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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Galz,I'm a writer (ff writer) I'm new 2 this forum or you all can say I just created this account to post my FF here ...here's my new FF on Yami,Gaurav & Iqbal..

I havnt seen YPNHK but I love this jodi.I have written some other OS's.This is my frst FF on any indian serial couple HERE (IF) hope you all will like it.I write most of my FF's, OS's in Urdu.If you dont like my writing style please be frank about this,I will never mind but appreciate all the critisism .If you all think that my FF isnt good please let me know about it,I will stop my story their.Its just for you all.Cheers Ghazal (writer name not real).

Staring

Gaurav Khanna as Prem Kapoor

Yami Gautam as Piya Malhotra

Iqbal Khan as Rahul Kapoor

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Malhotra Family

Bhupendra Singh as Anand Malhotra (Dad)

Lubna Salim as Poonam Malhotra (Mom)

Yami Gautam as Piya Malhotra (Anand & Poonam's daughter)

Sarita Joshi as Phulwa Malhotra (Dadi)

Dolly as Bindu Singh (Bua jee)

Rakesh Bedi as Kuku Singh (phupha jee)

Pooja Kanwal as Nidhi Singh (Bindu's daughter)

Meenakshi Verma as Sharbati Vajpayee (Dadi's closest friend)

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Kapoor Family

Ronit Roy as Sanpeed Kapoor

Sudha Chandran as Mamta Kapoor

Gaurav Khanna as Preem Kapoor

Iqbal Khanna as Rahul Kapoor

Farida Jalal as Savita (Nani)

Vaishanavi Mahant as Vasu Masi (her huband lives in USA)

Prachi Shah as Simi Kapoor (Chachi)

Vivek Mushran as Kunal Kapoor (Chacha)

Delnaz Paul as Dimple (Chacha Chachi older daughter)

Sumeet Raghavan as Vinay Khanna ( Dimple's husband)

roshni chopra as Isha Kapoor (chacha chachi yougest daughter)

Ali asgar as Prakash Kapoor Chachoo (Unmarried)

Ejaz Khan as Tarun (Isha's fiance)

Deven Bhojani as Bhola (House keeper)

Suchita Trivedi as Chambeli (Cook)

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Others

chaitanya choudhary as Akshay Sharma (Nidhi's bf)

pankit Thakker as Vicky,Jay Kalra as Dev (Preem & Rahuls friend's)

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True Love dosent have a HAPPY ending cuz true love NEVER dies...

Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

(from MY heart to YOURS)

Bechain Hai, Meri Nazar

Hai Pyar Ka, Kaisa Asar

Na Chup Raho, Itna Kaho

Hum Aapke, Aapke Hain Kaun ...

Khud Ko Sanam, Roka Bada

Aakhir Mujhe, Kehna Pada

Khwaabon Mein Tum, Aate Ho Kyon

Hum Aapke, Aapke Hain Kaun...

Bechain Hai, Meri Nazar

Hai Pyar Ka, Kaisa Asar

Hain Hosh Gum, Poocho Na Tum

Hum Aapke, Aapke Hain Kaun...

Kaise Kahun, Dil Ki Lagi

Chehra Mera, Padh Lo Kabhi

Yeh Sharm Ki, Surkhi Kahe

Hum Aapke, Aapke Hain Kaun???

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Chapter 1----Friends

Taare Hain Baarati---Chandni hai yeh baarat

Aaj woh raat hai jis ka mujhe besabri se intezaar tha,jis ko meine
chaha,jis se pyaar kiya aj woh mera hone ja raha hai.
aaj mere paon zameen pe nahin tik rahe hain.
aj mein kisi aur duniya mein hun kisi haseen duniya mein.meine sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha k meri shadi us insaan
se hogi jis ko mein dil'o'jaan se chahte hun aur woh bhi itni
DHUMDHAAM se---------------------------

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1st women: (whispering) iss k pass itne paise kahan se aye jo apni beti k shadi itni dhum dhaam se kar rahe hai?????

2nd women: Jo bhi hai per bada sundar lag raha hai ghar aaj..

South Indian wedding...evey one was wearing the tradition sari's as they knew that the groom is South Indian..dulhay ke family k demand per yeh shadi pure south indian tradition se ho rahe thi..everyone was happy today..
This small house was filled with guest today,every one was here dulhan's tai jee,bua,chacha,chachi infact the milk man was also here & now everyone was waiting for the Baraat to come.

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Scene 1--------

Bua's entry

SONG: Sawar gaye sawar gaye kismat yeh sawar gaye
mila dulha aisa dulhan nikhar gaye...

Bua is busy with her Punjabi step-----------

she is a bindas lady...pure punjabi..she is the shaan of punjabi's..she is her mothers pride..a ery down to earth lady..she got married at very young age with Kuku Singh..she is happy with her married life..Bindu is enjoying her life to the fulliest..kuku is crazy for Bindu...she loves her family specially her daughter "Nidhi" & bro's daughter "piya" like anything...she is an amazing mother & bua...

Bindu bua: Oye hoye..oye hoye...
another girl was dancing with Bua jee: Bua jee yeh step..Bua...yuun
bua: Oye aay chad..ayyy step kar...gidda paa...aisey...
Gauri (girl): (giggles & follows Bua's order)

SONG: sawar gaya sawar gaya nasiba sawar gaya
mili dulhan aisi dulha nikhar gaya...

Bua: gauri...ay kangan kahan se liye tune? (still dancing) lag toh bade sohdein rahe hain.
Gauri: bua machi bazaar k samne jo chudi wali bethte hai na..gangu tai...usse.
Bua: Gangu Tai??? jis ke beti bhindi bazaar mein sadi hui sabzi bechti hai WOH???
Gauri: haan Bua jee sirf 10 rupay mein...
Bua: KYA SIRF 10 RUPAY MEIN...dikha..dikha wadiya hai...

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Har dulhan ke tarhan meine bhi khwab sajaye the aj har khwab sach hone ja raha hai.woh meri zindagi mein humesha humesha k liye ane wala hai-------------
Aaj hum ek dosre k ho jayeinge humesha humesha k liye---------------------

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Poonam's entry

Poonam is a loving mother,wife,sister in law & daughter in law...she wasnt punjabi...she got married to anand in a very dramatic way..she loves her parents BUT...now she's happy here..she is very friendly,sweet,loving caring lady...she loves her husband alot...ALOT.

Poonam: kahan ho aap??
Anand: bas office se nikal rahe hain.
Poonam: aap abhi tak nikle nahin? (angry)
Anand: bas nikal raha hun.
Padma (another lady): bhabhi jee ek baar mithai chakh lijiye.
Poonam: (annoyed) Haan meine dekhti hun (reach at the kitchen door) per apko pata hai na aj shaadi hai? aur phir bhi aj k din ap dair se...
Anand: (Interupts) dont worry mein baarat ane se pehle ajaonga.hmmm
Poonam: (smiles) khayal se ayega...
anand: Hmm okay..ab mein rakhun?
Poonam: sunneye jee..(pause)..thanks & love you jee (wide smile)
Anand: love you too

Poonam blushes & Halwaii screams

Halwaii: bhabhi jee mithai dekhlo baad na boliyo humein k humne milawat ke hai.
Poonam: (gets serious) acha jee rakhte hun..(looks at Halwaii who was sitting in frant of a large patila & was sweating) haan bhai lao apni mithai.
Halwaii: yeh lijiye thaali (smiles) humare yahan ke mithai pure banarsa mein mashoor hai bhabhi jee.aab mumbai wale bhi humare haath ke banaye hui methai kabhi nahin bhul payenge (proudly).
Poonam: haan woh toh kha k he pata chalega (make face & then she eats a ladoo) yummm yeh toh waqai bauhat badhya hai..(smiles at halwaii who was sitting on his small chair like a king"proudly")

Poonam sees bua at kitchen door & yells...

Poonam: jiji aithe aao ay chakho...drag her inside...
Bua: (eats one ladoo) hmmm wadia ay bhaye wadia ay...(whispers) aan bhabhi sunno yeh thali bahar mahmanon k liye toh nahin hai na?
Poonam: (puzzled) Nahin!!
Bua: toh 2 3 aur do na. (like a kid).
Poonam: are yeh lijiye na...
Bua: (takes 4 5 loddo's) aur haan mere wale se bacha k haan (winks..warns)
Poonam: haan magar woh hain kahan?
Bua: aree abhi toh yehi thee..(.SCREAMS) OHHH JEE (& leaves)

a thali just slipped from a womens hands who was working in the kitchen,shocked...stunned

Poonam: (Shocked the way chachi screamed,they all were use to it but infront of all these guests "AWKWARD" she sees here & there to the people who were working in kitchen & were looking at her,all were shocked the way Bua screamed...she smiles at them & leaves innocently)

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Dadi-------

Bindas mother bindas daughter...She was the sweetest dadi ever...very friendly..open minded..brave & strong
she was the one who was the host today..she was welcoming every single person there.

Dadi: aree jamna baain..ayey ayey..kaise hain?
jamna baain: aree phulwa baain mubarak ho mubarak ho..intezaam toh bauhat badhya kiya hai..
Dadi: humari apni beti hai kyun na karen ge..ayeye anadar ayeye...
dadi turns back & makes face at jamna baain...(what a kind of lady jamna baain is??she loves making fun of others & dadi hates this behaviour)
Dadi: (suddenly sees another guest) aree mathur jee kaise hain???
Mathur family: aree kaisi hain ap?? mubarak ho
Dadi: haan je ayaye aree gaytri behen (mathur's wife) ap aye bauhat acha laga..
Gaytri: Ap bulayein aur hum na ayein aisa ho sakta hai bhala?
Dadi: aree jee meherbani apki..ayeye na pls
Sharbati: (she is our dadi's best freiend..she is very bold,works for an NGO..very sweet lady just like our dadi) Phul kaisi hai (hugs her tightly) kinni kamzoor ho gay hai 2 3 dinon mein...ayy bhagwaan. (worried)
Dadi: bas ladki wale hain toh bass...(laughs)
Sharbati: (holds dadi's shoulder tightly & starts walking) sab intezaam ho gaya na kisi cheez ke zaroorat hai toh bol apne manager se keh k mangwa lun? (bit worried & concerned)
Dadi: Ummm (every thing is done OR...) phool haan phool nahin hai tu call kar mein ati hun...
Sharbati: haan mein abhi karti hu...dekh 2 min mein kaam ho jaye ga..aur toh kuch baki nahin na?? (takes out her iPhone)
Dadi: nahin chal tu call kar mein ayi..(sees another guest) namaste jee..
Sharbati: Haan sun phulon ka intezaam kar k yahan driver k haathon pauhancha de..ahooo...(sees some guests have arrived) haan chal rakh...main recieve karan inhan nu...ahooo (hang the phone...) Namaste jee kehde haal ay??? (giggles)

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Nidhi--------

Bua: (to herself) aree ay kithe chale gaye?

Nidhi was talking to some one at the moment when she sees her mom confused.

Nidhi: mummy kya hua?
Bua: tere daddy nazar nahin arahe?? pata nahin kahan chale gaye? (suspicious)
Nidhi: aree mummy,daddy bache thodi na hain jo kho jayenge yahan(laughs)
Bua: (gets angry) haan mujhe pata hai tere daddy bache nahin hain.per kahin mithai na khane beth gaye ho,haye rabba tujhe pata hain na doctor ne unhein mithai khane se sakhth mana kiya hai. (worried)
Nidhi: acha main dekhti hun.
Bua: na ruk mein dekhti hun unhein..aur tu yahan khade khade kya kar rahe hai? nache ga kaun MAIN? aur Piya abhi tak taiyaar hue k nahin? kya barrat drawaze tak ajayegi phir taiyar hogi? haaain?? (panicking)
Nidhi: mom relax..relax main ja k dekhti hun ucce..(leaves)
Bua: (starts pressing her fore head) chaiti kar...hayoo rabba kidhar dhundhun inhein???

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Dadi------

Dadi: (to the girls/womens who just stopped singing & dancing) aree yeh kya??? tum sab aise he hath pe haath daal k beth gayii ho naache ga kaun?? MAIN?
everyone starts laughing-----
Pushpa:Maaji iss umar mein kamariya lachkayinge ke kya aap? (laughs)
Dadi:ayy pushpa rani.. budhi ho ge TU (smiling)...abhi toh main jawan hun (proudly)..aj tum bajao dholak..aur tumhare dholak ke taap pe nachunge MAIN..(proudly) (sweet 16) BAJAO...

everyone started clapping/cheering...when bua sees her mom dancing all alone she forgets eveything..& joins her mom immediately & both mother & daughter starts dancing...gracefully...

SONG: Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee
Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee
Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee
Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee
Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee
Hayee Hayee Hayee Hayee

Naseebon Waala Hai
Khushi Ye Payee Hai
Khilein Hain Phool
Tere Sehrey Ke
Tujhe Mubarak Ho Dulhan
Ye Nayee Subhaa Jeevan Ki
Tujhpe, Chaayein Na Koi Andhere

Babul Ne Goud Khilaya
Tu Unse Bhi Sharmayee
Kaisa Ye Waqt Hai Aaya, Duhai
In Baahon Mein Jhulayaa
Aur Gham Se Tujhko Bachayaa
Tu Hamko Hi Dard De Jaayegi

Sawar Gayee, Sawar Gayee
Kismat Ye Sawar Gayee
Mila Dulha Aisa
Dulhan Nikhar Gaye-------------

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Scene 6-------------

Piya----

Aaj haar room ko pholon aur candle's se sajaya gaya hai...har taraf gulab ke khushboo pheli hui hai...
aaj uss room mein bhi andhera hai magar chand (piya) ne apne husn se har taraf chandni bekher de hai -----------------
Halki se chandni ke kirnon ka guzr uss kamre mein tha---chand bhi chupke se aaj USS ka deedar kar raha tha...aaj chand badlon se nikal kar khud uske deedar ko aya tha...aaj us chand ke chandni bhi piya k agey phiki padd rahe thi...magar chand tha jise koi jalan nahin ho rah thi bas woh toh uss k husn ko dekh kar kahin kho sa gaya tha--------WOH aaj lag he itni khubsurat rahe thi k jaise koi pari asmaan se uttar kar aaj zameen pey agaye ho--------

**aasmaano se utara noor hai koi'
aaisa lagta hai k hoor hai koi..**

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Piya----

Nidhi: (enters in the dark room) piya??? abhi tak taiyaar nahin hui??? (piya was standing infront of the mirror,Nidhi sees piya's dupatta lying on the bed),jaldi taiyaar ho baraat ati he hogi (smiles)...

It was sooo quite here...you can only here people giggles from here...

Piya: (safety pin was in her mouth,her back towards Nidhi,she just turns her face bit to the right side,hands were holding the dori)" Uhhhmmm" (help needed)
Nidhi: (giggles) tumhari toh iss dori k saath pechle janam ke dushmani hai...(laughs)

the windows of the room were open...the wind was blowing her hair..her lips were holding the pin carefully...she knew she was getting late...

Nidhi: (while knotting the dorii of her back lace kameez,looks at her through the mirror...) marr jawan sodiye aj te badi sundar lag rahi hai...bada noor aya hua hai?? kya baat hai?? (pushes her shoulder a bit with her own)
Piya: (gives her d safety pin so she can place her duppata carefully on her shoulder she SMILES at her)
Nidhi: hayyeee (from back she hugs piya) mera bhi din aisa ayega mera dulha bhi mujhe lene ghodi pe chadh k ayega...(she moves away from Piya & holds the end of the bed)
Piya: (turns back to see her cousin) She was looking Beautiful today...light makeup...hairs were open...She glowed with such a beautiful smile...she was looking simple yet BEAUTIFUL..."bauhat jaldi hai madam ko shaadi ke? (xcitedly)"

Nidhi: (giggles & suddenly screams) OMG tutta hua tara...piya jaldi aaa (she runs to see the star from the window she closes her eyes joins both her hands together as praying...& when she opens her eyes...she smiles...piya was just standing right behind her...piya's left arm & right hand on divya's shoulders...)
Piya: kya manga???? (teases)
Nidhi:(looks at her) woh raj kumar (blushes) "AKSHAY" (corrcects) ghodi pe chadh ke ayega...mujhe doli mein bitha k lejayega...

(Akshay was her chachu's son,when they were kids they use to fight ALOT but they were really good friends,they both use to spend quality time together..but when they reached their teens they realised that there is much more then just "friendship".Akshay was a shy kind of guy Nidhi knew he will never tell what he feels for her so Nidhi wrote a short but cute love letter to Aksh "I just want to tell you that I luv U Sadu :p " she wrote every thing in that one line in that one letter...He called her the next day & said the same thing to her..& from then they both were together.Bindu knew about there relationship & was happy as her daughter was happy.Bindu wasnt against love marriages,phupha jee was happy as he was his bro's son.all set,every one was happy,no tears no pyaar k dushman's & all that)

Piya: tujhe kya pata k woh akshay he hoga??? ho sakta hai koi aur ajaye raj kumar bann k...(giggles)
Nidhi: (annoyed) removes piya's hands off her shoulders..tum nahin samjhogi...agar Akshay ke jaga koi aur ghodi chahdh k aya toh...toh mein isi khidki se kuud kar Akshay k saath bhaag jaonge...(gets hell exited...she points the way..down just their they sees an old man standing with his DOnkey was smiling at her...piya laughs out loud...Nidhi make face & moves away from the window)...
Nidhi: (pissed off) (she sits down on the bed & starts playing with her bangles) tum kabhi yeh feelings nahin samajh paoge piya...tumne kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hota toh tum samajhte...

Piya was standing their where she was standing before...she just looked up at the sky...like she was searching some one there...Nidhi voice was very clear..each word was CLEAR...

Nidhi: pyaar karte toh pata chalta k US k bagair jeena kitna mushkil hai..in arrange marriage's ke favour mein toh na hoti...(she was serious)

Piya knew what she was trying to say...but she didnt said anything...she was still staring up their...

Nidhi: Usse do pal ke judai bardasht nahin kar sakte Umar bhar ke judai...(nidhi closes her eyes tightly as she dosent even want to think about it "teary")

(Piya suddenly smiles at nidhi's words...but their was pain in her eyes...may be she was hiding something..who knows what was she hiding???what was she thinking???what was in her mind???she was a girl who never shared any of her secrets/pains/gains with anyone...her cousin was her best friend but she never shared anything with her..nidhi & piya both were very close to each other...they were like sisters..nidhi use to share every thing with piya...but piya never shared anything with her..so Nidhi thouht that every thing in piya's life is good/fine/well...)

Nidhi: tum nahin samjho ge...(sad)

Piya: (as always)she closes her eyes & smiles,that was her way to hide her pain...us k dil ka haal koi nahin janta hai..agar janta hai toh bas woh khuda hai...she comes out of her deep thoughts..& decides to break the silnce..) "Mmm" (BUT)...

they hear the noices "baraat agaye...dulha agaya"...

Nidhi: (stands up...smiles at her) "baraat agaye" (& leaves)

Piya was standing their just like before...she smiles at herself...& a tear fall down her eyes...

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""Kya ghum hai kya khushi maloom nahin...
Woh apna hai k ajnabi maloom nahin...
Jis k bina ek pal nahin guzarta tha...
Kaise guzar gai zindagi maloom nahin...""

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AbHer_neha

@AbHer_neha

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

@Writer_FF - Hi, first of all welcome to our forum😃

Well, ur effort is great...although I just read half of the portion so far still it seems to be very interesting...its like watching a show live.I really liked the characterization, it'll be quite interesting to imagine Bhupendra as Yami's father & Ronit as Gaurav's father😊...I always wanted to see Ronit & Gaurav as dad-son in a show😊 The love triangle part will be quite interesting to read but plz its a request unite YaRav at the end.😳

I can read anything on Yarav & I welcome ur creative effort...no prob with urdu...soon I'll get back to it...plz continue😳

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Rahul Singh

@AshVikrocks

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

@writer_FF: welcum to ur forum..and thanx for sharing ur FF with us...i kno it's difficult to write a FF nd u wrote such a big one..anything on YARAV for me is Party tym..thanx again for sharing it...and ya suggested by neha plzzz unite gaurav and yami AKA prem and pita at d end..thanks..😊

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