OS: Based on ASR's Character dheela promo!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: meepha

oh even u worte oneeE!!

Lemme read

*after reading*

Ouch man!!!!U took it to the next level of hatred😛

nice😉

Hatred is the last step that both need to take... before Love comes in... after this limit reaches its boundaries... ArHi will have no choice but to fall in love!! Atleast they're moving away from the unending silliness...

Originally posted by: Jazz_mayur

That was awesome👍🏼, haye..show main bhi aise dikhao please😛

Thanks a million... reading your comments made my day!!

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

A fab OS Mahi!!

Every single emotion was really well written.

The setting and the mood were perfect.

👏👏

Thanks a ton!! I wanted to add more but khair choro!!

Originally posted by: pinguunique

Woww!!! really good os - u write very well, u should write more :):):):)

Thanks sooo much!!.. Actually I do write OS... One of my OS is Khushi's Excursions while I've started a FF too... on the story of Entry of Khushi's best friend!!

Originally posted by: sparikh

Brilliant writing Mahi! 

U wrote his emotions so well @ the end when he realized what he had done.

-Sona

Thanks so much Sona!!

Originally posted by: memories_im

Wow..Beautifully written..Awesome choice of words.. 😳

Thanks a lot!!.. Comments are such a nice encouragement!!

Originally posted by: aahana1

OMGG This was brilliant 👏

Thanks Aahana!!.. Thanks a bunch for showering all the love!!🤗

Originally posted by: incandescent

good jod mahi0809. i also think sth similar will happen.

Thanks for the vote of confidence!!... But lets see what actually happens!!

Originally posted by: cindrella255

Hiya Mahi 🤗

Jus now got 2 read it...It was amazing dearie!

Arnav babua show main kya karenge yeh toh pataa nahin...but I wud love if he does this...or even mre 😆

Haiii meee tooo Sharmi!!.. I wish he would do much much more!!... These cvs are sooo chindi I tell ya... hope they've planned some dhamaka for us!!.. I want my feelings, emotions and expectations to be bedazzled!

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Thanks a million... reading your comments made my day!!