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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
wow it was just amazing...
loved it...
 
their conversation uff... ROFL ROFL aur sab se zaberdast " aaj tu aag lagadoo '' lol lol...mindblowing...
u both are fantastic...Clap
 
love u both...
 

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
HELLLOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KOI HAIN??????????!!!!!!!!!!!????????????Ermm
agar hain toh plzzz koi batayega ke yeh ff kab update hoga????????????????????????????????????
iss bar koi Ms.VALLIYAH JI update karne wali thi na?????????
uska kya hua????????????????????????????????????

AJ 24DAYS i mean almost 1month hone wala hain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Stern Smile

VALLIYAH Api i want an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Stern SmileStern SmileStern Smile

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
fabulous FF
plz update soon and do pm me...

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnim.

update plzzz
sorry for delying it so much
 
with closure of my on going three others i'llbe cuming to it...so need tme..maybe this will be update after 10-12 days...sorry for the wait
 

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Update ur ff Fiza n Valiyah

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Posted: 18 January 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged

 

Hello guys

Sooo soorrryyy..kan pakar k sorry …

As valiyah left this SS and I wasn't in mood of writing humor, so problem was there …u all need to handle it sorry for tht

And after so long writing this was not easy I lost the touch…so even this is something I don't know wht I have done..

Enough of my explanations…here is an update…

Waiting for ur response..

Lov ya

Fiza



Edited by drfizaahmed - 18 January 2012 at 12:28pm

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Chapter: 8

Lying on the bed he was thinking of all that has happened in all these days of his life.his attention was diverted as his cell buzz

" tomorrow at 5 in evening at Park opposite my office u have a date"

Mayank: to hell with the "date"..mein nhi jarha…ullu..

He picked his cell and called her

Nupur: kya hai…

Mayank: mjhy kis se nhi milna..

Nupur: kyun…us ak47 ko haaan kerdo…

Mayank: nhi…soch rah hoon tumhara kam hi band kerado…

Nupur: oye meray kam ki taraf dekhna bhi nhi…

Mayank: tumhari taraf dekhoon…

Nupur: mayank mera sir wasy hi dard ker raha hai..aur maat kahaoo

Mayank: aray really…deemgh hai ..aj tu mjhy lag kahin chor ker aai hoo…ya nazar kam ata hai tumko…

Nupur: mayaank…tum kal ajana bus…aur mjhy tum se ko aur lecture nhi suna na…jab dekho tumharay sawl hi nhi kahatam hotay hain

Mayank: kyun k tum jawab nhi daytin…ajeeb hogai ho..samhj hi nhi ati hoo….huh…

Nupur: tum sojao…tumhari teeeli jasay deemgh mein yeah baat nhi askti…kal miltay hain

Mayank: thik hai good nite..

Nupur: good nite….suno

Mayank: bolo

Nupur: hath per kuch lagalo warna larki mana kerday gi

Mayank: wasy bhi kaun sa han kerna hai ..tum sari asi talash ker rahi hoo

Nupur: ap agar larkiyoon ko aqal agai hai tu mein kiya kero….

….

Inteha hogai intezar ki….

Nupur: kitna betab ho na tum ….uff…

Mayank: he leaned towards her who was siting beside him …tum ko kya khabar ..ahhh..kitni betaab hain hum….

Nupur: yaar yeah larki kaha rah gai hai…

Mayank: wasy naam kiya hai is k

Nupur: Arjuman ( the queen for whom taj mahal was made)

Mayank: kyaa…yain us k marnay per

Nupur: zil –e-elahi ko taj mahal banwan hoga…

They both laughed…

Mayank: kya baat hai aj kuch porani wali nupur lag rahi hoon…nupur yeah jo samny se arhi ha yeah tu nhi hai na..sach kah raho hoi tu tum apna life insurance renew keraloo..aj tu tum ko mein paka nhi choro gi

Nupur: mjhy kiya pata …mein ny nhi dekh us ko bhi

Dressed in a white churidar, with hair made in chitila with white flowers on it, aloud payal on ankle, with a rose in her hand, she was walking towards him slighting twisting her dupta on her fingers….

Arjuman: addab…hum arjuman hain

Mayank: na cheez ko mayank Sharma kahtay hain…

He did it in a joke way

Arjuman: ya khuda apk itna hafeez( nafeez)  lahja sun ko dil ko buhat sukoon mila

Mayank: kaun sa lahja….mera naaam hafeez nhi mayank hai

Arjuman: yeah baat humary qalam(pen) mein hai….arjuman begum ko jo ek baat kah di jay…zehan mein ranjh(sad) jati hai

He was trying to figure out her words

Mayank: ohh u mean ilam(knowledge) mein hai..and ranjh nhi raaj ..

Arjuaman: dekiy …humain bulkily pasand nhi koi humari inkilaa keray…

Mayank: INKILAAA…. Ohh islaha( correction) ..nhi mein apki correction nhi ker raha hoo..bus khud ko samjhny ki khosih ker raha hoon…he said the last bit in a whisper

Arjuman: jo bhi tu zara ab hum adhy(adhay means a spot or in other language and area alone…but she actually means muda=talk of matter) per atay hain

Mayank: KAHA ATAY HAIN..shocked…

Arjuman: aray tu hum aur ap baat kasay kerain gay…she moved forward

Mayank: per us k liyan aaday per jany ki kiya zaroorat hai …n he moved away….

Arjuman: aray tu nhi aay gay us per tu arjuman begaum aur apapni zindagi ka rukshar(lips) per khubsorrat kaliyaan kasay ugaay gay….. kareeb se kasay janay gay

Mayank: mjhy itna kareeb nhi ana …ap kis kism ki baatein ker rahin ….mjhy kahin nhi jana

Arjuman: tu arjuman begaum ny kaha kha k kahin jana hai….sab kuch yahin hoga.. rafakat( means closeness, though she means farakhat meaning leisure time) aur tafseel se …

Mayank: dekhain….he close his collar….mein is kism k larka nhi hoon….

Arjuman: aray ap tu America se aay hain aur asi baatein ker rahy hain….ap se tu humain betakulfi ki umeed thi aur ap tu baat kerany se bhi door bhag rahy hain

Mayank: dekhain mein asa bulkily bhi nhi hoon…yeah nupur kaha hai….

Arjuman: unhain kyun bula rahy hain..woh tu humain chor ker gai hain..aur ap hain k mehfil hi nhi jama rahy hain…ab kya yeah bhi humain kerna paray ga…

Mayank: meray kayal se ab mehfil barghas(end) keraty hain…mein chalta hoon …

 

Mayank: NUPURRR…..

Anty mein sach kaha raha hoon is k liyan larka mein dhondo k yeah final hai…tu dekha beta mein ny tery liyan koi namao na nhi talash keratu tu tu…errr…mera is waqt tumhara sir thorny k dil ker raha hai….

Nupur: tu is mein mera kya kasoor hai….story ki demand hai…

Mayank: tu yeah tumharay sath kyun nhi horaha hai..meray sath hi kyun….aur yeah sab tum ker rahi hoo woh bhi jaan bhooj ker….bus

Nupur: mayank aram se …itna ghusa kero gay tu abhi jis se milna hai us k kiya kero gay….

Mayank: mjhy kisi se nhi milna..tum kisi kam ki nhi hoo…pata nhi kis janam ka badla lay rahi hoon…socha tha dost ko yeah kam day raha hoon best keray gi per yaha

NM: nupur wasy tum yeah ker kiya rahi hoo…ek tameez k larki nhi hai tumhary pass..

Nupur: mein jan bhooj ker ker rahi ho kiya….acha pls ab chalo

Mayank: kaha…

Nupur: bus chalo…us larki ko mein bhi chaiy tum se miltay waqt ..lagta hai us ko pata chal gaya hai tumahray baray mein

Mayank: ek aur namao na se miltay hain chalein..

..

Reaching the park they were observing it keenly, mayank has a settled smile on his face and she was looking all around

Mayank: aj kitny saal baad yaha ayay hoon..sab kuch wasy hi hai..

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: kitna maza ata tha na uncle k sath yaha anay mein…we use to have so much fun haina….aur tum hamesha rooti rahti thi…mein us ride per gir jao gi, daar poke

Nupur: she chuckled…

Mayank: aur ab dosro ko daarti hoon….bhooth nath…

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: he turned around in utter surprise as she isn't firing back, looking at her his eyes followed were she was looking….

A boy n a girl was playing with a man, who was making the girl climb up the monkey bar..carefully and the small boy was teasing her n swing on it…a smile spread on his face too…

Mayank: seems like a flash back haina….he said looking at her…n she smile and nodded in yes…

U miss uncle a lot haina…

Nupur; sigh…ya I do…but at times I feel I didn't got time for that, all things happened with so much speed..kuch smahj hi nhi aya..yeah bhi nhi k kuch hogaya

Mayank: n wht happened to business..

Nupur: business tu pehly hi ja raha tha mayank..it was going in loss, and that took dad away too…jo thora buhat bach gaya tha woh handover kerna para to clear the debits….

Mayank: u can gain them back, u have that in u and u know that  but it doesn't mean u do two things together…tum yeah kam bhi ker rahi hoo..plus side per textile bhi strt kiya hua hai…asay kyun ker rahi hoo

Nupur: I want everything back

Mayank: there things nupur ..mere things….they cant make uncle cum back..but in all this we lost u too..u lost urself completely..sab kuch arms se bhi tu hosakta hai na…kyun apany apko bhi itna stress ker rahi hoo..

Nupur: mayank mhjy s baray mein koi baat nhi kerni…mjhy kernay do jo mein chahti hoon pls…

Mayank: pata tha yeahi bolo gi…tum ko ruk nhi raha hoon..na hi rukho ga…but let us also be part of this…we want to be …hum sab ko kyun door ker rai ho….tum aj bhi wohi harkat ker rahi hoo..jasay choti thi tu naraz ho ker basement k room mein khud k lock ker layti thi….per yeah nhi baati thi k pershan kiya ker raha hai…

Nupur: tumhain yaad hai….she chukled

Mayank: han kyun k phir ek mjhy bechary per hi tu musibat ati thi..tumhara secret hide out batao bhi na…aur tum ko waha se nikalo bhi..uff..tum abhi bhi yeahi chaha rahi hoo

Nupur: chukled….ab maat try kero waha se nikalny ki..tum se nhi hoga..she said loking in his eyes..and he smile look in her deeply…

Mayank: bet..and i bet u will loss it…

GIRL: hey dear….

she slapped playfully on nupurs shoulder and he griped her from shoulder as she droped herself on him..slowly he made her stand…and bring them back in today…

Girl: Kasi ho nupur…she said hugging her

Nupur: I am fine ….yeah mayank hai….

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 18 January 2012 at 12:34pm

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Posted: 18 January 2012 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
API...Hug
itne acche thread ka bhttt bhttt shukriyan...
i love u lodsss for dat...n for EVERYTHING...Hug
accha humne WWU ka comment Edit kar liya hain apne dekha...Embarrassed
n Thank u sooo much for updating dis ff...
love u API...HugHugHug

Awesome update API...
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written as usual...
uff!!! i missed dis ff sooo much...
kitne din baad aj itna hasi...thank u...Hug
By God!!! me too agree with Mayank...
kya ladki lekar ati hain yeh Nupur dhund dhund ke...LOLROFLLOL
n yeh Arjuman Begum toh mashALLAH...
has haske peit dard kar raha hain...By God!!! ROFLROFLROFL
kya URDU kahin hain...ranisahiba ne...LOLROFLLOL
mera Bechara Mayank...
kitni mushkil se apna izzat bacha ke bhaga bhagna para bechare ko...ROFLROFLROFL
loved it lodsss litterally...
its alwaysss a pleasure to read dis ff...
it makes me happy wenevr i m sad...LOLEmbarrassedLOL
n d end was sad...
awww...
Nupur suffered so much na...n missed her dad...
dats why woh ase ban gayi hain...
waise i think iski ek aur wajah Mayank bhi hain...
n i still think MayUr love EACHOTHER only!!!
bt yeh NEW Entry se mujhe thora dar lag raha hain...
waiting for d next part...
loved it lodsss...
love u Fizu API...HugHugHug

ps: will miss ur writing VALLIYAH API...Hug agar kabhi phir mann karein toh jaroor writing continue karna...Embarrassed May ALLAH bless u Both my APIs...HugHug


Edited by 18anila1 - 20 January 2012 at 12:13pm

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