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Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 (Page 34)

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Originally posted by kritzzz

when will you update>???

sorry i will update tomrrow
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Me crying I am trying to post the update it isn't working. Yesterday my net was shut down and now this so unfairCryCry
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She came home all super happy first St.louis won and then a Valentine party she was super excited.

But then it came in her my what should I wear. She opened her cupboard and looked around she didn't saw anything good. And she thought think of Rey prop... she started blush thinking just about getting proposed by Rey on Valentines day.

She got an idea, she would go shopping tomorrow and buy her a new dress.

She took her night clothes and went in the bathroom and changed.

She came out and saw a packet lying on her bed. She got up to it took it. She looked at it. It had a note which said

To the most beautiful girl in the world.

Kriya started to blush like anything, just like a newly wed bride who was waiting for her husband.

She opened the packet and saw a beautiful red gown

Night Moves 6235 Dress NM-6235

with a matching diamond earrings and bracelet

OMG its beautiful Kriya thought , when it struck her that this was real diamonds how can she accept these from Rey? No! She will give him back it tomorrow.

She went to sleep.

Next day she woke looked at her dress and jewelry which Rey had given her, she went in the bathroom to take a shower as the party was today and she didn't need to go and buy a dress she thought take a bit longer shower. And make her look extra beautiful. She was gonna do all the girly stuff today. Which she normally never did.

She came out and was busy in her own that she didn't see Rey. She trowed her towel on the bed but it hit Rey instead, she went up to the mirror started making her hair. When she saw Rey. And screamed.

She turned around and said tum I mean aap yahan kya khare hain?

Rey was trying get her calm her down, his hyper GIRLFRIEND. Girlfriend he thought and smiled. He didn't her shut up, so he kissed her. (Amu = Amina:- he he he he, itni jaldi lip lock chi chi abh who dono official couple bhi nahi bane hain)

He kissed her on her cheek.

(Amu:- How many is after me with chuttis and chappals, and to count all the tomatoes and egg)

She just she became quiet, and had her mouth open. Rey thought wah I need to do this more often, she keep quiet atleast.

R:- Kriya I was just here to invite you as my Valentine on the valentines party.

He got down on his knees and asked her.

R:- will you be my Valentine to night? Which she she nodded her head.

R:- What I didn't hear anything.

K:- Yes, Kriya mumbled little shy.

R:- Kriya could you say it a bit louder I don't hear you.

Kriya sighed and yelled YES!!

R:- Yeh huoi na baat. OK I will pick you up at 8 OK?

She nodded.

Rey was about to go, when it struck her.

K:- Rey just a min. she got up to her desk took the bracelet and the earrings and gave it to him, Rey looked confused at her.

K:- Rey I can't take this gift.

R:- Why don't you like it? I can get you something else if you don't like it.

K:- No, no Rey I loved it but its a very very very expensive gift I can't take it.

Rey gave her a meaningful and said:

R:- This is yours and I don't want them back.

K:- But its a to expensive gift I can't take it.

R:- Look Kriya I brought them for you and I will not take them back as its a gift from my side. I really wanna see you in them, wont you wear it for me?

She said Yes.

R:- That's a good girl. BTW where is your mom?

K:- She had to go too Pune for some reason I haven't met her either after the competition. Kriya said looking really sad.

R:- Don't worry she will be back soon.

Precap:- same


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just read all the parts and just one word WOW
you left me speechless...

do pm me for the next part

Edited by Eyesfriendly - 26 February 2012 at 12:07am
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