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Since KriYa are on their way to Mumbai.. I thought I'd just pen down  whatever I'd like to see..




~: KriYa :~
Mumbai Calling




A series of KriYa stories


starting from their train journey...

... right up to their return to TN.



Disclaimer-
this is a work of fiction.
Resemblance to any character
Living or Dead is purely coincidental
.




Edited by KriYa_life - 12 October 2011 at 6:33am

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Edited by KriYa_life - 11 October 2011 at 8:18am

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this is the first chapter of the Mumbai trip. I've just written whatever I wanted to see in the Show.
The next update will be different. Lets see how the CVs potray it.


Chapter 1


  Pratigya was asleep on Krishna's shoulder. He carefully removed the strand of her which fell on her face.  She looked so adorable that he couldn't help placing a soft kiss on her lips. Pratigya stirred but went back to sleep again.

It was almost 3 am,  everyone was asleep except Krishna. He was too lost in his Babu. He felt so lucky to have her.  He wrapped his arms around her and only kept admiring her.

Just then  the motor man applied the brakes & Pratigya jerked forward.  Krishna wanted to slaughter the driver for waking his Princess from her deep slumber. Pratigya looked at Krishna and smiled-

"Didn't you sleep?"

Krishna- "My Angel was looking so cute.. How could I sleep??"

Pratigya couldn't help blushing. She turned and hugged him tight.

Krishna- "come with me."

Pratigya- "Where?"

Krishna- "Yaar tum sawaal bahut karti ho. Just come along."

Pratigya, being as stubborn as mule refused to go. Krishna literally had to drag her along.

Pratigya- "Hey.. you cant take me wherever you want."

Krishna gave her a challenging look- "I defy you. Try and stop me if you can."

Before Pratigya could say anything, She found herself in his arms. Pratigya was so embarrassed. Thankfully, no one noticed them. Everyone was asleep.

Krishna took her towards the door. He opened the door.- "Look at this!!"


The train was speeding through the forest. Pratigya grasped Krishna's shirt.

"Im afraid"

Krishna- "Never fear when Im near." He caught her hand and bought her towards the door. Both of them stood comfortably looking at eachother.


Pratigya moved closer to him & looked out. She was awed at the beautiful scenery. The twinkling stars in the velvet sky  along with the fields, lakes and rivers shining in the moonlight were so beautiful.  Pratigya wished she'd stay here forever.

He hugged her from behind placing his chin on her shoulder

Pratigya- "Krishna."

Krishna- "Hmm.."

"thank you," she said in the most sweetest voice.

Krishna- "for what??"

Pratigya turned & placed her head on his chest- "For coming into my life and being with me at every moment."

Krishna tightened his grip around her waist- "No Angel. Its me who should thank you.

Thank you Babu. You make me complete. Without you Im nothing. You filled my life with so much  happiness that I want nothing but YOU. Promise that you'll never leave me alone. Promise that you'll stay with me forever."

Pratigya looked at him. Her doe eyes full of love

I LOVE YOU Krishna. I love you very much."

 

 




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