Nechu's Bday gift- KriYa night part 3: pg11 (Page 7)

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Sorry for the delay.. I had exams.
Ami, Veena... this one's for you..

part 2

Krishna waited for Pratigya to come.

"how long are you going to take? We're getting late"

Pratigya- "just a min Darling."

Krishna- "You've been saying this since half an hour. 5 mins and I want you out or better let me in"

Pratigya opened the door and stepped out. Krishna was awestruck. He didnt know how to react. Pratigya herself was nervous. Afterall she had worn that for the first time.

It was a t-shirt and capris. At first she refused but Krishna was adamant. He wanted to see her in that attire.

Pratigya- "Krishna, how do I look?"

Krishna was totally lost. He snapped out as Pratigya smacked him- "oh my.. You look amazing. Shall we?"

Pratigya- "yup.."

Within an hour KriYa were at Juhu beach. It was 5 pm and the weather was pleasant.

Krishna- "ee dekho.. Kaisa laga??"

Pratigya smiled and moved closer to him

Krishna was very happy. He quickly wrapped his arm around her slender waist- "I enjoy being so close to you."

Pratigya blushed and rested her head on his shoulder. Both of them walked on the beach, feeling the cool water below their feet.

They didn't care for the world.

Suddenly, Pratigya saw some kids building sand castles.

Pratigya- "Krishna, even I want to make that." she said innocently pointing out to the kids.

Krishna loved her innocence. He felt like hugging her tight.

"Krishnaaa.. Are you listening?"

Krishna- "uhh.. Yes.. Come"

he caught her hand and made her sit on the rocks.

K- "here.. Make whatever u want."

P- "toh tum kya karoge?"

K- "hum to sirf tumko dekhte rahenge"

Pratigya started building her castle. She was so engrossed that she failed to notice Krishna looking intensely at her. He couldnt take his eyes off. She looked so cute making him want her more and more. Krishna felt himself falling more in love with his Angel.

"Finished!!" exclaimed pratigya feeling so proud at her master piece. "did u like it Krishna?"

K - "nahh.."

P- "what.. Achhi nahi hai??"

K- "tumse achhi toh nahi"

Pratigya took some wet sand and applied it on Krishna's cheek and ran away.

K- "heyy.. Come back"

P- "catch me if u can Krishna."

she ran so fast that Krishna couldnt keep up with the speed. But still, he was determined to get her. As soon as Pratigya turned to see him. He grabbed her.

"caught ya.."

Pratigya lost her balance and fell in the water. Krishna took that chance and pounced on her.

"hahh.. Ab kya karogi?"

Pratigya- "everyone's watching. Get off."

Krishna- "Nope.. Ab itna pareshaan kiye ho toh ab sazaa toh zaroor milegi."

having said that he moved closer and placed a kiss on her cheeks. Pratigya was so embarassed that she hid her face and hugged him tight.

Edited by KriYa_life - 07 October 2011 at 5:53am

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Veena.S IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Woww... Rams... Tats soo cute n romantic update... specially for me cho cho chweet of u... Lubbb...u lot...

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kriya_sruthi Senior Member

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
i sooo wish if the actual scene was something like this... really soo romantic dear... very nice... gud job..

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PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged

Veena, Im goin to sleep now. Will reply later.

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aka.aier IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm tis is the reason u kept us waitin for so long...well its worth the wait...loved it...enjoyed it and i want moreWink
                                thank you so much.

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--MaFia-- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Lovely Updates sweets...especially last scene was wonderful...really loved the way Krishna said to her :tum se accha koi bi cheez nahi naa"... Lovely bey jaldi update karbo...

btwn concentrate on ur exam's sweets,ye sab toh hota hi rahega...mujhe nahi pata tha tum meri baat ko itna serious logi...anyways thanxx for the updates ...Thank you...

Edited by Amit_Mehra - 07 October 2011 at 6:22am

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meena.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 October 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
sweet n romantic updateEmbarrassed
loved n enjoyed it
cont soon
keep writing
keep it upThumbs Up

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