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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Ooohhh...
A twist in the story! Another cliffhanger?! Why do you torture us so?!!!
Anywayzzz...forget my ranting...the update was awesome because now even the family members know something is fishy!
I loved La and Jai's jealousy! Bwahaahhaah
Thaks for the PM and PM me again if you update please!

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
amazing...continue soon

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Haniibee

Ooohhh...
A twist in the story! Another cliffhanger?! Why do you torture us so?!!!
Anywayzzz...forget my ranting...the update was awesome because now even the family members know something is fishy!
I loved La and Jai's jealousy! Bwahaahhaah
Thaks for the PM and PM me again if you update please!
your comments make me laugh..lol...thank you x
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
i thought u updtin now r u??
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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Superb update ! :) can't wait for the update I hope he confesses tht he loves her !!! =)
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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Arnav stared at kushi giving the "its all your fault" look.
he was pulling the car handle as much as he can but it was no use...the keys was locked inside and they were locked outside...!
Arnav-now why are you standing around for...help me find a way to open this god damn door...!
Kushi-ME?? WHY??
Arnav-yes you! this is all happen because of you kushi kumari gupta...neither you come out of the car..nor this would have happened...
miss trouble maker...
~Kushi-trouble?trouble maker?
arre vah make this all my fault why don't you...?! scolded kushi.
who?
who told you to come following me out of the car..huh?
did i have a sign on my forehead saying follow me...follow me...and leave your car keys...huh??mr laad gaavner
and anyway...neither you bring me out here...nor this would have happened..understand..
Mr i know it all...

kushi gave the"please i don't want to talk"look at arnav and walked off...
Arnav-kushi..you...
arnav was about to say something but he stopped...it was no use arguing...
he looked at the watch on his wrist and saw that the time was 5.00 pm.
Arnav-god..its 5 already...everyone must be worried,..
said arnav pulling out his mobile to ring them.

ring ring-ring ring-

Anjali-hello..?
Arnav-hello di??
Anjali-chotte?
where..where are you..?
and why are you not home yet...?
Arnav-di i'm fine...i have left my keys accidentally in the car and now we can't get in...
Anjali-we??
chotte...is kushi...is kushi ji with you?
asked anjali concerned...
Arnav-yes di..actually...its long story... will explain when i come home..for now please let kushi's parents know shes fine...
Anjali-okay chotte..but please..im worried..don't be..
Arnav-di..i'm fine..and so is kushi
please..don't worry...you worry too much...
anjali hung the phone and called kushi's parents
explaining that she is fine...and with arnav...
buaji was not very happy hearing this...and neither was shyam.

Arnav-now where has this girl gone off to...
he looked around but could not see kushi anywhere...
arnav called her name louder and louder as he walked but there was no reply...suddenly he stopped..
arnav could hear her from the distance counting...he walked toward the direction where her voice was coming and prayed she wasn't causing any trouble..
kushi-one...two...three!
kushi jumped high trying to reach the mango from a tree...but it was no use..no matter how much she jumped..she was too short to reach...
arnav caught her jumping...and gave her the "what on earth are is this girl doing?"look.
arnav shook his head and walked towards kushi.

Arnav-what are you trying to do?
kushi turned and put her hands on her hips
Kushi-can't you see,
im trying to catch the mango off a tree...scoffed kushi.
she rubbed her stomach and started speaking under her breath...
Kushi-im so hungry and this laad gaavner is making things worse...
hai devi maiya
i haven't eaten since morning... im so hungry...what am i going to do...
Arnav-did you say something...
Kushi-huh?no..nothing..i absolutely wasn't saying anything...
nor was i talking about you...
Arnav-what...?
kushi-what?what?
Arnav-what..stop it...!
Kushi-you stop it...!
Arnav-kushi..you...
arnav couldn't help himself laughing at her silliness...he laughed so hard that he needed to hold on to his stomach...
your weird sometimes do you know that..?
kushi looked surprised to see him like this...it was the first time she saw a different side to him...she gave a little smile...

Kushi-arnav ji...erm..can you...can you get me a mango from the tree...please...actually...im so hungry and i haven't eaten since this morning..so..if you...please...
arnav nodded his and gave her the"oh okay"look...he started to looking around to find the perfect stone to hit...
Arnav-ahh this one will do...he picked it up and started aiming at the mango he desired to hit.

Arnav-one...two...THREE!
its was a perfect hit...he had successfully hit the mango which fell onto the ground...arnav picked it up from the ground...
and walked towards kushi...
Arnav-here...
kushi thought for a moment thinking should she accept it...
arnav looked at her waiting for her to react...
she slowly held out his hand and took the mango...
Kushi-thank..you...said kushi blushing away...
Arnav-erm...your...your welcome.now come one..lets..lets find a way to get the keys..so we could go home..
kushi began to get upset...she did not wanted this journey to end...
arnav also tried to hide the fact that he was starting like being around her..
he didn't want to go home just yet but knew sooner or later he'll have to..they both looked at each other waiting for one another to say something or stop them from going home but
neither arnav said anything,nor did kushi...instead they started to slowly walk towards the car...
disappointed...




Edited by gansteress - 10 October 2011 at 4:56pm

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ytanuja

Lovely part.
thank you x
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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome update... Thanks alot fr da pm

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