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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome yaar
loved it !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Very nicely written

Feeling really sad after reading the update... from last many updates, I had stop finding the comic notes in the story...Like I used to comment on Maan's behavior... because I am actually feeling sad for both of them

for Geet because, whatever happened to her was all so sudden and unexpected, plus if the man that entered her life would be nice she would be on cloud9 and would be ready to fight with everything but he wasn't... he was in fact the reverse of what she had dreamt of... so this sudden and unexpected change in her life left her in total mess... she is so occupied with the devilish image of Maan that she cannot think of falling for him ever in her life...in fact she hates him... she is right...any girl would be... if facing such situation... but then few things that happened like her sleeping peacefully in his arms... feeling protected with him... trusting him that he will never let anything happen to her and giving in, in the kiss... one can say that she may had lost control... but how... for an instance her trusting him can be justified coz she know he love her but sleeping one and the kiss one... without keeping time track signal something...!!

for Maan, for once one can be angry on him... want to slap him... like for the way he is forcing her in love... then he is a devil after all, he can force anyone...and moreover he is in love... A DEVIL IS IN LOVE... if an ordinary person in love , he also want his/her partner to be responsive and want to be loved back... he is just doing the same in his devilish style...

And here we don't know what happened in his past which made him like that

The way he is cruel towards all the relations... that surely indicate the bitterness of betrayal he got from them...and the way he tried to change himself for her, however it was looking really difficult for him... but he did...! Just by being scared of losing her... I just loved that and that fear of losing someone indicates some innocence deep down in him...

Whatever one think... but I really feel for him...he just can be a sweetheart😳...if he will be changed... with some arrogant characters still retain... 😉... (Actually I love arrogant men, men with attitude...😳hehehe😆)

I am just waiting for the days when he will turn to be sweet...sweetness in devilish style... I am looking forward how you will do that...

About Geet's brother response and rudeness towards Maan...He is justified...any brother would do so... the thing he is mistaking on is even when he suspects that Geet likes somebody else, he is still adamant to marry her against her wish...

aah I typed really too much this time...

Continue soon...

 

Edited by softly_spoken - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt yaar
brij deserved this type of answers 4m msk
he showed anger 2 wrong person
poor geet is sandwiched
hope msk helps her to elope
aww msk changing lovely
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anshra

@softly_spoken
plz plz plz give me the hints😆
bcs it helps me a lot n preparing future tracks
and keeping them unperdictible
so i need the hints right now
other wise no update😆
😲
wow yaar today i am in blaickmailing mode
😆
  

dont ask me ainee...kitni mushkil se maine iss post ko dhoonda ha
now coming to answer you...
baby... do you really find me this easy
i said i want that to be the story and want to see how differently you will write this
so how can i tell you...
no way dear...
let both of us guessing whats in the mind of the other...
hahaha
i sound too sarcastic...haina...!
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i LOVED it!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
HHMM INTERESTING UPDATE...I LIKEY LIKEY😉😉😉  MAAN IS SOFTENING UP FOR GEET..AWWW😳  I HOPE GEET DOESN'T RESIGN WARNA VE DONO EK KAISE HONGAI😔  AUR BRIJ VEER JI KI TO MEIN...HE NEEDS  TO BUTT OUT..SERIOUSLY MAN😡😡  OVERALL..GREAT UPDATE..CAN'T W8 TO HEAR CONFESS HER LOVE FOR MAAN😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
shocked after the shocked.
maan left her at home without doing anything😕
omggg geet is getting marry in two days. what annie it seems like u will kill me with these shock therapy😆😆😆😆
maan changing his decision for geet. love him sooo much😉😉
means he is changing.
what about the resigning😕😕
arey jaldi se inki love story shuru karo
sooo much to know about maan


thanks annie for lovely update.
@deepa congrates once again yaar

love the poem sooo much too
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is changing.. but Geet?? how will the marriage stop now?? waiting for it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago
@sneha.j
Omg devil deficiency...
i loved it... u cracked my up gal
u have superb sense of humor😉
ok will not wait for goldern jublee..😳
will update sooner..
hehehe dont worry.. do much pressure also on my tini mini brain😆
 
 
@srirad
heheh... u have to be confused about his behaviour right now
but i will be revealing his past soon😉
than u can have an insight as to why he is like this😉
 
@sarita21992
hey thanks a lot yaar😳
 
@aashluvsmaan
oya haaan itna chota update q k eik larki hai
ashu us ki chote chote somment dekh ke mere
update bhi chote ho gae hain
😆😆
 
 
@krnd
heheh... devil ki deadly stare thi after all..😆
he does not know.. he will know then me wondering
what will he do
bcs now he cant force her..😲
but but he cant even allow her to get married..
 
@Nilam-
yeah devil showing some traces of changes
but he cant totally change na..
it would be gradual process..
 
 
@drashsree100

yeah he can be tranformed .. or change

if she is there with him..
 
 
 
 
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