: (st) is Adi in the kitchen? 

Maan is wondering what if Dev checks under the bed again

Dev: what the hell he was doing in the kitchen?

NT: donno what happened to him. when i entered the kitchen, he was hugging a Pumpkin and crying with his eyes closed

Dev: then?

NT: insted of Pumpkin, he was repeatedly saying, "Pimpkin...Pimpkin...Pimpkin"

Maan is terrified thinking that now Geet is definitely going to create a mess

Maan: (st) why on earth, Pumpkins are used in my house?

Geet: (st) Pimpkin? What kind of vegetable is this!!!

Dev: what 'Pimpkin'? sounds very weird. I think he is scared to marry Pimpki

NT: God...Dev, her name is not Pimpki but Pinki

Geet is finding it difficult to control her laughter

Maan: (st) NT and DJ are really crazy. What if Geet bursts out into laughter? i wish, all the humour sensor cells in her brain should go off

Dev: tongue slip

NT: dev! it is getting late for the wedding . let us go

Dev nodes

NT: Maan! why are you standing like a statue? It is getting late...get ready and come downstairs

Maan: hmmm

NT grabs Dev's wrist and drags him outside. Maan follows them to the door and shuts the door once they step out of the room

 

He walks back to the bed, bends down and looks under the bed

Maan: Geet! bahar niklo

Geet fears that Maan will shout at her for screaming  "I saw him" . so she hesitates to come out

Maan: tum ne suna nahi maine kya kaha? Ab bahar niklo

Geet: nahi

Maan: (annoyed)  nahi? Nahi kya? zindagi bar yahi chupi rahogi? Bahar niklo(courtesy: GHSP)

Geet comes out

Maan: baito

She sits on the bed silently

Maan: they are my sister and her husband

Geet: i know them

Maan: (shocked) how?

Geet: Pinky introduced them to me

Maan: have you told them that you are my husband?

Geet: what?

Maan: i mean...have you told them that you are my wife?

Geet: not yet

Maan is relieved

Geet: are you wondering why i didn't tell them?

Maan rolls his eyes

Geet: because at the time of introduction, i didn't know that they are your sister and brother-in-law

Maan: acha hua

Geet: i know your dadima also

Maan: (swarcastically) great!!!

Geet: btw...do you want me tell them?

Maan: tell what?

Geet: about the marriage?

Maan: i will kill you

Geet: don't be so serious. I am just joking

Maan: you and your stupid jokes

Geet: i won't tell anyone one about this marriage. you can trust me

Maan: hmmm

Geet: is your brother-in-law a Disc Jockey?

Maan: kya?

Geet: Disc Jockey...

Maan: tum yesa kyun pooch rahi ho?

Geet: why did you call him DJ? DJ means Disc Jockey. Hai na?

Maan: (sarcastically) i am really impressed with your general knowledge. keep it up.

Geet: thanks...waise ...why your jijaji is a Disc Jockey?

Maan: (annoyed) i call Dev Jijaji as DJ.  he is not any jockey. He is an advocate. Samji tum?

Geet: (surprised) wow...advocate?

Maan: haan

Geet: then why did you say that you are looking for some other good advocate? Isn't your jijaji good?

Maan: Geet...use your brain. How can i discuss our marriage matter with him?

Geet: good point

Maan: listen to me carefully...at any cost...i don't want my family members to know about our marriage. Am i clear?

Geet nodes

Maan tries to ask her the intention of her question about divorce

Maan: woh...you were asking something about divorce...

Geet: haan woh...main soch rahi thi...

Again someone knocks at the door. Maan is annoyed. He gestures Geet to hide herself and turns to walk to the door

Geet: wait!

Maan: kya?

Geet: if you keep opening the door like this, you will get tired. This time you hide yourself under the bed and i will open the door

Maan: tum pagal hogaya kya?

Geet: kya?

Maan: this is my room. i am the one who is supposed to open the door. if some one sees you here it will result in a disaster

Geet:  good point

Maan: thanks for your appreciation. Stop playing with me as if i am your husband. Now go and hide yourself under the bed

Geet: dubara?

Maan: are you going or i should...

Geet runs and hides herself under the bed

 

Maan opens the door. dadi walks into the room .

Geet covers her mouth tightly with her hands so as to stop herself from doing anything stupid

Dadi looks around the room

Maan: dadima! koi kam hai?

Dadi: why? Can't i come to your room?

Maan: woh..

Dadi smiles and caresses Maan's head

Dadi: Maan! i am very happy for you beta

Maan is confused

Dadi: today i saw her. i like her very much. she is just perfect for you

Maan: kaun?

Geet: (st) whom dadima is talking about?

Dadi: your fiancee

Maan is shocked

Maan: (st) whom dadima is talking about?

Geet's heart almost stops

Geet: (st) does he already have a fiancee? Is that why he wants a divorce?

Tears gather in her eyes. Geet couldn't understand what is bothering her.

Geet: (st) yeh mujhe kya horaha hai?

Dadi: haan Maan...until i saw her, i didn't believe that you have a fiancee.

Maan thinks to tell dadima that he has no fiancee. But thinking about dadi's health, he keeps quiet

Dadi: Maan! i heard that you didn't propose to her yet

Maan is shocked as well as angry

Maan: (st) who the hell is spreading these kinds of rumours about me?

Dadi: please Maan! jaldi use dulhan banakar apne ghar layiye

Maan is too shocked to reply.

Geet couldn't bear dadi's words.  Without her permission, tears roll down her cheers. She is angry on herself for crying for an unknown reason.

Geet: (st) why am i crying like a stupid? Who is he to me? why should i care if he has a fiancee or not?

Geet wipes her tears

Dadi: Maan! get ready and come soon...it is getting late for Adi's marriage

Maan: hmmm

Dadi leaves the room. Maan locks the door and comes back to the bed and sits down. he is thinking about dadi's words and wondering, which girl dadi was talking about

Geet comes out and stands infront of him

Maan looks into her eyes and wonders why they are wet again.

Maan: (st) did she cry again? Is she upset with fiancee matter?

He curses himself for thinking so much

Maan: (st) Maan! tum pagal ho gaya kya? why would she care if you have a fiancee or not?

Her unusual silence is bothering him. he initiates the talk...

Maan: Geet! tum teek tho ho na?

Geet fears that she will break down in front of him. So she deicides to leave the room immediately

Maan: kya hua Geet?

Geet: prepare the divorce papers... i will sign them

Without waiting for Maan's reply, she walks out of the room leaving him shocked.

 

 

Hi buddies,

Hope you liked the update. If possible, i will update tonight.

Have a nice day

143

Tonya

Edited by tonyahk - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for a nice read.
so sweet how geet was getting jealous of maan's fiancee. 
do update soon plz. wud luv to read more.
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
Oh it was funny
Both have feelings for eachother and they are not able to or not understanding what is the name of this feelings
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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