ABHAY TAKES MY BREATH AWAY - Pia's POV - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Deepali88

Very Beautiful and Romantic dose Carisma..you showen Piya's Feeling very well..
Awesome writtenโค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

Thanks a lot mate.. It was the heights of Abhiya passion that was soo romantic - I just put it in words.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Oh MY GOD..carisma..๐Ÿ˜ฒcan you please take over my duty of writing posts on ABHIYA everyday.๐Ÿ˜‰.woha๐Ÿ˜›..kya descrieb kiya hai..maybe I should retire now I feel after reading your post..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†seriously I mean it..๐Ÿ‘

Thanks yaar - Nahin mere baap - Pls you do the romantic posts.. hum tho khabie khabie romantic ho they hain.. But I'll stick to the humour posts... ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

This is outstanding Cari ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ 
I always portray Abhay's emotions so perfectly and you have done full justice to Piya's emotion as well. This young woman always leave me pondering about her power of love and determination to have Abhay...๐Ÿ˜
I would like to quote my fav ones ๐Ÿ˜Š
 
 
As Abhay draws close my senses are captivated under his spell, I have surrendered, all I can see or feel is Abhay. A whirlwind of of ecstatic emotions limit me to a world in which everyone else is thrown  far away,  out of vision and mind.   
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I am not sufforcating - I know because I have the most sweetest pain in the very pit of my stomach which has become a garden to fluttering butterflies. " 
Loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ 
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Waiting to read next one ...luv u  ๐Ÿค— 
 

Thanks a lot my darling.. Thanks for reading and enjoying.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Viviliciousgirl

That was breath-taking!!! The way you have described Piya's feelings..its so real and rightly said. Thank you for making such an awesome post! It is beautiful just like Abhiya's love is.

Thanks  alot mate - Glad u enjoyed it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

superb wrk dear...๐Ÿ‘breathtakingly beautiful...โญ๏ธi jst lvd it...โค๏ธ

Thanks a lot mate..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Cari Di,

Beautiful POV Oneshot..
Loved how u described Piya's feelings.

Write sum more for AJEH also.. ; )
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Posted: 12 years ago

excellent cari...๐Ÿ‘

you have expressed pia's feelings so well...!!

its really awsum...๐Ÿ˜ณ
loved it...๐Ÿ˜›