girl poetry help

I need help with making this poem sound better, as hindi is not my first language. It sounds stupid but its an inside joke. If u can add to it as well it would be helpful. Thanks. Im trying to write a poem from her perspective as she is kinda mad at me. Hence I am the deewaana. So ladies any help appreciated. 

Hey Deewaana, 

Dheko wo pyaari auraat ku zara

Wo hai so, panree wo dupata

Ajeeb auraat ku dekho na

Tu neglect kyun kara

uska dil mai dekho na

wo admi nai dekhda so uska dil hai sarawaa

dimaak hai pirawaa, 

Mai hun wo deewaana, 

jo ap nai meri neend jagaaya...

theres more I just need to add these words in a sweet way

pyaar karna wala, ghalti karatha, sumjaana, lot kai aana, rulaana, yaad rakhna, bhoolnejaana, baath suno na, pyaasa, chupara, muskaraana, nikhaala, tumahra, taraana

PLEASE help

Hey Deewaana, 

Dheko wo pyaari auraat ku zara

Wo hai so, panree wo dupata

Ajeeb auraat ku dekho na

Tu neglect kyun kara

usku nai taraana

uno dekhri pyaar karne wala

uska dil mai dekho na 

wo admi nai dekhda so uska dil hai sarawaa

dimaak hai pirawaa, 

Mai hun wo deewaana, 

jo ap meri neend nai jagaaya

juba pain kai, apke khandaan ku muskaraaya

conufuse karthi tu, text mai zabaan nikalke battaya:p

maine ghaltian karatha, magar main koshish karungaa

palai ye poem kai saath tumara dil ku hilaana

Confused? maybe english mai sumjaana...