SS Spirits of the nights(arni IPKKND last pg 34 - Page 13

Originally posted by: FLORAGRACE

I loved your ff .

I am sorry if you felt bad seeing my comment.

You are a awesome writer dear

dear i didnot felt bad  at all  trust me . i wanted to say next time someone not say you are using movie story as  it was totally my imagination it some how already written . my friend challenge me you can't right on my music and i come up with this story 

Mmm I read this for the 1st time

thankx a lot for updating dis ff

superb update luvd it

hey  really  interesting  yaar...
i  loved  it...looking   fwd...

Nice one Naddiya!

Prologue is interesting.Curious 2 read more

Part 1

Khushi finds Arnav handsome.Wow!Very interesting start

Part 2
I feel Khushi is attracted towards Arnav.Cool

Part 3

Now Arnav can see & hear khushi.So nice.Shyam only tried 2 kill her.Shocking.But she is only in coma.Right?I'm happy that even tho Khushi is a spirit Arnav cares 4 her.
Khushi: just hear this heart beat as the most melodious music she ever heard in her life...
Beautiful sentence.

Part 4

Khushi kissed Arnav.he cud feel it.Loved d hug scene also.Khushi took him 2 a place which s green even during autumn.Feel like going there.Shyam...he needs 2 b punished.Arnav says that he wud've married her if she was a human being.In d beginning it was written that she is in coma.So hopefullyher spirit wil go back 2 her body and she comes out of coma & they'll unite.


It is such a nice story.Its ur best ff.Still u wil update it only once a week?That's really disappointing

finally you update naddyia

Loving it!
Its so different. I missed reading it.