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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Man! Another cliffhanger!
Update soon because this one was really short!
But it was really good!
THANKS FOR THE PM!

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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged

wow ... amazing update ...

is he taking her to get married ... infront of god ...if thtz the case he should have done it at home na... nope to much questions to ans and as u said she was being to shout na ... wishful thinking ... this just came across my mind as kushi is questioning about wht right he has on her ...  if he marries her he can say ... mujhe haq hai ... 

anyways update soon ... waiting to find out wht u have in store for us ...

btw loved it ...

- - badra




Edited by 143badra - 08 October 2011 at 8:32am

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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
niceee...can't w8 for next part
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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Haniibee

Man! Another cliffhanger!
Update soon because this one was really short!
But it was really good!
THANKS FOR THE PM!
i know..today every time i want to write something always comes up...
either my daughter starts crying..or..someone comes for a visit...haiii...i will update asap...when i know i won't get disturbed...Wink
my minds exploding with new twists...Tongue


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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
super cute it is...waitin for next part 
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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

short.. but still sweet!!

awesome update!!
cant wait till he tells her how he feels!
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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
its has been 10 minute since they were in the car but neither had said a single word to each other...kushi looked outside the car window and gazed outside,she had no idea where arnav was taking her...she wiped her tears and gave a very big sniff...she touched her left wrist where arnav had held her so tightly which was still hurting...she rubbed it slowly but it was too sore...kushi bit her lip in pain trying to control her emotions...
arnav looked at kushi noticing her still weep silently and felt guilty for making her upset... he pulled out a tissue to give to kushi...

Kushi-ARNAV JI BE CAREFUL!!!! kushi had put her hand on the steering wheel...without notice she was holding arnav's hand
arnav looked ahead and notice a cat on the road
he quickly put his car on brake trying to stop just in time trying not to hit it...
Arnav-Woah! that was close...
kushi had her hand on her chest trying to catch a breath...she had her eyes closed still and was too scared to open it...
Kushi-hai devi maiya please save...hey devi maiya please save
hai devi me please save me... chanted kushi
arnav looked at her and admiring her cuteness...he gave a small smile...trying to make sure it was not too obvious.

Arnav-kushi..are you ok...? did you get hurt?
kushi did not reply...she still had her eyes closed...
kushi...kushi...hello are you okay?
arnav pushed her slightly
Kushi-huh? what?
yes..im fine...where are...
omg! what about the cat???
is it okay arnav ji...omg its not isn't it...did it die..??
kushi jumped out of the car trying to see it if it was alright but she could not find it...arnav followed her...
Arnav-kushi..
Kushi-it died didn't it...??where is it gone???
Arnav-no its...
Kushi-how could you arnav ji..how could you let a cat die...
thats it...im never going to...
arnav started to loose his patience...kushi would not stop talking...and also would not let him reply back...
Arnav-CHUP!!!! snapped arnav
kushi starting weeping hard...
Kushi-waaah...waaah...
arnav ji...how...could..you...be...so...meeean!
cried kushi.
Arnav-okay...okay...im sorry...stop...stop crying...
you cry too much...
kushi still weeped...sniffing on her dupatta...
he took out a tissue and handed it to her..but she refused to take anything from him...
arnav had it with her stubbornness so he decided to wipe her tears himself...arnav pulled her towards him..
Kushi-arnav ji...what..
he put his finger on her lips stopping her from talking...
Arnav-shhh..
arnav wiped her tears slowly from her cheeks...



Kushi's mind-what is he doing...why is he doing this...
is he being nice...but why...?
questions after questions was racing through kushi's mind making her head dizzy...
realizing what had just happened arnav and kushi pushed one another away from each other with embarrassment...
their eyes were down to ground feeling shy and awkward...
Arnav's mind-what am i doing...why do i care about this girl...
no girl has made arnav singh raizada this weak before...so why is it happening now...??

everyone sat at the couching sipping tea that lavanya had made...
Nani-anjali...didn't kushi ji come today...
Anjali-nani...im not sure...she did come before but i don't know where she is...even chotte is not around...
jai do you no where she is...?
Jai-no anjali ji...i haven't  seen kushi today...
Lavanya-where is ASR...
everyone was baffled thinking where they both have disappeared to...
Mami-anjali...maybe they both have gone off together somewhere without telling us...secretly...
lavanya did not like the sound of that...and neither did jai...
they both became jealous thinking this maybe true...
Anjali-ohhh ...i know where they might have gone...i've just remembered..i asked chotte i need some items for the pooja tomorrow...maybe kushi went along to help...
anjali tried to console everyone by giving them satisfaction thats where they might have gone..but deep down she still was not sure...

arnav had his back towards kushi...
Arnav-kushi...i want to say something...but i don't know how to say it...these few days i have been feeling strange...it makes me helpless...i...i don't know why.. seeing you and jai...makes me..makes me...feel weird..

Kushi-Arnav ji!...arnav ji...
arnav turned back towards kushi only to realize kushi had already walked to the car...and was struggling to open the car door...
he put his hand in his pocket...
Arnav-Damn! the keys...!!!!
arnav ran to the car,he look at the window and saw the keys locked inside..the engine was still running...
he tried to open the car door but it was too late...the car was shut tight no matter how much he tried...he just could not open it
Arnav-dammit!!!

Kushi-hai devi maiya...how are going to get home...???

Edited by gansteress - 09 October 2011 at 12:35am

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Posted: 08 October 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 143badra

wow ... amazing update ...

is he taking her to get married ... infront of god ...if thtz the case he should have done it at home na... nope to much questions to ans and as u said she was being to shout na ... wishful thinking ... this just came across my mind as kushi is questioning about wht right he has on her ...  if he marries her he can say ... mujhe haq hai ... 

anyways update soon ... waiting to find out wht u have in store for us ...

btw loved it ...

- - badra


awh thanx sweets x x

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