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anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Aaj update milega na.. Waiting eagerly dear.

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ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged


Thank you friends for your wonderful comments and likes. To make up for the shorter part last time, I am giving an extra long update today. But I need extra long comments as well.


Just to let you guys know, I usually break a chapter at logical end avoid giving cliff hanger endings. Hence sometimes the parts are shorter or longer….but still will try my best to give you a balanced update as much as possible.


Warning – 16+


Chapter 77 – Wild Flowers


A week later, Sunday 12th December


Geet was doing gardening in the back yard. Her stitches had healed properly and Dr Maan Singh Khurana had spent time with a senior physiotherapist to outline an exercise regime for her which included some light and natural exercises like squatting and sitting on knees.


Thought of her darling fianc flushed her cheeks red. It was already December but sun was shining brightly making it a warm morning. A bead of sweat had formed on her forehead and neck as she thrust the spade inside the soil with some force.




Next Day after Engagement, Sunday 5th December


Geet came out for breakfast. For some reason she felt incredibly shy in front of everybody. She sat down trying to avoid everyone's gaze.


Just then her Dusht Danav fianc walked in and said cheerfully – "Good Morning everybody"


Raj teased – "Kya baat hai Maan…bahut khush lag rahe ho…kuch khaas baat hai kya"


Maan answered sitting down with a perfect straight face – "Kya bade Pa!!! aapko nahin pata. kal meri engagement thi aur shaadi ki date bhi fix ho gayi hai"


Geet looked up at frustration at such a factual answer from Maan eliciting chuckles around the table.


Raj looked at Geet who had turned red – "Kuch to sharam kar…bechari Geet ka bura haal hai tere jawabon se"


Maan shrugged his shoulder as he put marmalade on toast – "Ab mein to paida hi besharam hua hoon….aapko apni beti ko meri tarah rough and tough banana cahiye tha"


Geet exclaimed – "Stop it Maan…nahin to"


Maan – "Dekha…abhi to shaadi fix hui hai aur abhi se dhamki"


Geet took the coaster near her and threw it at Maan who just ducked to let it fly by him. Everybody laughed and just stepped up their amusement at their expense.


----Flashback ends----


Any attempt to avoid teasing had been futile. Even on Tuesday when Geet had gifted Paris tickets to Pari and Rahul, they had ended upon teasing her.




Tuesday Evening


Geet – "Guys, these are your tickets. You are flying on 15th to Paris and coming on 20th after celebrating your first anniversary there"


Pari was surprised – "Lekin Geet"


Geet – "Oh Please Pari before you or anyone says anything… is your first anniversary guys and it is a small gift from my side as I still feel bad ki meri wajah se you guys have not been anywhere after marriage."


Pari started to say something when Raj intervened – "Woh thik keh rahi hai Pari beta…acha hai….it will be good for both you and Rahul….go and have some fun….waise bhi this is just a signal to Maan ki ise aayinda kaise gifts cahiyen"


Geet looked shockingly at her dad who had unashamedly brought the discussion back to her and she had to tolerate good 30 minutes of teasing before she left the room in frustration.


---Flashback ends--


Finally there has been a letup on Wednesday when Maan had been too concerned and anxious to care about any banter around him. It was the day for her checkup and Geet let out a giggle thinking about the poor Dr Sahini who got really flustered in Maan's presence.


Poor guy though an accomplished surgeon was still junior to Maan and by now he knew that Maan treated Geet like a glass doll.




Wednesday 12:00 PM, Dr Sahini's cabin


Geet   - "Maan aap kyon aaye ho….Dad hai na saath mein…aap jaake apna kam dekho"


But Maan was in no mood to listen – "Chup…bilkul chup…tumhein pata hai I don't like jokes when it comes to your health."


Raj sighed – "Rahne de Geet…agar abhi yahan se ise nikala bhi to ghar jaake he will do the entire check up again…so better he stays here.


So under watchful eyes of Maan, Dr Sahini somehow completed the checkup and delivered the good news. She was healing well and could now start on some light exercise.


---Flashback ends---


Geet came out of her reverie and started her gardening with renewed gusto.


Maan entered KM and Nisha told him that Geet was in the backyard. He took a jug of peach iced tea and a glass to take it outside incase she was thirsty.


As he entered the backyard his breath got stuck in his throat. Geet was spading with concentration. Her hair was tied using a clutch but some tendrils had escaped falling around her neck and face. There was a film of sexy sweat on her neck. She was wearing a check shirt which was tied in a knot at her midriff. Buttons were open and a white tank top peeked from inside. She was wearing jeans short making her legs bare till her thighs. She was bent and Maan felt almost dizzy with the bout of desire which engulfed him.


Geet picked up the seed packet of poppy from the assortment of wild flower seeds kept on her side. She was lost thinking how to arrange the flowers when she felt a strong palm engulf her working hand. His other hand rested on her shoulder. "Mishti", he groaned into her ears, as he sat on knees behind her, pressing his entire upper body to her back.


His lips traced the sweat at her nape sucking the skin as his hand moved from her arm to her bare waist.


Geet felt the heat of his desire as her drenched back glued to his chest and his breath fanned her sensitive skin. She let out a moan as he planted a wet kiss just below her ear.


"What kind of wild flower seeds you are planting" he asked her huskily. At his double meaning question, she dropped the spade out of her hand. Maan used that moment to turn her around. She was still on her knees and so was he.


"It is quite hot in here" saying this he poured some ice tea in the glass and brought it closer to her parted lips. Geet looked at the flames in his eyes as she took the sip out of the glass he held. He groaned as he saw the cool liquid travelling thru her throat. Geet felt hot sensing his need as he stared at her lips.


He took one sip too from the glass and held on to the ice cube in his mouth. With a jerk, he straddled her on top of him so that she got very close to him. He was still on his knees and her legs were on side of his making her sit in his lap. He clenched the ice cube between his teeth as he brought his face closer to her. She gulped her saliva and her already thudding heart came out of her skin as he bent down to touch his forehead. Coldness of ice cube and heat of his lips grazed thru her forehead, nose and stopped at her lips.


Geet's whole being tingled with anticipation and Maan understood that as she slightly pressed her brea*** into his chest. Maan teased her further by leaving her lips alone and moving to her chin. He traced her neck bending down to her cleavage. He pushed her tank top neckline further down to access valley between her mounds.


His both hands which held her by waist started to wander. He still supported her by one hand whereas the other frisked her leg feeling the satin skin under his fingers.


Finally Geet lost her patience and yanked his hair hard with both hands guiding him. His lips travelled back the route of her neck to her chin and finally her lips. Loosing all control Maan entered her mouth with their tongues playing with the ice. They kissed passionately till the ice melted completely inside their mouths.


Maan opened knot of her shirt and moved his hand from her waist inside the tank top. His other hand continued to caress her long creamy legs. Geet moaned as his hands cupped one of her curve over her bra in his hand but Maan was already kissing her and she ended up biting his lip. Maan broke – "You drive me crazy baby". Saying this he again kissed her passionately squeezing his hand on her brea**. Geet relished the feel of his bulge as it hardened and pressed on her abdomen. She thanked herself for wearing jean shorts as a lighter material would have stained by the amount of her wetness.


They were totally lost in the moment when suddenly they were brought back to the world of reality hearing the sound of patio door opening. They both got up straightening themselves as Nisha entered the backyard announcing lunch. Trying to steady their beats both couldn't believe they had been so wild in the open backyard of their house.


Precap – New Year Party

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anuandavi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Oh Oi oh oh. That was hot. I wonder how the ice did not melt till it was in their mouth.

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LivLetLiv Newbie

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Great update...and pat on time ;-)) Loved it...

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Clapo god dr maan sudhar jao. before marriage itna wild love to pata nahi shadi kebad kya hoga...

loved the update dear

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Amazing, loved it. can't wait to see their marriage.

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Tamanna_TJ Goldie

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Tht was totally flustering...
Awesome update dear...!!!!
A very cute n defo passionate one...
Cute l'il teasings n also sum bold scenes...
Gr8 combinatiom in the epi...
Just loved it yaar...very nice...
Truely wild as per the name of the update...
Continue soon...waiting for the next part...
Thnkx a lot n keep writing...!!!!
Muahhh...loads of love, TJ...!!!

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