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SUNSHINE (MG) Epilogue PAGE 136 (9th/Nov/2011) (Page 101)

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Part 27

She put her hands on her ears to block any sound but still she heard a creaking sound as if someone was opening a door, she turned and saw him coming she closed her eyes and turned to avoid him, then she heard him say

M: Geet turn around

G: no

M: Geet please for once look at me

G: no

M: I'll go back

G: who has stopped you?

M: so you too realized that ours is a mismatch, good

G: (turned abruptly) no ours is not a mismatch

M: Geet did you look around, I had the premises cleaned up

G: (saw around, everything was perfect)

M: I also had KM painted

G: (look at the building and found that it was ready for use)

M: I had it done for you

G: why

M: now that us is just a dream, you will soon settle down

G: no

M: do come and live here with your husband

G: I am not going to marry anyone

M: you will soon find someone

G: no

M: your heart will find him

G: no (covering her ears)

M: will you marry me?

G: no

M: ok then I shall leave (he turned to leave)

G: (realizing what she said screamed): Maan, MAAN, I will marry you, please wait

She ran behind his leaving form which disappeared in thin air

She twisted her ankle and fell down; she tried to stand up but fainted.

She opened her eyes to find herself in an alien room, she looked around with confusion and then tried to stand up, she found that her ankle was secured by a crap bandage, she wondered where she was, just then Pinky entered

P: Geetika, stoop dear you will hurt your ankle

G: where am I?

P: in bed resting, you have fainted do you remember

G: yes, but that was at KM

P: yes, now wait let me bring you some soup

G: Pinky I am not hungry

P: you wait, and don't move

After some time she returned with a bowl of soup

P: have it

G: I will not

P: Geetika don't be stupid, have it than you need to take medicine

G: no

P: ok I know who can feed you

She went out and Mr. Handa came in,

MH: Geetika what is this have this soup and then you will have dinner, Pinky is just bringing the tray

G: Baba, where am I?

MH: in your room

G: but this is not my room

MH: first drink this then I'll tell

She quietly drank the soup, Pinky came in

MH: where is the dinner?

P: I have served everything in the dining hall

MH: but how will she go (smiled) ok I know who will carry her (And he called) come and take her to the dining hall

MK entered the room as Mohinder and Pinky left

MH: don't take long

G: sir

M: Geet, come lets have some dinner, doctor said you need to be pampered you are almost starving since so many days

G: you did not go?

M: where?

G: with Dev sir

M: but I am with Dev

G: he is here

M: yes

Then he lifted her in his arms and carried her to the dining hall, Dev was there

D: how are you Geetika?

G: fine

D: but you don't look fine, it's his entire mistake (punched MK)

G: you did not go

D: no, how could I when my wife is here, oh let me introduce, she is Naintara my wife, NT she is Geetika

NT: so you are the lucky one, (hugged Geetika)

G: hello madam

NT: come on you can call me NT

G: they are your kids? (pointing at 2 kids)

NT: yes, she is Arohi and he is Arjun

AA (together); hello

G: hello

During the dinner Geetika was very confused, everyone was happy, MK was smiling and looking at her now and then. She was wondering where she is and how did she came here, who brought her here.

After dinner MK lifted her again and took her to the room, he helped her settle in bed and as he was leaving she tucked his shirt he turned to look and she said

G: what is all this?

M: nothing

G: who brought me here?

M: I

G: but you were not there

M: ???

G: when I fainted you were not around

M: yes, but when I came I found you fainted

G: and where I am at present?

M: in KM

G:  you brought me in?

M: just like a groom brings his bride, the only difference was that you were unconscious

G: you came back for me

M: um

G: where has that age difference thing go?

M: (looked shocked) I will be ok if you deny

G: this is not my question of denying, this is my right t know, (she grabbed his collar) what do you think I am? A doll, you can do whatever you feel is right, one day you say Geet will you marry me, the other day you say you hate me, then you say Geet don't resign I'll try, then you think about running away, then you make me mad in your love, Maan I am tired, what is the guarantee that you will not leave me now?

She cried keeping her head on his chest and hitting him with her fist, he did not say anything but let her calm down. Gradually she was calm but was still crying, he hugged her and patted her back. Finally she was quite and she demanded

G: KISS ME!


hey sweet readers here I am with a really big update

hope you all  like it I want big big big comments

next update will be on my own imagination, as for DK it finishes here

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part 28 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1794363&TPN=123&#48462556


Edited by smj1977.shruti - 02 November 2011 at 2:27am

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Good Job Graphics
Awesome update
so much Hallucinations of Geet...
i thought may be the last one is for real
but it wasnt
thankGod Maan got some senses back...
wow he carried her to dining table
and then back to room...
Geet should 've given him 2-3 tight punches
 for playing i love you and i cant love you game
ooo asking a kiss
Continue soon
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oh wait dear... i reserved the first place... in MY style...Wink

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phewww wo vapas  agaya...nahi tho meinAngry...loved it...eagerly waiting fo rthe next part ...do continue soon..

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oh wait dear... i reserved the first place... in MY style...Wink

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