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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arsafar

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arsafar

nice story
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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged

Pardon errors…thnks for ur coment on previous chp…valio has rplyd ti u all…a longgg update…

 

Chapter: 6

She left leaving behind Mayank n Nupur in a daze, not only Mayank but Nupur also had her mouth hanged…

Nupur: yeah kya tha…she said under her breath

But this was enough to make Mayank cum out of his daze; he turned to her in high pitch anger

Mayank: tum….

Nupur: dekho mayank mjhy nhi pata tha yeah asi hai…

Mayank: tum yeah sab jan boch ker ker rahi hoo I knew it...

Nupur: mein asa jan boch ker kyun kero gi…

Mayank: tum chahti nhi k meri shadi ho

Nupur: teeli if u have forgotten tu tum ny hi kaha tha k ur paying me for this, so why shud I spoil my business..han…

Mayank: kyun k tum boothnath hoo…tumhari tu bachpan se dhushmni hai na meray sath….so islayn …yes..yes .. islayn tum meray liyan is type ki larkiyon pasnd ker rhti hoo…jo ya tu mjhy pasand na aay aur by chance a bhi jay tu meri zindgai barbad hojay

Nupur: tu tum ko asa lagta hai k mein tumhari zindagi barbad kerna chati hoon…she said with all the seriousness, n concern…

Mayank: han

Nupur: tu phir apni life k sab se bara decision mera hath mein kyun rekha..

Her simple question left him in daze..his all anger vanished like that, he looked up to her who was finding answer sumwhere in him..he knew he trust her liking anything and even she knew he trust him, then why this..why even this question

Mayank: per yeah cheez kiya thi…

Nupur: jo bhi thi kamal thi…tum ko moo per ghada kah gai…wah mayank kya nazar thi uski…pehli hi nazaar mein tum k perfect  pechna..hum tu itnay saalo baad yeah janay

Mayank: nupur, mjhy tu lagta hai yeah sab kuch scripted tha

Nupur: ohh hello..yeah koi reality show nhi hai samjhy…aur meray pass itna faltu time nhi hai tumhari life script kerny k …mein ny tu socha tha ek strong headed larki hogi

Mayank: strong head, yeah tu rock haded thi… AK-47 nikali…kya kya bol gai ..mein ghar jawai…us k demgh karab tu nhi hoaga hai…mein asa dekh ta hoon….

Nupur: us ko buhat mil jay gay asa jo sirf us k pasay aur luxury k liyan us se shadi kerain ga..aur zindagi bhar us k isharo per nachy gay..mera pass asay bhi larkay hain

Mayank: per us se kya hasil hoga…yeah koi married life hoi

Nupur: us ko agar shadi se woh sab kcuh hasil kerna hota ,..jis ki tum baat ker rahy hoo tu woh tum se asay baat kerti…us k liyan koi value nhi hai

Mayank: he smile wch change into a smirk…aur mein kin sab chezo ki baat ker raha hoon tum ko kasay pata…

He said putting his elbow on table, cuping his face ….

Nupur: tum khabi flirting k chance choro gay..

Mayank: nopes..itna maza aataa hai tumhary sath flirt kerny mein…acha pls mjhy bhok lagi hai kuch order kertay hain.,,,khaty kahty laraty hain..

Nupur: mein ghar ja rahi hoon

Mayank: nupurrr..donot be a spoil sport yaar, acha ruck…MS bhushan ka yap meray sath date per chalein gi…is sham ko aur bhi yaad gar aur he paused n scratched his head thinking n she suppressed her smile…….

Yaadgar aur..rangin is not a good word…shandar…he almost shouted…yup…yaadgar aur shandar banay gi…..he said full on nautanki style bowing his head forwarding his hand….

Rising, his head he looked at her who was already smiling

Mayank: aray wah hasi tu bhasi…thnaku

Nupur: tum kitni barai nautanaki hogay hoon ..

Mayank: aur tum kitni bari sadu… acha pls kuch order kerdo..mein kahli pait itni behaas nhi ker sakta….

They both giggle..

Mayank: okay …so make it two corn soups, fried rice and hot n spicy chicken…

Nupur: ek min..make it one soup, fried rice, chicken plus baked vegetables…thnku

Mayank look at her in surprise and abit disappointment…

Nupur: I do not eat non veg..

Mayank: okay..

There was silence between them, and then she excuse him to attend the call…mayank looked at her it was not just surprising yet, it was weird. Sum years can change a person so much. A simple, silent, too innocent girl who was always so afraid of the world, changed into sumhting tht is so hard to relate with  nupur tht he knew today. A stubborn, workaholic, silent yet to rock on hard. Even her choice changed. A person who use to love pastel colours, was now always dressed in too dark colours tht where nearly toughing black…the only thing tht has not changed is her witty talks around him..he smiled thank god they haven't,…

Nupur: mayank…mayank…MAYANKK…

Mayank: han..he came out of her thought

Nupur: kya hua tam k kayalo se bhar ajao..tumhair dil ki tamana aj bhi adhori rah gai…

Mayank: he smiled….tum ny non veg kahan kyun chor diya

Nupur: mom ko kisi pandit ny kaha tha k mein non veg kaho gi tu my business will be flop…phely  tu mom k liyan aur ab addat hogai…so dil hi nhi chata..

Mayank: kisi cheez k dil chata hai..sab se zayda..

This question bring sumthing old in her, a spark…

Nupur: right now..he noded in yes…. I want myself at the top..pata hai I am planning to strt a knew business, textile k..

Mayank: textile?...kyun..

Sir…the waiter came n again his questions were left in between…n he felt like beating ths waitor..

Mayank: is ko tu mein ny ek rupi tip mein ny dayna..timing….he said under his breath

Nupur: mayank ek working woman chaly gi..

Mayank: kaha chaly gi

Nupur: uffu…shadi k lyan aur kis k liyan

Mayank: han tu working women se mjhy koi problem nhi hai…han per yeah ak-47 jasi na hoo..

Nupur: nhi hogi…jab mein us se pehli bar mili thi tu kafi sweet thi…dekho us se mein ny baat tu ki hai..per us k liyan tu ko wait kern a paray ga…

Mayank: intezar ….kertay hain…

Nupur: tum ny US mein koi larki kyun nhi dekhi

Mayank: kyun k mjhy meri izaat kafi pyari hai…aur waha jis larki ko dekho meri izzaat ki pechay pari rahti thi…

Nupur: kya mayank had hai..tum bhi

Mayank: kya mayank…aray tumko pata nhi hai kitni desperate larkyon hoti hai..

Nupur: mjhy pata hai tum ko dekho na kitny desperate ho…

Mayank: mein shadi ker raha honn….kuch aur nhi..samjhi…

Chalein..he was signing bill when

Girl: hello mayank…OMG u here..wao I just cant belive it…her shout made him drop his pen….

Mayank stod up in courtesy….

Mayank: Julia….OMG…mar gaya mayank..u in India..

Julia: yes I am in india..came for sum work…n as u never let me ur address here neither I have ur email address, but see destiny…

She came forward n huged him, n he removed her hands of her, nupur was suppressing her smile…whn a shock came her way..she was not letting mayank free either graping his hand, placing her hands on his shoulder..and he was getting off them,

Mayank: hey julia…meet nupur my wife…

Nupur: kya…

Julia: wht…oh my god u got married that's not fair mayank, atleast u shud have called me for ur bachelors party girl, she wink tracing his jaw line with finger, wch he removed and went behind nupur, who has stod up after hearing a shocking new..

Mayank: I actually didn't need another girl….he said encircling his arm around her…okay bye Julia u must be getting late…bye…

Julia: bye..bye MRs. Mayank…ur too lucky…

She left and nupur turn to maayank….removing his hand

Mayank: nupur dekho …dost ho na tu kam nhi aao gi tu aur kaun aay ga..

Nupur: mayank k bachy mein tum ko qatal kerdo gi…tum ny mjhy wife kaha

Maaynk: girl frnd tu nhi kaha na..itni izaat di….he was moving back n nupur was cuming…

Nupur: izzaat my foot…tumhari tu mein jan lay lo gi

Mayank: kasi doost ho..waha meri izaat per hamla horaha tha aur tum mjhy bachti bhi nhi

Nupur: itnay lambay choray hoker tu apni izaat khud bacho na…

Mayank: us ko dekh tah kasi thi..

Nupur: tu tum ny paal rekhi thi asi asi..tu mera kasoor hai…aur yaha agay ho shadi kerny..

Mayank: nupur mein ny koi paal nhi rekhi thi woh khud hi mera pechay pari hai..tum janti hoo mein asa larka nhi hoo

Nupur: tum sab ek jasay hotay ho….asay koi larki bechy nhi parti …zaroor tum ny kuch kiya hoga'

Mayank: han mein us k sath date per jata tha woh bhi us k ghar per..

Nupur: dekh sach samny agaya na …islyn tu India aay ho…tumhary per tu mjhy pehly se hi doubt tha..

Mayank: nupur tum ko pata hai mein asa nhi hoon..

Nupur: tu mjhy kyun chora khud se…teeli tumhin tu mein aj aag lagi hi doo….rukho..

She run after him and mayank run for his life, they settle after when mayank hold his ear n said sorry….n they came out of the hotel towards parking lot , but

A car was cuming from the other side yet, nupur was too lost too much sumwhere that  she didn't saw it…

It was about to hit her when he pulled her towards himself..

Mayank: NUPURR….

Resulting the fall on the road, nupur a bit away from him, a shriek he heard which made him  to rash towards her..

Mayank: nupur…demgh karab hai tumhara , dekhiy nhi dayta k car arahi hai..mjhy se larny se fursat milay tu na, abhi uur jatin tum, zara bhi fikar hai tumhain..he was checking her all around…

Nupur: mjhy kyun daat rahy ho, mein ny kya kiya hai, mjhy kya pata k woh wrong side se aay ga…aur zayda bolny ki zarrorat nhi hai mein thik hoon samjhy…

She tried to stod up but failed to as was feeling too much pain, yet she almost mange too by her,  he tried to help but she didn't take it. This made him more angry, he grip her from shoulder n make her stand up, taking her towards car..he made her sit in the car..

Moving to dash board he bring out a first aid box, it was than when she realize that her hand n forehead was bleeding…

Nupur: mein khud kerlo gi..

Mayank: idhar dekho…nupur..idhar dekho

Nupur: mjhy do mein khud kerlo gi

He pulled her hand, placing sum medicine on her elbow, slowly n carefull, stealing glance now n than making sure it wasn't paining to much….

Doing the bandage ther, he move a bit near to her..to have access to her forehead….

Mayank: idhar dekho..

Nupur: mein kerlo gi

Mayank: mein ny pocha nhi hai samjhi…chup chap idhar dekho…warna..

His warna was fearful as he was too much angry and tht was y it was unknown…she pretty well know his this look, it cums when he hates any arugments...she turn her face towards him..he move forward and place his one hand removing her fringes, and with other he strt cleaning the wound…

She shuted her eys not just in abit pain she was feeling, yet to help her self get a grip at her shiver wch she was feeling having him so near her, it was a strange feeling to have him so near, she can feel his breath on her face, his fingers slightly brushing her forehad to sooth her pain, though they were,  yet they were making so much inside her so much restless…that it made everything forget able….

Placing the bandage on her wound..he move a bit away, n find her eyes still closed, after so long he can see the old Nupur, innocent , nervous, fearing…he looked at her with a keen eyes, tracing her evry bit in him

Mayank: hogaya..

She opened her eyes to found him looking intently at her…

Nupur: thanks …she said adjusting herself on her seat and so as he strt the car, placing his hand on stiring , his hand shiver a bit, wch was'nt unnoticed by her…but the big frown on his face was making her voice choked…

Nupur: woh…tumhara hath

Mayank; thik hai….

Reaching her place she was about to step out…

Nupur: tumhara hath..is per lagi hai….

Mayank: thik hai…thora sa hai….

Nupur: thik hai bahr mein jo jo dil chay keroo….bye…

She went out n enter in her house, and he speed up his car and went away with a speed…

Reaching his home, shilpa got worried to see him messed up, dust on his cloth n his hand having a wound..

SA: kya hua..tum dono itnay laray kya aj

Mayank: maa..kcuh nhi..tumahri ladli..us ko deemgh karab hogaya hai

SA: ab kya hua hai…tum dono phir laray

Mayank: aj pata nhi ksi soch mein ghum madam road per chal rahi thi..car se hit hotay hotay bachi..

SA: kya ..theek tu hai

Mayank: kaha ki thik, sir per aur hath per lagi hai..per mein doc k pass bhi nhi jao gi aur agar mein kcuh kero tu woh bhi nhi…dil tu chah raha tha us ko rekh ker ek lagao..

SA: mayank tu bhi itna ghusaa kerta hai….aram se nhi baat ker sakta

Mayank: maa pls ap uski side maat lo..us k deemgh thik kerlo warna us ko kuch nhi hosakta…

SA: acha aram se bahit tu..

Mayank: nhi mein shower lay kerta hoon…ap anty ko call ker k bol do woh thik hai..bechari woh pareshan horahi hoon..

SA: acha thik hai…aur haan apny hath per bhi kuch laga lay..ziddi tu bhi kuch kam nhi hai…mein pochti hoon k woh thik hai k nhi…

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by drfizaahmed - 28 November 2011 at 11:34am

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
mere bechare Mayank ki kya halat kardi...
bechare ko Julia jaisi ladki se apni IZZAT bachake bhagna par raha hain...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
n wen she said Teeli main tujhe aag laga dungi woh toh...ROFLROFLLOLROFLROFL
waise i loved it wen he called Nupur as his wife...
n d way he proposed her for a date cum lunch...Embarrassed
ok!!!!!! jaisa ki main pichle kayin update se keh rahi hoon...
aj ke update ne toh meri doubt aur bhi clear kar diya hain...
ke MayUr ke beech kuch toh hain...WinkEmbarrassedWink
d way dey both behaved n talked n mostly Nupur ka aise road pe dhyaan na dena n Mayank ka aise jidd karna n dantna ek hi baat prove karti hain...Wink
bt jo bhi hoon m gonna loved it...
baas ek dar hain iss sweet wali jo ladki dikhane wali hain Nupur woh kahin garbar na karde...
ok...baad ki baat baad mein...
ri8 now...m loving it to d coreee...
its awesome...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u my 2 APIs...HugHug


ps: Fizu api...get well soon han!!!Hug


Edited by 18anila1 - 30 November 2011 at 1:04am

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
very cute update
loved Mayur scenes...they are adorable
 
continue soon
P.S..btw where is GMYH update???

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maria.

very cute update
loved Mayur scenes...they are adorable
 
continue soon
P.S..btw where is GMYH update???
 
 
thnsk alot dear
 
abt GMYH..it isnt written ..yeah tu half i was done..so was able to do...but im recovering so very soon..sorry for the wait n thts so on a bad point...
 

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged

nice update...

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
so beautiful and cute update and mayank takes help of nupur qki usko julia se apni izaat bachani thi that was really so funny

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