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Dancing With Your Love Chapter 22 pg 106 4/1 (Page 21)

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Originally posted by VirManandJeeVi

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nyc 1,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i m so so so happy  kriya cn walk againSmileSmile,,,,ur ff is osm i luv itSmileSmile
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Rey got really excited. And said loud:

R:- REALLY!!!!!!

A:- Rey maybe. I can't say anything before I have make her check up. Which I will make tomorrow. So be here on tomorrow. And please don't tell Kriya anything right now because. I don't want to give her false hope.

That made Rey come back to earth. He nodded and went out.

Kriya saw Rey coming out, looked sad but she could see a bit of happiness in his eyes which he was trying to hide.

K:- Kya hua?

R:- Nothing, Should we go home now?

Kriya nodded. Rey dropped Kriya home. After that he went to his favorite place which he usually goes when he is really happy. No one known of this place it was his secret place.

It was a beach which looked like no one came there. He sat there fro long and just thought about maybe Kriya actually start walk again.

He sat there for long when it struck him he hadn't told the gang about it. He called whole gang on call conference . All got angry at him.

VIS:- Dude itni raat ko phone karne ki kya zarrot thi. We could have talked in college tomrrow.

All agreed with Vishaka.

And started cribbing. The girls except Vishaka was cribbing about that there beauty sleep got disturb. Vicky was complaining that his dream about his deewani got disturb. All kept cribbing intill Rey shouted

R:- SHUT UP GUYS!!!!!.

Which made everyone shut up.

R:- What do you think I will call you all so late, don't you think I have something better to do? I have something important to tell you.

SH:- Shoot!

Rey told them about everything which happened after they left. (Except the part he was looking at Kriya and got the cut)

Vi:- But Rey tumhe chot kese lagi?

R: Ah..Ah, woh...haan I was looking at the view from the window I got so lost in it. Aur dekha nahi aur haat kat gaya.

Swayam thought its a good moment to tease Rey. Because he and Vicky got which view he was talking about.

SW:- Rey view itna achha tha?

Vicky got what Swayam was doing and thought help him.

V:- Haan Rey itna acha tha. Kal mujhe bhi dekhna pardega.

Rey got what they where doing and thought:

R:- Acha meri hi tang kitch rahi hoon abh dekho.

R(To all, specially to Neha and Sharon):- Haan itna acha tha. Wasie whai neche ek beach bhi hain. Maine dekha ki waha phe bahout hi HOT boys ate hain. With all sixs packs and all.

Which made Swayam and Vicky cough

R:- Guys paani pelo gala tikh hojaynga.

A:- tiya tum tapas toint ta sake hain

(Kya hum wapas point phe a sake hain)

R:- Haan, aur Kriya mujhe forcefully hospital lagiye. Whan DR. Malik the. Unhone meri haat dekha. Maine unhe sab batya. He told me, ke Kriya maybe can start walking again.

All: SACHI??

R:HAAN. But he said maybe, He need to do her check up. Which is tomorrow.

NE: Guys pray we need all to do.

They discussed about other things too then the gang went to sleep. And Rey went home.

Next morning:

The door bell rang at Kriya's home, Smritti wondered how could so early in the morning. When she opened the door, it was a guys standing with flowers covered his face. It was a large basket with white and red roses.

SM:- Excuse me, but I think you are wrong address. I haven't order this flower.

P:- yeah but I have brought them specially for you. Please accept them and this ring

Smritti got shocked see the ring, and got angry

SM:- who the hell are you. She took the basket from the persons hand and saw non other than Rey.

Rey gave her a naughty smile.

Smritti crossed her arms around her chest, And looked with a meaning full look at Rey.

Rey went fast on he knees and said:

R:- Please please please marry me. And put the ring farrowed.

Smritti took a hold of Rey's ear and lifted up from the floor

R:- ouch ouch, Aunty dhard hoon raha hain, chorriye na.

SM:- Yeh sab kya tha. She said leaving his ear.

R:- Kuch nahi, practice kar raha tha.

SM:- Accha kisko propose karne ka irada hain?

Rey made a sign and told her bye his finger to come closer. Which Smritti did.

Rey:- Aapki beti ko. Issilye aap phe test kara raha tha ke yeh work karega ke nahi. Kya hai na ke woh joiner laxmi bhai hain na toh chance nahi lena chata tha. And he winked at her.

Which made a Smritti shocked. And slapped him on his back. And said:

SM:- Badmash

R:- Ouch aunty kitna maar rengi aap mujhe?

SM:- Jab tak aap sudar nahi chate.

R:- Woh tho khabi nahi hoga. And gave her his beautiful smile

(Amina:- Which makes all of us die)

R: wasie aapka irada mujhe yahi bahar kade reh kar baat karne wali hain?

SM:- Oh sorry andar ajao. She led him into the kitchen where he sat and Smritti was cooking breakfast.

R:- Aap ki beti kaha hain?

SM:- So rahi hain.

R:- Abi tak?

SM:- haan, woh raat bahar soiye nahi hain.

R:- She told you something?

SM.- No she didn't but I know, kyun ki main raat ko uthi hoon usko dekh ne ke liye. Who mujhe zyada kuch nahi batai. Kuyn ki usko daar hain ke main kamzzor par jaoungi. Like dance.

Which made make Rey almost fall from the chair.

SM:- It isn't that I don't know why she was coming late home. What she's doing college and I even know who helped her make her team.

This time made Rey cough his water he was drinking.

Smritti raised her eyebrows. Which replied with a shyly smile.

R:- Aa..aap...Aap ko kaise pata?

SM:- he is Ravi for me and RDX sir for you guys.

R:- Aap aur RDX ek dusre ko jante hain?

SM:- Very well, my teacher in my college, The person which I was most close to, Its her son. When I came to college one day I met him and we talked when I got to know that it her son. I was really happy about. And asked him to have his eye on Kriya and tell me everything.

R.- Par apko kese pata ke maine Kriya ko help kiya tha?

SM:- Ravi usne kuch students kaha tha to have a eye on Kriya. Isilye mujhe pata hain yeh sab.

Rey nodded.

R:- Aunty please usko yeh mat bata na keh maine uski team karne main madad kiya tha.

SM:- Aur aap usko kuch nahi batayinge yeh sab ke bare main.

Both agreed.

When it struck Rey the main reason to be here.

R:- Aunty joh baat keh ne aya tha wahi aapko nahi kahi.

He told him about all which happened yesterday.

Smritti got really happy

SM:- Rey yeh sach hain? Kya sach main Kriya chal payeng gi?

R:- Dr ne kaha ke yeh ho sakta hain. Par aaj jhab Kriya check up karne jaingi tab pata chale ga. Par aap usko kuch ahi batinge.

SM:- Haan nahi batougi.

R:- Wasie aunty aap ko sach main Kriya ke dance luch problem nahi hain

SM:- Aisa maine khab kaha mujhe abhi bhi probklem hain. Par main intezzar karahi hoon khab mujhe ake bataingi yeh sab ke bare main. Aur red handed pakar jane ki.

She smiled at him.

SM:- Wasie thank god ke tum agye

R:- Kyun?

SM:- Kyunki mujhe office jaldi janna hain. Par Kriya ke wajase nahi ja phati. Mera bahot kam pending hain. Please aap Kriya ko college le jange?

R:- Aunty yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hain ofcourse.

SM:- OK toh main nikal thi hoon. Bye.

R:- Bye.

Smritti took her bag and went away. Mean while Rey sat still in the kitchen, When the home phone rang.

R:- Hello

SM:- Rey beta, main khena bhool gaiye tumhe Kriya ko utana paredga.

R:- OK

Rey went to Kriya's room. And went in he came in and saw her sleeping on her bed. She looked like an angle. He thought. Even when she is sleeping she looks out of this world this girl don't stop surprising me.

He moved to her and genitally tried to wake her up. But she didn't

R:- Kriya wake up.

K:- Rey let me sleep na please stop disturbing me. She said sleepy

He smiled at her, and shacked his head.

R:- Kriya wake up, deko suba ho gaiy hain

K:- Rey aap jaye na sone dijye mujhe. After awhile she realized that Rey was in her room near her bed. And she was only in track and shorts and in front of him.

She just pulled up herself and covered herself with the blanket.

K:- Rey..aap.aap yahan?

R:. Haan, woh kya haina main tumhe miss karha tah to maine socha ke main ajo.

K: Maa..Maa...Maa khar phe hain aap jao yahan se.

R:- Aunty khar phe nahi hain who office ja cuki hain aur aapki responsibility mujhe phe chora hain.

K:- KYA??

R:- Haan. Koi problem hain?

K:- Nahi.

R:- toh jaliye naa lije tab tak main nashata bana tha hoon.

Rey was about to go, when he remebered that Kriya couldn't walk.

So he walked back to her and lifted her up from the bed. Then he understood why she covered herself.

Kriya got really shocked when Rey lifted her up from the bed just like that. She got little self conscious too. But when she saw Rey not looking at her, she felt little better. He looked down at her and she raised her eyebrows he pointed on the door. Which was closed. She nodded and opened the door. He placed her on a chair. Kissed her on her cheek and went out.

He leaved Kriya dumstruck.


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