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FF "Devil In Love" Thread5 (Page 37) Goldie

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged

awesome part

great work dearThumbs Up
thnks for pm

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vivacious_gurl IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Teen din mein shaadi... hain... ab geet kya karegi... maan ka reaction kya hoga... resignation.. hahaha...

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anushaarja IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Brij opened the door but he was shocked to see geet in arms of a stranger.. annie ek yehi mila kya tujhe door open karne keliye... y not mom...
 OMG!!!!!!!! picture perfect... really kudos to ur usage of pics...
Geet..! Brij yelled.. oyeee chillao mat...panga nahi karna danga nahi karna kardunga main warna teri tai tai phisss...

Who are you..? phir se poochinggg...maan tujhe chodega nahi...
Maan didn't bothered to answer.. datz my sheru ... lub ur attitude...

Leave her I will take her inside..

brig asked him rudely .. But he ignored him completely i lub u my jaann...and went inside almost pushing brij..
Her mother came running.. aap pehle aajate toh ye ullu da patta brij itna shor nahi karta... buddhu kahika...
Geet ..kya hua puttar.. 
Jee kya hua is ko..? main tahk chuki...aur kitne log poochenge... ek saath hi kyun nahi poochte sab!!! by god!!!

Nothing to worry. Just a small accident..she is fine now.. poor maan...

brij was standing there throwing various questions at her.. ye toh gaya kaam se...
Look Mr..! can't you see she is not feeling well..? don't bother her..! shant hone se kuch nahi hoga my sheru... ussen na ek jor sa chaata chahiye...
He said as he walked towards the door..

I said.. DON'T BOTHER HER.. knock out... tada...

he turned towards Geet furiously after Maan was gone.. can do nothing in his presence... he heee
you are getting married after three days and that's final..

Preparations for her weddings were going on.. band baajaa baaraaat...her mom was selecting her jewelry..
Oh baba jee.. now only bua jee was left.. now she will leave no stone unturned to create more problems..  brij kya kam tha ki ye bua ji bhi tapki... ufff babajiii
Maa I had to go to office..  maan ki yaad aa rahi hain... saaf saaf boldo... mujhe maan chahida...she informed her mother..
Actually I have to resign.. resign... nahiii
She sat there thinking about the entire situation.. one things was clear that her sucide attempt had deep affect on him..  very very bad affect
me missing my devil...she realized that he won't force her now..

She was about to enter his cabin when he heard some one begging him..
Please don't do this.. I have to complete my studies.. at least support me till then.. vicky begged.. vicky!!! wah... lekin is he a good one...

Mercy..! do you realize what are you asking from me..?

I don't have this word in my dictionary.. and if you have no where to go.. that's not my problem.. I am not accountable for you.. its life .. its rough and cruel.. face it or fight it.. its entirely your own discretion.. OMG!!!! needed maanz past ASAP... i can't take it anymore...

If he is doing all this to his own blood relations what he would do to the ones who are not related to him..he wud certainly kill dem... but i think u hav changed him!!!!
she thought as she paced near him..

Yes geet..? he asked her anxiously..

He was your brother.. how can you just let him suffer like that..? I mean how can you be like that..?don't u noe he has his own rules!!!
she retorted back

Sorry I don't have any written procedure to explain how to be me..
he smirked..
Please don't do this..
aapse matlab??? y r u bothered geet???

Does it matter to you what I do..? if I do something wrong.. does it matters to you..? he asked kya poocha yaar... jawab do geet...

She dipped her head in confusion.. back on track...kyun aagaya na sahi raste par... socho aur socho...Yes he was right why does it even matters to her.. why did he even asked her.. he is evil she knew it well.. then why did she asked him not to do this... bol meri maaa... abb toh tumhe kuch samaj aana chahiye...
but some how for her sake he changed his decision for the first time in his life..u changed him!!! i hate u geet... i want my devil back...
He would be outside.. tell him he can stay at khurana mansion..
he said..
Zor ka jhatka haaye zoron se laga, haan laga...
Vicky.. his name Is Vicky.. he would still be outside.. go and inform him that he can stay at KM... u r sweet... shayad geet jaldi hi jaan jaye...
 hmmm no precap!!!! sounds wierd ... but gimme d next update sooner... warna main...  wait karoongi...aur kya karoongi yaar...

Edited by anushaarja - 27 September 2011 at 2:42am

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Craziest_MG IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Yes, u have the right to know abt him, but only if you tell me na...n you wont be doing that...

More troubles...??
Tch tch...kya hoga maaneet ka...?

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leverne IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 3:41am | IP Logged
.Oops i got ur pm but ma inbox was completely spammed so i didn't notice.. Big sorry for late comments.. I feel so bad.. Anyways the update me is liking maan melting down.. Geet poor girl is so confused what is with maan ka past i don't understand.. Don't bother i am a tubelight anyways update again soon me gets bored at home sobs.

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allibr IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
continue soon

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blueopal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged
OMG is   maan    really  heartless  person   in  this   FF???????????
y  he   refused  to  help  his  own  bro...i  need  answer  for  this...
but  he  changed  his  decision  for  geetWink...interesting...looking   fwd...

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srilu_123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 September 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged

this is nice
update soon
did geet is marrying torishi
and what about vicky

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