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PJ's FF~*MANEET*~Ch 19 on pg 24

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged

Love is synonymous to GodEmbarrassed, omnipresent; in silent looks, in coy smiles, in unspoken words, and sometimes words aren't enough to express that one crazy feeling that makes everything around us bubbling with happiness. Kabhi kuch kahe bina pyaar ka ehsaas ho jata hai aur kabhi shabd kam pad jaate hai pyaar ko bayaan karne main. Embarrassed

Some love stories are ordinary, yet dazzlingStar. Some are incredible and yet so familiarEmbarrassed. The most bizarre and actually the most beautiful love stories have begun from the one enemy of love- hateConfused. Pyaar ye hai, pyaar woh hai, kehne ke liye toh bahut kuch hai pyaar, par sache pyaar ka ehsaas zindagi ko khoobsurat bana deta hai, aur pyaar ke bina zindagi bematlab si lagti haiEmbarrassed.

This love story is dedicated to the most beautiful lovers produced by Indian Television, namely MaanEmbarrassed and GeetEmbarrassed. And that is why  my love story is called-

We've fallen in love with them and our love for them is beyond whims, it's genuine. Their love is so innocent, pure and words...simply true love. And

"The course of true love never did run smooth"

This is also a story that celebrates their love which we Big smileManeetiansBig smile celebrate in the many ff's we write. Their love will live on for ever in our ff's.






Dia: Geet's best friend since schoolBig smile


I'll update the characters when the story unfolds...


There is something about reunions that acts as a spark to kindle loveEmbarrassed. And this story begins with one such school reunion. But I can't be sure about any love blossoming here. School brings back nostalgia of friends, teachers, exams, happiness and sometimes also some bad experiences and memories that are better not to be remembered. What if that bad memory confronts you when you thought you had left it behind?Ouch

One year had passed since they all met. Old friends and foes meet again in the familiar auditorium of their alumnus. It was as if they had returned back to school. The teachers beamed at their proud and not so proud students. For them they all were alike. The hall was drowned in confetti
Party, streamersParty, balloonsParty, ribbonsParty and of course the old students. Guys were slapping each other on their backs and girls gossiped everything they had stored for that one year.

On the stage, away from the celebrations sat a bunch of girls holding half emptied glasses. Among them sat a beautiful girlEmbarrassed with the most expressive eyes and the most infectious smile that no one in the hall could match up toEmbarrassed. That lovely girl was GeetEmbarrassed and her beauty lay in her simplicity and innocence.Embarrassed The girls were all talking and the hall was bubbling with excitement.

One of the more modern girls in their group said, "
Remember Geet, on this very stage we ruined the Inter School Championship play and along with that Ash's dream of becoming the drama queen.LOLLOLLOL"

Another one added, "And what was it called?LOL"

"La Belles..." replied Geet muffling her laughLOL.

"La Belles which turned out to be 'The Ugly Witches from Macbeth'," said Geet's best friend Dia bursting into a fit of laughterROFL.

They all began laughing their guts out, but suddenly dropped their voice when they saw Ash and her snooty sidekicks approaching themAngry.
She greeted them in her usual airEvil Smile, "Oh hello y'all and especially you GeetStern Smile. Didn't quite expect to see you here after what happened at our farewell prom last yearLOL. You simply disappeared after that. I can understand though, the shame you felt for being dumped and then humiliated in front of the whole class and teachers. You should have stayed away from him...Angry I was really sorry for you then, but now after seeing you so happy I guess you've tossed away all those bad memories.Evil Smile" Ash tried to put a fake smile which looked more like she had constipationDead.Ouch

Geet felt a sudden blow, a rush of pain in her heart and didn't know what to sayConfused. She was wrong in coming there for the reunion, she thought. After all these time, the unhappy memory still haunts her. Dia understood Geet's plight and retorted back on her behalf.Angry

"Aa gayi aag lagane phir seAngry...You haven't changed a bit AshAngry. Lagta hai tumhe theekh karne ki koi machine bani hi nahi hai. And yes, Geet has tossed away all her bad memories including you. Tum toh pure school ke liye ek darwani memory ho after your debutante play School Horror ShowLOLLOLLOL. If you want  you can relive that daravani memory for us, just remove your make up.LOLLOLLOL If you've forgotten how your real face looks beneath those layers of cosmetics, I'll show you the play's pics in our yearbook," Dia grimaced backDead. Geet held her shoulder and nodded a No

Ash and her pals left stomping their feets and looking disgusted.Angry

"Geet, you know her. She'll never be nice to anyone. Don't spoil our mood for these snobbish wannabes."

"Maine socha tha main sab bhula chuki hoon par main galat thiCry. It still hurts. Anyways I don't want to spoil your time here. Mera mann kuch theek nahi lag raha. I need to go home. See you all laterCry."
Geet gets up and walks towards the door making her way through the crowd. She looks back one last time and strides away looking sadCry. Everyone remembered the whole story but no one was that cruel or stupid enough to reproduce it, since Geet was a sweet girl and everyone, except a few like Ash, liked her.

Geet walked with a heavy heart in the hallway. She knew very well before coming to the reunion that she'd have to face her past today but she never expected it to break her again like that. The lights in the hallway suddenly dimmed, flickered and went offConfused. The door leading out opens and a gush of wind blows away her duppatta Embarrassed(so filmy). It was dark and windy outside and she covered her face with her hand to screen the chilling wind. She saw from the gap in between her fingers a silhouette of a
person standing in the doorwayWink. The figure walked towards her and in the darkness she could hear the footsteps approaching nearConfused.

"Oh, these lights, inko bhi abhi hi jaana thaOuch. Pata nahi kaun hai yeh, I think I should go inside," she panickedConfused.

She bent down and began searching for her duppatta. Suddenly she felt someone just before her. She held her breath and before she could act a ball of light flickered into life before her eyes. And she froze and became numb on seeing the face that she never wanted to remember.

There was shock in his eyes too more like guiltShocked. Confused
"Geet!!" he uttered still lost in her shocked eyes
Day Dreaming

She closed her eyes, breathed and got upOuch. She turned and was about to go when he held her hand and stopped her.

"Maan, how dare you? Leave my hand right now," she spoke with anger in every syllableAngry.

"Your duppatta." He forwarded his hand holding her duppatta, still looking into her angry eyesConfusedEmbarrassed.

She snatched the duppatta from his handAngry and walked out of the doorCry. The wind that gushed in, before she banged the door, pricked his heart, and he gazed at the door completely lostDay Dreaming.

~End of Chapter 1~

Precap: The flashback into why Geet hates Maan so much, What happened one year ago?

Ch 5:
Ch 6:
Ch 7:
Ch 8:
Ch 9:
Ch 10:     
Teaser, part1 and part2

Ch 11:
Ch 12: PID=48438687&#48438687
Ch 13:
Ch 14:
Ch 15:part1
Ch 16:
Ch 17:
Ch 18:
Ch 19:
Ch 20:

Edited by pj2012 - 16 December 2011 at 7:42am

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Thanks for the appreciation...will post the second chapter soon...Big smile

Really missed Maneet in today's episode...feels like drought...pyaasi in a desert called devini land...kahan hain Maneet...HELP!!!Confused

Edited by pj2012 - 21 September 2011 at 11:04am
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