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SS Spirits of the nights(arni IPKKND last pg 34 (Page 15)

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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
WOW Naddiya!!ClapHug
Sorry for late reply though!!ConfusedWink
 
But i simply loved it, loved it and loved it ^ infinity!!! ClapClapClapClap
Superb concept!!! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 15 November 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
totally different yaarSmile loving it.Smile

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
It's crazy but interesting. ClapClapClapStarStarStarStar
Don't beat yourself up about it.Wink The story is unique and really good.ClapClapClap
Please update soon. Thanks.

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged

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sorry for delaying this SS as i got few comments which says it is copy of movie or a novel , here i want to clear one thing it is only my imagination . as you guys mention i saw the movie .  i wantt o tell one thing why i started this story as i normally write on some track and make it as my title .Spirits of the nights was also my friend's track . i wanted to use it as my title so i cook up with this story .. when i read few comments it dis hearten me and i left in middle now i am back as i hate to leave half written stories ... i will windup this story in few parts .



 story so far

Arnav in his late 30s  he wanted to spend some time alone  far from city and its noise with the help of LA his friend he became paying guest in a hunted home . everyone stop him but he didnot listen .  the home belong to Khushi and she does not like any one staying there.  she just some how liked Arnav as he was the first person in last 2 years who could see her and feel her .


next morning

Khushi look at him he was sleeping  she just kissed his forehead just to check can he still feel her or not

Arnav: ohhh he open his eyes

Khushi: just move away

Arnav: when you touch me i shiver with cold

Khushi:sorry i was checking can you still feel me or not

Arnav: smiled i can feel you and see you too.

Khushi: ok get up i have made your breakfast

Arnav: why you did that?

Khushi: i just feel like doing it .

Arnav: smiled ok i will take shower and come

Khushi: ok

Arnav: please promise me you will not come in like yesterday

Khushi: smiled ok

Arnav: started walking towards washroom "by the way i hope you didnot saw me taking shower"

Khushi: ji nahi i closed my eyes  while i was writing on the mirror

Arnav: coming

Khushi just arranged table


After 10 mins Arnav walk to kitchen

Khushi: ready she smell his scent

Arnav; uff you made so many things how i will finish this all

Khushi:  smiled eat what you like .

Arnav: started eating  he just look at her she was looking out side"will you show me this place?"

Khushi: me

Arnav: yes you

Khushi: yes sure

Arnav: let me finish then we will go out

Khushi: woh

Arnav: i still remember i will go to Shyam home and ask him dont you worry i promised you

Khushi: smiled get ready then i will show you they whole place

Arnav: then i should finish thing

Khushi: yes ..

Arnav: finish he just started keeping the left over and washing dishes

Khushi: why you are doing i will do that?

Arnav: please

Khushi: no you are in my home i dont want you to do all this thing she just snatch plate from his hand..."you get ready"

Arnav: cell started ringing " excuse me , hello"

LA: how are you?

Arnav: fine

LA: did you saw the spirit ?

Arnav: yes she slept with me last night and right now i am going out with her do you have any problem

LA: ASR

ARnav: then you stop your nonsense please LA

LA: shyam the owner called me to call you.

Arnav: let me correct you first  Shyam is not the owner  Khushi is secondly why he called you?

LA: he said to ask you would you like to cont your stay

Arnav: yes i will cont  now please dont call me till i call you myself .

LA: ASR you are so rude

Arnav: yes i am

LA: you can never get married

Arnav: i dont want to get married either

LA: you are impossible

Arnav: thanks aur kuch

LA: by the way it is strange you have talk to me over 2 mins

Arnav: oh he cut the call

LA: ASR you will never change

Khushi: who is she ?

Arnav: look in her eyes "my friend my DI and Nani agent always behind for my shadi, i told them i dont want to get married but after every 2 or 3 months they start this topic"

Khushi: oh

Arnav: by the why i would have married you if you were ..he paused

Khushi:look at him

Arnav: i am sorry  i didnot mean to hurt you

Khushi: wink at him i can be with you

Arnav: smiled ya like today

Khushi: just hold his black leather jacket & pull him out with her

Arnav: yar

Khushi: chala  he just ran with her she  ran through the path trees were on the both sides .

Arnav: where are you taking me ?

Khushi: to my fav place

Arnav: ran with her on dry leaves  "bus bhi karo"

Khushi: i am taking to a place which is always green even in autumn

Arnav acha

Khushi: yes close your eyes just hold his hand" tara tara  open your eyes"

Arnav: look around

Khushi: it is beautiful right

Arnav: yes

Khushi: you didnot like

Arnav: i liked Khushi

Khushi but your face saying you don't

Arnav: when you last came here?

Khushi hmmm

Arnav:ok sorry

Khushi: where have to meet here?

Arnav: here

Khushi: as i loved this place he asked me to come here to start our future .

Arnav : just look around

Khushi: what are you looking at

Arnav: take me to shyam house  i will bring him here ..then we will find what happen that day?

Khushi: ok they walk back  after 30 mins of walk they reached Shaym place


Arnav: rang the bell

Shyam: open the door "i know you will come "

Arnav: if your are free can we go for a walk

Shyam: ya sure

Arnav:actually i dont know the place that why i want  you guide me

Shyam: you are here to give me key of the house.

Arnav : he look at Khushi who was walking at his said "Sorry" as she was very angry

Shyam: sorry

Arnav nothing he looked at Khushi  whose eyes twinkle as she is upto some thing in a second Shyam was laying flat on the road"kya huwa"

Shyam: pata nahi aik dum se yeh wood ka piece kaise mera samana aagaya

Arnav look at Khushi she was holding his arm placing her head on his shoulder laughing" very bad"

Khushi:kissed his cheek

Arnav : wanted to give Shyam had but Khushi stop him she just hold his hands in hers.

Shyam: got up

Arnav: chala

Shyam: ya

Arnav took him to the woods

Shyam: where are you taking me?

Arnav:no where just wondering he saw Shyam face was changing colour as the were coming close to the spot.

Shyam: we should go back

Arnav: wait wait he just close his eyes

Shyam: what happen?

Arnav: last night i dream some what same?

Shyam: what

Arnav: just took few big steps & he asked Shyam to follow him who unwanted follow him

Arnav stop at the spot

shyam: what

Arnav: i saw this place i saw a young beautiful girl sitting on these stairs trying to say something to me. he saw Khushi sitting on stairs laughing her heart out .

Shyam: just became pale he just felt his throat suddenly dry .

Arnav: do you know about any girl... he look at Shyam

Shyam: showed him small finger as he has to go to washroom & he ran.

Khushi: just ran & hug Arnav you made him *** in his pants ... his legs were shaking ...

Arnav hug her back but he look at the path were shyam had ran back , in his heart he said to him self "there is some thing mysterious & i will find it "


to be cont... i will update this once a week ok readers...

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
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..loved it so much yar..loved this story..loved how she cares for him and fallen for him..and he tooo.good that she punished that creep..he deserve more than that..loving this arnie.


Edited by sarach - 04 December 2011 at 2:44pm

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome naddiya26...the story is so unique..how did u come up with? I am amazed...thank u dear and thanks for the pm too...

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Gosh loved it good concept

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Shyam Has Definetely Done Something Wrong :X Stern Smile

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