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Maneet FF-Love makes Life Beautiful#3-Ch 41-P141 (Page 43)

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
this part was full of emotions
sadness,feelings,cute moments
i just wan to see them together
pata nai kyon but ithink
ki geet ke jaane ke baad uski diary maan ko milegi and then he will realise his loveDay Dreaming

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-bansi- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update soumya...!!
Loved the talk btn maaneet...maan walked home for the first time...
ooo..he called geet sweetheart...!!Embarrassed Embarrassed...that was so sweet of him...!!!
aha..geet leaving tomorrow...Cry...but she spent the night with all of them having fun n playing snooker...!!
n to make her night worth being awake maan n her had a play in pool...n the way he whispered that he wud not let her lose...that was just superb...!!!
finally geet ka jaane ka waqt ho gaya...sob sob...she din let anyone accompany her to the airport cz she wun b able to go then...
ooopppss...maan driver...Shocked Shocked Shocked...rubbing my it..?? Shocked
he is going to drop her to the airport...!!
sweet babaji...!! that is wonderful...!!
update soon...soumya...!!
loved the update...
can we expect another part today...??? Embarrassed

Edited by bansipatel - 27 September 2011 at 11:24pm

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged

hi sweetheart... this beautiful word just one word took my life

Edited by maansee - 27 September 2011 at 10:58pm

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
soumya please let geet go fast no rona dona as i know only then maan will realise what place she hold in his life

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anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged

Hey Saumya, thought of giving comments in the form of songs.

"Geet, did you make some resolution, to not agree to any proposal I make?", he asked her.

She smirked and said, "Well, there is one proposal that you can make and I swear I will never refuse", she said and winked back.   Geet - Mujhse shaadi karoge, mujhse shaadi karoge.Wink

she said and started to walk towards the mansion. Maan stood there watching her. She was leaving. This is what he had wanted the first day she stepped into the mansion. But why is that he did not want it anymore, when the moment had arrived. In less than 12 hours, she would be out of the mansion, out of the city, out of the country and out of his life. What had changed since her first day in the mansion till her last day that his entire perspective and outlook of her had changed? Maan - Najane mere dil ko kya ho gaya, abhi to yahi tha abhi kho gaya. Ho gaya he tujhko to pyaar sajana, lakh kar le tu inkaar sajana, dildaar sajana, ye he pyaar sajana.Blushing

 As he stood there, watching her enter the mansion, his phone rang. He ignored it, waited for her to completely go out of his sight, and then looked at his phone. It was a call from Sasha. He simply ignored it and looked at the path she had taken to enter the mansion. When he found it empty, he felt some voidness. He smiled at his changing feelings and walked towards the outhouse. Maan - Kuch to hua he, kuch ho gaya he. Do char din se lagta he aise, badly hui si ab ye fiza he, kuch to hua he, kuch ho gaya he.Smile

Geet had announced about her departure to S'pore the next day and it came as a shock to everyone. Kiara and Naintara yelled together, "Tum hume ab bata rahe ho Geet?" NT - Tum kal chali jaogi to me kya karoongi, tu yaad bahut ayegi to main kya karoongi.Cry

"Bro, you know what? Geet's leaving tomorrow morning", said Kiara, as she walked towards him. "I know!", he said. Kiara -Yaad teri ayegi, humko bada satayegi, Cry

"Arey Geet kahan hain", asked Dev and as soon as he asked, he got the answer, "Main yahan hoon", very much like the first day. Maan recollected how angry he was and how he had blasted her and was kicked out of the mansion. HE smiled at those thoughts and looked into his plate. Maan -Somwar ko hum mile, mangalwar ko nain, budhwar ko neend gayi, guruwar ko chain.

"Kya hua?", asked Daadima. "Kuch nahin. Kuch yaad aaya", he said. Maan - Baatein bhool jati he, yaadein yaad ati he, ye yaadein kisi dilo jaanam k chale jaane k baad ati he.

 "Ek game ho jaaye?" Maan - AA khel khele hum, ek khel khele hum.

"What magic have you done? Everyone likes you so much and are all so upset with the fact that you are leaving", he asked, Maan -Tera jaado chal gaya, Geet – Tu mujhko na mila.

"Yep good night", he said and she turned to walk towards the mansion, when he said, "Sweetheart take care". Me - Pyaar kiya nahi jata ho jata he, dil diya nahi jata kho jata he.

Niharika protested but Geet hugged her tight and said, a final bye to everyone. She got into the back seat of the car and the car drove out of the mansion. Niharika – Chala bhi aa ho, aja rasiya, jane wale aaja teri yaad sataye.

The car stopped a little distance away from the mansion and Geet looked at the driver and was shocked. "aage aao", he told her. "aap?", she said, shocked. Maan – Main tere pyaar me kya kya na bana Geet, Kabhi bana Snooker player, kabhi driver.LOL

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---nishu--- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
really nnice dear
driver toh hot hai yaar and frank bhi
no gud     mornig 
straigt order aage aao

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krati5 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
wow... maan driving car for her... i mean... its jst so wow...

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ammu5 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
wat to write?? it was such a beautiful n emotional update. I got so emotional when geet said goodbye to everyone. it was very painful. enjoyed the before part vn everyone tried to spend the last moments with geet. much n much the awesome maaneet moments. n now maan driving the car. now  i have to wait till tomorrow cant u post another update today itself?? I know i am selfish but wat to do yaar. waiting is really painful.

Edited by ammu5 - 27 September 2011 at 11:46pm

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