OS - Desert Rose - Page 5

It was beautiful, Vrush. Damn you for writing this intense stuff :-) I loved it. I felt like I watched the episode all over again. I must have watched the episode scenes between them at least a 100 times! This felt like such a fitting continuation. I wondered a 1000 times why Khushi didn't see him in that moment. Now, I feel satisfied :-) Thank you.

Originally posted by: Janet.Das

It was beautiful, Vrush. Damn you for writing this intense stuff :-) I loved it. I felt like I watched the episode all over again. I must have watched the episode scenes between them at least a 100 times! This felt like such a fitting continuation. I wondered a 1000 times why Khushi didn't see him in that moment. Now, I feel satisfied :-) Thank you.

Oh Janet!

i sent you just in case i could interest you

you never know..tomorrow... is another day..and i still have the night to dream!

Wow Vrush!! Brilliant as always!!👏 Loved every bit of it and Desert Rose matches perfectly with their situation!! OMG the way u described his dream at the end tooo good, what an imagination yaar!! Also sooo want a scene like the one u described with him looking at her hand and all!! loved this like anything!!!👏 i run short of words every time i have to say how awesome ur writing is!!

amazing...loved how you explained their feelings with so much detail...please pm me if you write another os

Beautiful and Supperb OS..pl write More⭐️

thanks desigirl

i am happy you like it!

Originally posted by: Lotsav_phun

Creative Genius

I am humbled *taking a bow*

@Rush : Beautiful. Heart wrenching.  I too feel that Arnav will lose her...at least for the present.

Ah Savi!

i dont think he is going to lose her...his dreams are manifestation of his fears and he fears he will lose her..

so he is going to save her... first from himself and then from herself...

am i making any sense?

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

@ nagz

oh..tum aur speechless that a first...let me cherish this moment too.. 🤣



@ Sharu

yeah fictitious.. hai meri jaan..toh tu MCB ke pheeche kyon padi hai

phir mami ka dialogue about fuse being a kauwa and uddna kaise hota bolo??😎

may she shoudl have said, woh MCB trip ho gaya..and mami saying

kaunse trip pe gaye hai? teerth ke timbuktoo!

what say..
and yeah the priorit scene...had to be there..
🤣  yes  they can get a  funny dialogue for maami anyways
i was thinking you r behind CVs now you r behind dialogue writer too 😳
I hope CVs learn from you 👍🏼

na

also random clues for La
1. he called her khushi
2. he saved khushi and not her

more to come of course..

phir shayad la ke dimaagi mombatti jal jaayegi!!
haila rush  i wish this happens.
actually i am curious to know how they will develop blah
will she get a back bone or not.
Somebody has to say aloud ARnav's feeling for blah
he will never do it
who will do that job?
Anjali, maami or blah

your OS does help in answering certain questions
like ARnav and kushi's feeling.
yestarday even she could not stop taking glaces at Arnav 😳