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crazysandhir Goldie

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Loved the update please continue soon

-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Please continue soon. Smile
sandiab IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 August 2010
Posts: 21156

Posted: 13 January 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
wow just loved it please cotinue soon and if u dnt mind please pm me when u do update
ragvir92 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
wow dear the story is going in a great way.Our ranvir is getting worried for ragini thats geat.Do continue soon dear.Now I cant wait to know whether rag will come or not.its getting late.continue please
-SilverDragon- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 January 2012 at 3:54pm | IP Logged

Please update soon really missing your updates. Smile

magicalkinrul Senior Member

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged

Next morning, in sharma house everyone was having breakfast. There was quite alot of noise as everyone was sitting on the table chattering. Kaushalya was busy making parathe whilst malti was busy eating them (kaamchor kahi ki)ROFL. Just then there was a knock on the door.

'Mein dekhtha ho' said PC  getting up. He opened the door and saw a very prominent figure standing.

'Ji aap?' he said

'Namaste' the person said folding his hands in front of him

'Namaste' PC replied still looking confused as to who this person was. He looked quite stylish with his jeans, t-shirt and blazer and various accessories.

'Main ragini  ka boss ho, Ranvir Rajvansh said Ranvir

'Arey andher aye na' said PC bringing ranvir inside.

'Dekho na kaushalya kaun aya hai?' said Pc ragini ka boss!' he said delightedly

'Namaste!' said kaushalya welcomingly folding her hands. Ranvir reciprocated. All the youngsters were really excited to see him there and couldn't believe their eyes. sadi, navi, ...and even malti!

'Aaargh Ranvir!!' screamed malti. She got up from her table and ran to him

'Ranvir ji, Ranvir ji mein aapki bohaaat bari fan ho autograph please' said malti excitedly

'Er kaha?' he asked and smiled

'Kya?' said malti dreamily looking into ranvir's eyesDay Dreaming

'Er autograph...?' he said

'Oooh ek second' she said and tried finding a paper nearby but couldn't find one so grabbed the half eaten paratha from naveen's hand.ROFL

'Arey maa...' said naveen

'Ye lijeye' said malti with a silly grin on her face

'Is pe?' said Ranvir looking at the paratha weirdlyConfused

'ji...agar aap is parathe pe sign karde ge tho is parathe ke tho bhaag ki khol jayege' said malti  dreamily

'Ji?' asked Ranvir confused scrunching his nose.

Everyone started laughing and Ranvir eventually signed the paratha.

'Ranvir  beta ao na betho, nashtha karo' said kaushalya

'nahi woh shukriya...mein darasal  ragini se milne aya tha...woh 4 din se kaam pe nahi ayi na tho socha...' he said

'Haan, bechari. Patha nahi usko kya ho gaya hai. 4 din se badi ukhri ukhri rehthi hai, khaana bhi nahi sahi se khaathi agar kuch bolo tho keh dehthi hai ke tabeeyat kharaab hai. Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai is ladki ko.' Said nani

Ranvir was feeling very bad and guilty whilst nani narrated this to him.

'Aunty, ragini kaha hai?' he asked hesitantly

'woh apne kamre hai' kaushalya replied

'agar aapko aitraaz na ho tho kya mein use mil sakhtha ho?' he asked hesitantly

'zaroor  beta...navi ja Ranvir  ji ko ragini  ke kamre thak lekar jaa' PC said

Navi happily bounced up and took Ranvir upstairs.

'Kitna acha, sanskaro wala ladka hai na' said nani LOL

'Haan' agreed kaushalya

'Kina soona munda hai' said malti  dreamilyDay Dreaming


'Dii, dekho aapse kaun milne aya hai?' chirped navi

ragini  was standing by the window looking outside. The window was open blowing her hair around. She turned around to see who it was. Navi  moved back showing Ranvir who was standing behind her. ragini  looked at him shocked and navi  ran off leaving only Ranvir  and ragini in the room.

Nobody said anything for a few seconds; they both just stared at each other. Ranvir looked at ragini  and could tell she was still upset by her body language. Her eyes looked red and swollen and slightly moist like she had been crying, she looked weak and frail. All this made Ranvir  feel really bad. ragini was looking back at him with no expressions what so ever.

'Aap yaha?' said ragini finally breaking the silence with anger in her voice

'ragini  woh...mujhe tumse baat karni thi' stammered Ranvir

'Lekin mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni' said ragini  turning back so that her back was facing Ranvir.

'ragini meri baat tho suno' he said

'Mujhe kuch nahi sun na, aap please yaha se chale jaye sir'

There was no response from Ranvir. raginis back was still towards the door where Ranvir  was standing. A few seconds later she heard the door close and sighed a relief thinking that Ranvir  had gone. But then she heard the door lock. She turned around and saw that Ranvir  was still there and he locked the door.

'Ye kya badtameezi hai?' asked ragini angrily

Ranvir didn't say anything, just looked at her silently and strode towards her slowly.

'Yeh kya kar rahe hai aap?' she again asked but this time worriedly.

Again Ranvir didn't respond, just kept increasing his steps towards ragini fixing his gaze on her face.Wink

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 3:47am | IP Logged
very nice part...update next part soon...

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moniluvskinshuk IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Woww Wowww Finally U updated Yupieee Dancing . But Only 1 chap ?? Itne dino ke baad update kiya n tht2 only 1 chapter n tht 2 u ended on such a suspense . Not at all Fair dear CryWink . Anyways Very very nice update , loved it . aww Ranvir truly was feeling very bad for Ragini .  n Hahaa Malti's reaction n her taking of autograph ROFL . mindblowing . Plzzz update soon , don't make us wait for so long . n do PM me whenevr u update . Big smile

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