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SUNSHINE (MG) Epilogue PAGE 136 (9th/Nov/2011) - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
👏hi shruti feeling good to see u online at this time ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 21

Few days later,

Mohinder came to visit Geetika and on his way he went to MK's cabin, on seeing him MK stood up and warmly welcomed him, MK ordered a juice for him.

MK: how are you Baba?

MH: very good

MK: you came all the way to meet Geetika?

MH: yes, it is her birthday today and I wanted to surprise her

MK: that's nice, wait I'll just see where she is?

And he called 5th floor and found that she has gone on some site

MK: Baba, she has gone out, you wait I'll send someone to fetch her

MH: it's ok just tell her that I were here, I will just go and wait for her at her flat

MK: ok I'll tell

MH: and two more things, first this is an invitation

Mk took the card which read engagement of my daughter, his heart skipped a beat: whose engagement?

MH: Pinky's with Adi

MK: oh (with a relief sound) that's good. At Nasik

MH: no, here at XYZ hotel, the marriage will be at Nasik, you will have to come

MK: yes I will but from Adi's side

MH: oh boy's side

Both laughed

MH: and thank you

MK: pardon

MH: thank you for buying KM or I should say thanks to the heaven that they gave us a chance to return what was always yours

MK: you knew

MH: from the very first day

MK: you never told

MH: I did not find it important, as you came in our life's as MK not my father in laws foster son

MK: I am sorry

MH: but I am not, look life has its own ways always remember tread lightly on it as it is a broken bridge with each heavy step you make it fragile

MK just nodded.

At the site

Geetika was checking certain details and also talking to Pinky on the cell

G: Pinky you are not getting it, I can't talk to him now

P: but why

G: see he is not in his senses, he will not understand what I will say

P: but you can try

G: I will but after some time

P: what good it will do?

G: see when we burn a hot vessel  holding it will do no good, we first have to cut off the fuel supply and then wait for it to cool we  can clean it after that, if we try to hold it we will end up burning our fingers, and to remove the burn marks we will have to scrub it with patience and give it time, same is with Maan, if I will try to convince him I will end up hurting myself, our relationship needs time and once he will cool he will understand and return

P: I am telling you, his company has made you stupid and his drifting away from you has made you mad

G: forget it, just tell me have you told Adi to get the sherwani

P: yes

Just then Pinky heard a sound and for few moments she only heard screams, she shouted GEETIKAAA, then after few seconds Geetika said in a shocked and shattered

G: Pinky, a bomb blast in the adjacent block

P: you alright (scared)

G: yes, just a few scratches (checking herself)

P: don't cut the phone I'll be there (panicking)

G: no you won't come here I'll try to get away from here, there may be more blasts (afraid)

P: Geetika what will you do (confused)

G: calm Pinky, I'll try to move to the safest place

And suddenly there was a explosive sound and the line went dead

Pinky rushed for help and unable to find Adi entered MK's cabin

P: sir, Geetika sir

MK: what happened?

P: sir bomb blast

MK: where?

P: site'. Geetika

MK: OMG

And he immediately turned on the TV and found that the area Geetika has gone had 3 serial blasts many have died

He rushed to his car leaving behind Pinky to go to her flat and see to Mohinder.


 
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part 22(I) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48023204 Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

another update wow treat ho gayi...

 
omg meee first to answer ...
 
let me enjoy that too...
 
 
 
happy very happy happy .. so now maan knows the truth ...
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is getting interesting...

i did not expect bomb blast...

seems like the story is nearing its end...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai

awesome episodes and great
and hope geet is fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow another update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
so glad maan read the letter..
omg i hope geet is ok
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome updates ...

shrutiii   u cant stop here ... nahiiinnn .. am gonna go bonkers out of curiosity .. plzz plzz plzzz ye cliff hanger khatam ker do .. pwweeejjj 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bomb blast...!!!

What's next...??

Will Maan be able to save Geet...??

Hume jaanna hai...toh plz jaldi updt kare...

Bye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
 
they wanted to give time to their relationship but what afte the blast