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mujhe haq hai pg94 (Page 72)

--Preeti-- Senior Member

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Posted: 26 November 2011 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Wow superb update! Big smile Thank u for the pm Smile Continue soon =]

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sharneil92 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gansteress

Originally posted by sharneil92

CHICA! what an update girl! sigh. but i want moreee! why do you end it when it'd JUST become interesting? Cry

one of these days i'll properly lecture you via PM! Angry
lol no matter how much i write or how much the CV gives us arhi scenes ITS NEVER GOING TO BE ENOUGH :DBig smile

true that. Ermm

anyways, GREAT UPDATE! you came back after sooo long!!! welcome back! Embarrassed

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gansteress Senior Member

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Kushi-aarnnavjiii called kushi still trying to remove her lips from his...

arnav ignored kushi completely knowing what she wanted to say..
he was enjoying himself too much to listen...
kushi tried moved her face away but arnav held on to the back of her head to keep it still...
his fingers were dug into her hair as he gripped it in a fist...
arnav's other hand was on kushi's waist pulling her close to him every time he felt her move away...

finally kushi had moved her face away but as arnav was still in the moment he started to slowly kiss her neck...kushi gripped onto his shoulder trying to push him away but arnav was too strong...every single part of her body started to shudder...her entire body had goosebumps from top to bottom,she could feel her stomach feeling sick,
so sick that she wanted to vomit right there...not because he was kissing her but because she couldn't handle what  she felt at this moment..
kushi wanted to kiss him back more than ever but knew she had to get away from him as soon as possible...
let go of me!ordered kushi
this...not ...right!!!
Arnav-why? asked arnav as he pulled his face a for a moment away to see her reaction
Kushi-what do you mean...let..let me..go...

Arnav-no! replied arnav looking at her annoyed for spoiling the moment.

Kushi-what do you want from me? let go!!yelled kushi pushing arnav with all her strength

Arnav-what do i want? don't you see...I WANT TO YOU!!!!

Buaji-hai re nande kisor this girl...where is she??
asked buaji pacing back and forth with her eyes locked towards the door...she was panicking thinking something terrible might had happened...
payal try kushi's mobile again...see if she picks up..
Payal-no buaji...there is no charge...replied payal trying to reassure buaji everything is fine.
payal stood outside
eagerly waiting for kushi  worried for the same reason buaji was.

Arnav-did you hear me...i want you...cant you...
cant you see...i how much i...
arnav paused for a moment to see kushi's always her tears was the reason for his weakness which forces him to let her go.
arnav turned around and closed his eyes to calm himself down...he felt angry for feeling like this and was fed up...

arnav turn his face towards kushi and held on to her hand...

kushi...i...already lost someone who i love more than anything...i...dont want to lose... said arnav letting her hand go.
di...di always asked me to bring you back.but i never...
i wish i could tell her how wrong i was...
i wish...she
kushi please...back...home...with me..
to our home...i..would do anything...
babuji...i'll ask babuji's permission...i'll even go right now...

Kushi-no! you won't do anything like you hear me ordered kushi firmly.

your my wife...i have every right to...

Kushi-wife? i am your wife?
since when mr raizada???
i am not your wife! do you understand...
the day you left me standing alone in the mandir...
i have always been a miss not mrs even though i am married to you..
you have no rights over me!!!!
i dont accept this relationship...i am a free woman and i can do whatever i want...wherever i want...and be with whoever i want...

Arnav-enough!!  shouted arnav angry with kushi's words which had stung him like a bee through is heart to hear the woman who he loves doesn't accept their relationship.
HOW DARE YOU...growled arnav stepping forward kushi...
thats it...i am not listening to anything...your coming with me and thats is you understand!!!
arnav grabbed on to kushi's waist...pulled her toward him...his eyes widened as he stared at her eyes thinking how she could say all this to him...

Kushi-if you don't let me go...i..i..i...

Arnav-i what!!
what can you do...
do whatever you can...scream,shout,yell all you like...your coming with me.

arnav dragged kushi out of the restaurant forcing her to sit in the car...seeing kushi's stubbornness drove him more crazy...

Kushi-where are you taking me!! can't...
cried kushi begging him to let her go...arnav wasn't listening...he drove with full speed not realizing kushi was feeling scared
she was holding on to the car door trying so hard not to look up.
arnav had gone ballistic...he hadn't realized the depth of his anger at hat moment...all he could think was to take kushi home...
he feared losing her and her words made him even more scared.

kushi started to panic and started to dial her phone for help...knowing who she would call arnav snatched the phone from her hand and threw it outside the car window without any warning.

Kushi-hey!!! thats was my phone!
are you gone crazy!!!

the car gave a big squeal as
arnav stopped his car stepping on the brakes..
he turned his face towards kushi who huffed and puffed in anger...

yes i have gone crazy!
and now your driving me more crazy!
now shut up and sit properly...yelled arnav as he took his foot of the brake.
kushi turned her face towards the window and sat in her seat weeping away.

Kushi-hai devi maiya..when am i going to be free from this dictator cried kushi loud enough for arnav to hear...

Arnav-give me your home arnav...
kushi without having the strength to argue any more gave the number.


Payal-hello..who is it?

Arnav-this is arnav buaji with you...

Payal-arnav ji..? did you get this...

Arnav-i have called to let buaji know that kushi is with me...and i am taking her.

what do you mean kushi is with you...where are you taking her...!!
give the phone to kushi...i want to...speak with her...

Buaji-what are you saying nande kisor...and who are you speaking to...buaji snatching the phone from payal's hand...
hello? hello?
payal who was on the phone...and where is kusi going...

Payal-buaji that arnav singh razida...has taken our kushi with him...!!!
buaji do something!!!
cried payal.

he took kusi...with him
buaji started to pace back and forth trying to think what to do...

thats it...i won't sit quietly...payal...
pack your bag...

Payal-why buaji..where are...

Buaji-we are going back to delhi.
he think he could take kusi like that and we will sit silently...
mr arnav singh raizada...we are also coming with you.

to be continued...

hope you all enjoyed it and thank you for being so patient x x x
and thank you for commenting my FANFIC
it really encourages me to write more...
please add me to your buddy list if you want update Big smile

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tina_1234 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
nyc part but i wonder wat will buaji do

Edited by tina_1234 - 30 November 2011 at 2:10pm

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dumas IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
              love it 
so he final snapped he is just taking her and leaving this khushi is going to give him a good fight now he will have to make up for all he put her through love the update well done 
rbarrettoMrDarcyfanmoon_mineIpkknd-ki-fan1Arnav and Khushi from Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

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mana2 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Amazing update continue soon 
thanks fr da PM

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littlemoi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
awesome update!
continue soon!

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princessunara IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
aww awesome!! waiting for the next part to see Arnav-Khushi interacting properly!!
lol though Arnav is as usual a bit of a jerk i love that he is taking his khushi with him...aahhh i love this side of him though it is not a good thing..can't help it..he is too sexy to not to...!LOL

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