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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 5:14am | IP Logged
Gr8 lines gwen..!!
Every1 shud read these lines in this world!!
emmm I think dil aur dimaag kaa combo acha rehta h qki dil humesha marwane wale kaam krta h..
Aur dil dimaag par kaabu kr leta h..
Keep giving ur thoughts a shape.. Smile
ALL THE BEST!


Edited by daya_angel - 29 August 2012 at 5:20am

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gwentlend

DOSTI

Dosti sabse haseen shabt hai
sabse gehra sabt hai
kisi ek ko do banate hai
har rishte ki buniyaad bhi hai 
Rishta jo bhi ho usse
mazboot bannane wala dosti hee hai
jis rishte mein dosti ki kami ho
wo rishta syada der tak nhi hoti
Jaise taare chaan ki saath
kabhi na chodthe
jaise bhul pavan ke saath
naachna nhi bhulthe
Jaise paani apni bahaav
kabhi na badalthe
Jaise samunder darti se
pyaar karna nhi chodte
waise hee dosti bhi
dosti se humari har mushkil dur hoti hai
dosti duniya ki sabse badi khushi hai
aur sabse badi dukh bhi
dosti ek rubber band ki tarah hota hai
agar ek chode to doosre ko dard hote hai
lekin agar hum ise sahi tarah nibhayein
to ye sabse badi khushi banthi hai
dost rehe ya na rehe
lekin unki dosti humesha rehta hai
thanks for pmEmbarrassed for inviting me,sorry for being so lateConfused but wow truly u made a congo poetry hunnn...very appreciable...Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged

It's mindblowing and awesome Gwen!!!! Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
The second one is also awesome Gwen. I love how you wrote it!!!! Clap

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
GWEN DI AWESOME RHYME 
First Poem:- The poem is very well written and conveys the message of friendship in a very simple way Thumbs Up Clap
Second Poem:-This poem is also true to quite an extend ErmmBig smile


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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Mind blowing x i remmebered my best friend x realliii emotional Smile

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Aww.. both are awesome poems...!! described a real meaning of DOSTI in a very sweet and nice way !!! u rocked GWEN !!!! keep writing..!! N thnks for PM !! Smile

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
@aman di : thank uSmile
agar meri jaisi soch sabki ho jaye to mein kaise special aur pyari ho gi???WinkTongue

@dada thank u
aapki bataye huye cheezon ko aage se dyaan rekhoongi
thank u 4 ur comments
and dil is always right 

@GS:thank u

@gabriella thank u

@dev thank u
and plz no sorry

@sri di:thank u

@pari: thank u

@hal96:thank u

@ridz :ur welcum 
and thank u

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